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Khud se hi khafa...... - 15th November 2011, 10:27 AM

Kya bataun main baat gujre hue lamhaat ki,
Har ek jazbaat dil me dafan ho ke reh gaya...

Tez dhoop me odhaya tha jo dupatta usne,
Aaj wohi dupatta mera kafan ho ke reh gaya...

Jis mohabbat par kabhi naaz tha mujh ko,
Aaj wohi pyar dil me ek jalan ho ke reh gaya...


Mehsoos hota hai aaj sab bhot khush hai mujhse,
Najaane kyun khud se khafa "GAGAN" ho ke reh gaya...


Roz mat kaha karo ke bhula dungi tumhe ,
Naa hum itne aam hain naa tumhare bas ki baat hai...

   
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15th November 2011, 11:02 AM

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Kya bataun main baat gujre hue lamhaat ki,
Har ek jazbaat dil me dafan ho ke reh gaya...

Tez dhoop me odhaya tha jo dupatta usne,
Aaj wohi dupatta mera kafan ho ke reh gaya...

Jis mohabbat par kabhi naaz tha mujh ko,
Aaj wohi pyar dil me ek jalan ho ke reh gaya...


Mehsoos hota hai aaj sab bhot khush hai mujhse,
Najaane kyun khud se khafa "GAGAN" ho ke reh gaya...
Welcome here gagan sahab.. bahut acha lagaa.... khyal saaaf byaan huyeN hai....

bas ek baat zazbaat plural hai .... so .. ho ke rah gaaa radeef ke sath nahi nibhaegaa

acha laga aapko padhnaa....aajkal naya padhne ko mil raha hai

.. likhte raheN... humse share karte raheN

repss meri taraf se
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15th November 2011, 07:11 PM

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Kya bataun main baat gujre hue lamhaat ki,
Har ek jazbaat dil me dafan ho ke reh gaya...

Tez dhoop me odhaya tha jo dupatta usne,
Aaj wohi dupatta mera kafan ho ke reh gaya...

Jis mohabbat par kabhi naaz tha mujh ko,
Aaj wohi pyar dil me ek jalan ho ke reh gaya...


Mehsoos hota hai aaj sab bhot khush hai mujhse,
Najaane kyun khud se khafa "GAGAN" ho ke reh gaya...
Good One ... ! Khoobsurat Ehsaasaat Hue !

Mubaaraqbaad !!!

Likhte RaheN Aur Aaate RaheN Aage Bhii ... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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18th November 2011, 09:33 AM

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Welcome here gagan sahab.. bahut acha lagaa.... khyal saaaf byaan huyeN hai....

bas ek baat zazbaat plural hai .... so .. ho ke rah gaaa radeef ke sath nahi nibhaegaa

acha laga aapko padhnaa....aajkal naya padhne ko mil raha hai

.. likhte raheN... humse share karte raheN

repss meri taraf se
Thanks a lot.....aap sab ke sath rahunga to jaldi hi sikh jaunga...bas issi tarah honsla badate rahiye...


Roz mat kaha karo ke bhula dungi tumhe ,
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18th November 2011, 09:35 AM

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Good One ... ! Khoobsurat Ehsaasaat Hue !

Mubaaraqbaad !!!

Likhte RaheN Aur Aaate RaheN Aage Bhii ... !
Bhot acha laga apne reply kiya....thanks a lot...bas aise hi sath dete rahiye ...


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18th November 2011, 09:51 AM

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Kya bataun main baat gujre hue lamhaat ki,
Har ek jazbaat dil me dafan ho ke reh gaya...

Tez dhoop me odhaya tha jo dupatta usne,
Aaj wohi dupatta mera kafan ho ke reh gaya...

Jis mohabbat par kabhi naaz tha mujh ko,
Aaj wohi pyar dil me ek jalan ho ke reh gaya...


Mehsoos hota hai aaj sab bhot khush hai mujhse,
Najaane kyun khud se khafa "GAGAN" ho ke reh gaya...
gagan saheb,

achha likha hai....aage bhi likhte rahiye...
sdc pe aapko seekhne ke liye bahut kuchh milega sirf dhooNdne ki zehmat karni padegi....daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega....

mukhlis,
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18th November 2011, 12:02 PM

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Kya bataun main baat gujre hue lamhaat ki,
Har ek jazbaat dil me dafan ho ke reh gaya...

Tez dhoop me odhaya tha jo dupatta usne,
Aaj wohi dupatta mera kafan ho ke reh gaya...

Jis mohabbat par kabhi naaz tha mujh ko,
Aaj wohi pyar dil me ek jalan ho ke reh gaya...


Mehsoos hota hai aaj sab bhot khush hai mujhse,
Najaane kyun khud se khafa "GAGAN" ho ke reh gaya...

Achi Koshish Hai Gagan Ji......... Mehnat Jari Rakhiye........ KHush Rahen




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