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khoo-e-mohabbat...................ek nazm -
20th April 2005, 10:53 AM
Ek baar phir saare dostoN ko Safiya ka pyaar bhara salaam,
umeed haiy ki humaari ghazaloN ki tarah humaari ye adna si nazm bhi aapke dil me jagah paayegi, aapki aaraa ka intezaar rahega.................... "tumhaari aankhon me vo halka sa paani tumhaare hotoN ki vo thartharaahat vo maathe pe thande paseene ki boonde kapkapaati huvi rooh ki garm aanhe aur hoton pe halqi si ek muskurahat ey humdard mere, ey mere maseeha ye mera weham hai ya khoo-e-mohabbat yun mujhko tasalli ke alfaaz na do yun awaaz na do, koi raaz na do beekhre huve mere in soorO ko toota huva koi saaz na do ke anjaam tak jisko laana ho mushkil naye ek fasaane ko aaghaaz na do bohot ghum chupe hai in khamoshiyon me ajab lutf hai gehree tanhaiyon me sannaatoN me mere gunjti hai jo aahat ye mera weham hai ya khoo-e-mohabbat" Safiya... |
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20th April 2005, 11:10 AM
Salaam Safiya Ji,
Absolutely beautiful. Pyar ka iqraar karne se pehle shayad har bande ka yahi haal hua karta hai  (ya phir har miya ka apni biwi se darna bhi shayad aisey hi kuch hota hai )Kaafi pyaari lagi aapki yeh nazm. Humesha ki tarha ek bohot hi umda kalaam jo behud pasand aaya. Itne umda kalaam ke liye humari daad qabool kare aur bas uhi likhte rahe. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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20th April 2005, 11:35 AM
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Aapki taareef sun kar khushi bhi huvi aur hansee bhi aayee, ji haan shuroo ke kuch misre vakai is raay ke mustahik hain. taareef ki liya tah-e-dil se shukriya, aap yunhi paDte rahen taareefen karten rahen , hum yunhi likhte rahenge.......... aapki mamnoon SAFIYA... |
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20th April 2005, 07:01 PM
hi safia
aap muje ek bbat btoge aap itni acchi ghazale kha se leker aate ho aap to bilkul ek mahfil banadete ho shayri.com aapke aane se ab mafhil ki trah lagti hai jhaan aapke sare dost baithe hai aur aap ghazal pesh ker rahe ho................ bye kush |
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21st April 2005, 09:54 AM
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aapne to dil khush kar diya, waah,........... jeyse ghazal , nazm aur shayri ke liye har shayer ka ek andaaz hota haiy, veyse hi taareef karne waalon ka bhi sabka apna alagh andaaz hota haiy. jis mehfil me aap jeyse qadardaan maojood hoN shayer bhi vahin apna kalaam pesh karne me khushi mehsoos karten hain. hum to ek adna se shayer thehre, mehfil sunne waalon se sajti haiy. ye nazm aur isse pehle jo ghazalen humne yahaan pesh kee, vo sabhi humaari hi kalam aur humaare hi dil ka afsaana haiy. Aap sab ki zarra nawaazi ke aap hume itni izzat baqshteN hain..... aapki mamnoon SAFIYA... |
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21st April 2005, 10:26 AM
ADAAB SAFIYA JI :
ManZiloN Ke NiShaN TuJhe YuN Na DiKhaYi DenGe PaaoN Ke ChaaLe Hi ManZiL Ki GaWaahi DenGe Hai TuJhe AaDat-E- WaFa To WaFa KaR Ke BhooL Ja DuNiYa WaLe To TuJhe RuSwaaYi DenGe Roz Roz MilNe Se KuCh QaDaR - O- QeeMat Nahi Rehti KaR YaQeeN WaRNa EhBaaB TeRe DiKha Hi DenGe DuShMaNi Ki MeRe MuQaBil Koi JaGah Hi Nahi KuCh SaZa DeiN Na DeiN NaZRoN Se GiRa Hi DenGe AnDaaZ Un Ka AjaB Hai TanHaYi MaiN " AsGheR " NaaM Likh KaR HaTheLi Se TeRa MiTa Hi DenGe........................ leave, But not our hearts. |
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