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Originally Posted by Sweet_Rain
Dhaval,
Aapki yeh gazhal bahaut hi pyari lagi...bahaut khoobsoorat. Aapka pyar bahauta ache se dikhayi de raha hai ismai. I am sure jinke liye aapne likhi hai oonhe behad pasand aayi hogi. Aapne zaroor sunayi hogi apni wife ko.
yeh kuch lines dil ko chu gayi bahaut...
humsafar mi’re ho yaa raaheN
soch kar bataa do tum kyaa ho
dhaDkaneN ho mere dil ki tum
yaa mi’raa Khudaa ho tum kyaa ho
Aise hi pyar bhara achha achha likhte rahiye aur aapko jaldi jaldi padhne ka mauka dete rahiye.
Khayal rakhiye!!
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Jiyaa
Namaste kem chho
Ghazal ke pyaar bhare ehsaason ko samjhaa khushii huii jee jaan sunaaii th aur bahot pasand bhee aayii
Bas aap aise hi padhte rahiye..likhte rahege aage bhee aise... aur har koshish par paani puri free free free
Khush raho..apnaa khayaal rakho
Aapka
Dhaval