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Bas ilzaam milega.. - 8th January 2009, 11:12 AM
Ek sawaal jo tumse puchu... kya jawab milega ?
Mere tumhare is rishte ka... kya koi naam milega ?
Durr tak jo chalna chahu... kya saath milega ?
Janti hu kuch mile na mile... haan.. Ilzaam milega...

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Ek sawaal jo tumse puchu... kya jawab milega ?
Mere tumhare is rishte ka... kya koi naam milega ?
Durr tak jo chalna chahu... kya saath milega ?
Janti hu kuch mile na mile... haan.. Ilzaam milega...
sahi farmaaya hai aap ne...kuchh mil e na mile ilzaam zaruur milegaa... par mere khayaal se kuchh rishte benaam hi achchhe hote hai.n, unhe naam dene ki koii zaruurat nahii hotii, diqqat tabhi aata hai jab insaan unhe naam dene ki koshish karta hai.. achchhii baat kahi hai aap ne.. likhti rahe.n yuu.n hii...

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8th January 2009, 10:22 PM
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Ek sawaal jo tumse puchu... kya jawab milega ?
Mere tumhare is rishte ka... kya koi naam milega ?
Durr tak jo chalna chahu... kya saath milega ?
Janti hu kuch mile na mile... haan.. Ilzaam milega...

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8th January 2009, 10:32 PM
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Ek sawaal jo tumse puchu... kya jawab milega ?
Mere tumhare is rishte ka... kya koi naam milega ?
Durr tak jo chalna chahu... kya saath milega ?
Janti hu kuch mile na mile... haan.. Ilzaam milega...
Ye anokhee pehli jo tune poochi hai sabse, main uska jawaab laya hu
Dheron khushiya ho tere aanchal mein aanchal, duayein behisaab laya hu
Ek baar tu kehkar dekh, har kadam par saath nibhaunga
Jis phool par the sabse zyada bhawre, gul se wahi gulaab laya hu

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9th January 2009, 04:24 PM
hi amit...
ur reply was 2 gud...
it made me think of 1 more reply to it...

tere is sawaal ka jawaab kaise du
apni majbur khamoshi ko aawaz kaise du
tune to mujhse sara jahan puch liya
lafzon mein tujhko apne jazbaat kaise du...

but urs was the best !!!

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hi amit...
ur reply was 2 gud...
it made me think of 1 more reply to it...

tere is sawaal ka jawaab kaise du
apni majbur khamoshi ko aawaz kaise du
tune to mujhse sara jahan puch liya
lafzon mein tujhko apne jazbaat kaise du...

but urs was the best !!!
Hi Aanchal. Thanks for appreciating. Trust me, maine sirf jo mehsus kiye, likha.

Lafzon mein bayan nahi kiye jaate jazbaat
Aur karna bhi chahe koi toh samajhna sauda hai
Keh jaati hai sab kuch dil ki dhadkan
Jo na sun sake koi toh samajhna dhokha hai

Mujhe tere alfaazon ki zaroorat nahin
Teri khamoshi har afsana sunati hai
Apni majboori kehke ise sharminda na kar
Yeh aawaz khuda ka taaj hilati hai

Apni dosti ka vaasta deke tujhse, bas itni farmaish karta hai
"Aanchal" "Ehsaas" tujhse sirf muskurahat ki guzarish karta hai...

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12th January 2009, 11:45 PM
anchal ji sahi baat kahi hai ilazaam milna asan hai

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Ek sawaal jo tumse puchu... kya jawab milega ?
Mere tumhare is rishte ka... kya koi naam milega ?
Durr tak jo chalna chahu... kya saath milega ?
Janti hu kuch mile na mile... haan.. Ilzaam milega...

lafjo se nhi.. bus ankhon se jawaab milega..
rishta na banao kisi se.. her rista badnaam milega..
kuch dur chalkar dekho.. har koi baimaan milega.
diljala kya ilzaam dega kisiko.. bus sabko apna salaam milega..
   
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kaashh..... - 18th January 2009, 08:20 AM
Ilzaam ke dar se Kadam yun jo theher gaye.
Hum khade reh gaye Rahon me,
Wo aye v aur Chale v gaye Kisi aur k Sang.
Ab sochte hen hum,Ilzaam de v to Kisko,
Wo, Jo kisi aur ke ho gaye,
Ya Un Kadmo ko,Ya fir Us Dil ko,
Jo Anzam se pehle Anzam se Dar Gaye.....
   
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18th January 2009, 08:37 PM
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Ek sawaal jo tumse puchu... kya jawab milega ?
Mere tumhare is rishte ka... kya koi naam milega ?
Durr tak jo chalna chahu... kya saath milega ?
Janti hu kuch mile na mile... haan.. Ilzaam milega...


Aanchal jii namaskaar...........aapke sawaal dil ko hilla gaye, par ek sawaal ka jawaab dena chahuNgi main ki, kuch rishte benaam hi rah jayeN to behtar hai, kai baar en rishto.n ko naam dene ki koshish karte hue hum rishta hi kho detey haiN to behtar hai ki rishta benaam rahe par rishta rah jaye

god bless u dear

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23rd January 2009, 12:34 PM
well well well guys......
in 4 lines ko itna acha response milega..neva thot..
thank u every1...mere sawaal ka jawaab dene k liye

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