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bas ek sawaal ka jawab de do! - 23rd September 2003, 10:32 PM

Tum ho khafa to lag raha hai aise
Chha gaye hai gam ke badal jese
Hai toofano se guzar raha dil mera
Hoth muskurana bhul gaye ho jese

Reh reh kar ankho mai sailaab bhar aate hai
Jab bhi vo lamhe yaad aate hai
Sunte hai koi dard bhare gazal bhi
To vo mere zakhmo ko chher jaate hai

Hum behad pyaar karte hai tumse
Koi shikva nahi, ek sawal karte hai tumse
Kya tum louta sakte ho dil mera?
Jawab dena ye fariyaad karte hai tumse


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14th October 2003, 05:15 PM

Very beautyful..keep it up.


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20th October 2003, 12:37 PM

oh my god
Mr. shayer i mean iaminlove ji
bohat hii behtreen gajal likhi hai aapne
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22nd October 2003, 08:55 AM

hello,


really very nice ghazal.
   
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reply - 22nd October 2003, 02:11 PM

Iminlove Ji,
Meine bhi aise hi kisi se pyaar kiya hai, aur marte dum tak use mohobbat karne ka waada bhi kiya hai , bus use meri yaad nahi aati , mein bohot mayoos hoon aur aap ke ye behtarin alfaaz padhkar meri aankhein bhi sailaab ki tarha behne lagi hai, Kya karein kaise samjhaye use ki kitna pyaar karti hoon mein.
Aap ke paas koi raasta hai kya??


USki yaad mein rozana dua karti hoon , aur har pal usi ko yaad karti hoon , uske bina mein naa tau jee rahi hoon na mar sakti hoon.


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23rd October 2003, 12:37 AM

hello,


mery sath aisa kuch nahi hai ji. mujhy bas aap ki gazal


achi lagi so tareef ker de . Aur aap ke lye Dua ker sakti hoon.


ke ALLAH aap ko sabar dye aur jo aap chahti ho wo aap ko


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24th October 2003, 07:28 PM

Hum behad pyaar karte hai tumse
Koi shikva nahi, ek sawal karte hai tumse
Kya tum louta sakte ho dil mera?
Kalam bohot achha likhha hein aapne. nehi dil keise lauta sakte hein koi? Mumkin nehi. Pyaar meh dard hi dard hoti hein, mehsoosh huyi. Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Shukriya. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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3rd November 2004, 12:32 AM

hi iaminlove ji,


aapne sach me bahot hi achha likha hai...apki nazm bahot hi khub hai,hume aapki ye nazm bahot bahot hi achhi lagi...

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18th September 2005, 09:58 PM

iminloveji,bahut hi ahcha laga hume aapka ye kalaam bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.

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