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Sar-E-Bazar Jalti-Bujhti Aas Hu Main...! - 5th March 2010, 02:54 PM
Ruke Jazbaat Ki Adhuri Aas Hu Main
Meethi Si Ek Pyaas Hu Main

Jo Dard Lafzon Se Bayaa Na Ho
Uss Khayalat Ke Aas-Paas Hu Main

Paimane Se Damaan Per Chhalki
Kisi Ke Honton Ki Pyaas Hu Main

Begano Ki Mehfil Me
Apna Sa Liye Ehsaas Hu Main

Na Hoke Kisi Apne Ki
Mehfil Me Kisi Ki Khaas Hu Main

Apne Hi Wajood Ko Dhoonti
Sar-E-Bazar Jalti-Bujhti Aas Hu Main


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Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye

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Ruke Jazbaat Ki Adhuri Aas Hu Main
Meethi Si Ek Pyaas Hu Main

Jo Dard Lafzon Se Bayaa Na Ho
Uss Khayalat Ke Aas-Paas Hu Main

Paimane Se Damaan Per Chhalki
Kisi Ke Honton Ki Pyaas Hu Main

Begano Ki Mehfil Me
Apna Sa Liye Ehsaas Hu Main

Na Hoke Kisi Apne Ki
Mehfil Me Kisi Ki Khaas Hu Main

Apne Hi Wajood Ko Dhoonti
Sar-E-Bazar Jalti-Bujhti Aas Hu Main

Radhika jii

bade hi khoobsurat ehsas hain aapke, accha prayas hai, aur mujhe yakeen hai yadi aap mehnat karti rahin to aage aur behtar likh payengii

bankii merii daad ........ aur badhaii

Apne Hi Wajood Ko Dhoonti
Sar-E-Bazar Jalti-Bujhti Aas Hu Main

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Ruke Jazbaat Ki Adhuri Aas Hu Main
Meethi Si Ek Pyaas Hu Main

Jo Dard Lafzon Se Bayaa Na Ho
Uss Khayalat Ke Aas-Paas Hu Main

Paimane Se Damaan Per Chhalki
Kisi Ke Honton Ki Pyaas Hu Main

Begano Ki Mehfil Me
Apna Sa Liye Ehsaas Hu Main

Na Hoke Kisi Apne Ki
Mehfil Me Kisi Ki Khaas Hu Main

Apne Hi Wajood Ko Dhoonti
Sar-E-Bazar Jalti-Bujhti Aas Hu Main
radhika jee
radhe radhe

khoobsoorat ahsaas..achha laga padhkar...aise hi likhti raho

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5th March 2010, 06:12 PM
Jo Dard Lafzon Se Bayaa Na Ho
Uss Khayalat Ke Aas-Paas Hu Main


Apne Hi Wajood Ko Dhoonti
Sar-E-Bazar Jalti-Bujhti Aas Hu Main

Nice One.....Radhika...
Likhte rahen...

dil se daad hazir hai

khush rahen..
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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5th March 2010, 07:21 PM
Achcha hai.....pehle se bohat bohat behtar peshkash hai......padhkar bohat khushi hui.

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Achcha hai.....pehle se bohat bohat behtar peshkash hai......padhkar bohat khushi hui.
Ji....Thanks.................................


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Ruke Jazbaat Ki Adhuri Aas Hu Main
Meethi Si Ek Pyaas Hu Main

Jo Dard Lafzon Se Bayaa Na Ho
Uss Khayalat Ke Aas-Paas Hu Main

Paimane Se Damaan Per Chhalki
Kisi Ke Honton Ki Pyaas Hu Main

Begano Ki Mehfil Me
Apna Sa Liye Ehsaas Hu Main

Na Hoke Kisi Apne Ki
Mehfil Me Kisi Ki Khaas Hu Main

Apne Hi Wajood Ko Dhoonti
Sar-E-Bazar Jalti-Bujhti Aas Hu Main
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Radhikaji, You wrote very well. Keep writing with a smile

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Radhika Jee Aadaab!

Aapki yeh koshsih bahut pur asar aur behad achchi lagi,
sabhi ashar achche hai per yeh do ashar behad umda lage........

Jo Dard Lafzon Se Bayaa Na Ho
Uss Khayalat Ke Aas-Paas Hu Main

Paimane Se Damaan Per Chhalki
Kisi Ke Honton Ki Pyaas Hu Main



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bade hi khoobsurat ehsas hain aapke, accha prayas hai, aur mujhe yakeen hai yadi aap mehnat karti rahin to aage aur behtar likh payengii

bankii merii daad ........ aur badhaii

Apne Hi Wajood Ko Dhoonti
Sar-E-Bazar Jalti-Bujhti Aas Hu Main

add +++ points.

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radhika jee
radhe radhe

khoobsoorat ahsaas..achha laga padhkar...aise hi likhti raho
Ji Shukriya......................................


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Radhika Jee Aadaab!

Aapki yeh koshsih bahut pur asar aur behad achchi lagi,
sabhi ashar achche hai per yeh do ashar behad umda lage........

Jo Dard Lafzon Se Bayaa Na Ho
Uss Khayalat Ke Aas-Paas Hu Main

Paimane Se Damaan Per Chhalki
Kisi Ke Honton Ki Pyaas Hu Main



Daad kabool kijiye......
Koshish jari rakhiye...
Khush rhaiye..
Khuda Hafez....
ji shukriya...................kalam ko pasand kerne ka.


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Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
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Radhika Jee Aadaab!

Aapki yeh koshsih bahut pur asar aur behad achchi lagi,
sabhi ashar achche hai per yeh do ashar behad umda lage........

Jo Dard Lafzon Se Bayaa Na Ho
Uss Khayalat Ke Aas-Paas Hu Main

Paimane Se Damaan Per Chhalki
Kisi Ke Honton Ki Pyaas Hu Main



Daad kabool kijiye......
Koshish jari rakhiye...
Khush rhaiye..
Khuda Hafez....
Ji shukriyaa......aapka kalam ko pasand karne ka


Radhika

Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
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Radhika ji, You wrote very well. Keep writing with a smile

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very nice radhika ji...
keep writing..

ji thanks for appricate..................


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17th March 2010, 08:56 AM
Begaano Ki Mehfil Me
Apna Sa Liye Ehsaas Hu Main

Na Hoke Kisi Apne Ki
Mehfil Me Kisi Ki Khaas Hu Main

Apne Hi Wajood Ko Dhoonti
Sar-E-Bazar Jalti-Bujhti Aas Hu Main

Radhika Jii,,

Wow, it's just an out-standing creation.
I liked every verse a lot...

Above quoted verses was mind-blowing...

Keep writing,,

Regardz,,

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very nice radhika ji...
keep writing..

ji shukriya.............................


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Radhika Jii,,

Wow, it's just an out-standing creation.
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Above quoted verses was mind-blowing...

Keep writing,,

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bahut acche.........
alfaaz apke paas hai.......aur bayani ka bhi base hai......
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likhte rahiye
very poetic indeed

kacchi hi sahi kam na kam poetry to lagti hai.......varna kuch log ghazal ke bahaane essay ya anecdotes suna dete hai


ji bhaut bhaut shukriya.......................................... ..


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Nice One.....Radhika...
Likhte rahen...

dil se daad hazir hai

khush rahen..
apna khayal rakhen...

duaaon ke saath....

ji bhaut bhaut shukriya.............................


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aaj phir se padha inn ehsaason ko toh dil ko chhuu gaye ... behtreen poetry me se ek hai ..... ek baar dubara se mubarakbaad inta achcha likhne ke liye ..

yuhi likhti rahiye .......

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Radhika Ji ... Dard ko jis andaaz se bayaan kiya hai aap ne .... Dard bhi dil chhu gayaa .. aur aap ka andaaze bayaan bhi ... Duaa yahi hai ke dard o gum aap se dur rahe .. aur aap sadaa hasati muskuraati rahe ... yun hi likhati rahiye

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