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kise gham hota hai.... -
3rd December 2004, 06:12 AM
Ek aisi baat jiska takaaza aab tak nahi ho paaya hai...
kaun jaane kise gham hota hai Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai kaun jaane kise gham hota hai Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai Barastaa hai jo aankhon se, gilaa paani Kalam kagaz ka phir aise, sanam hota hai Baithte Baithte hua karti hai, bashar raatein Din mein bhi khwaabon se, sitam hota hai kaun jaane kise gham hota hai Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai.... Saath mehfil ke hua karte hai, tanhaa yeh kadam Jahaa shuru rastaa wahi par, khatam hota hai Dard de jaaye, gair ke bas ki hai baat nahin Rulaane waale ka to naam, humdam hota hai kaun jaane kise gham hota hai Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai Muqammal cheez ka duniya mein koi naam nahi Kaun sehtaa hai aur kispar zulam hota hai Bas likhe jaate hai 'mast' dard teri mehfil mein Kabhi padh lete hai woh zakhmon pe marham hota hai kaun jaane kise gham hota hai Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai.... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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hi -
3rd December 2004, 02:35 PM
mast sahib
kaise hain? bohat piyara klaam...yakeen jano k parh kar bohat khushi hui...or tumhare lafzon ki taqat ka nadaza to pahle se hi hay hmain... Bas likhe jaate hai 'mast' dard teri mehfil mein Kabhi padh lete hai woh zakhmon pe marham hota hai yeh sher bohat hi kmaal laga...jaise kisi shayar ne apne dil ki bat lafzon main byan karne ka rasta talsha ho... bohat khub agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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6th December 2004, 02:02 AM
Khan Bhai..aapne yaha aakar mere lafzo aur jazbaaton ko izzat di behad khushi huyi..
aage bhi koshish rahegi ki yeh lafz aapke kaano tak pahunchte rahe..bhai aage bhi saath dete rahiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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6th December 2004, 11:12 AM
mast dost
bohat muazrat ke saath arz karoon gaa ke mein aap ke kalam per bohat kam aa paya hoon. mager aaj aap ki is ghazal ko parh ker ehsaas huaa ke aap ke kalam mein khayaal ki sachchaayee aur izhaar ki gehraayee bohat khoob hai, aap ke lehje ka khaloos bhi aap ke kalam ki tamaam khaamiyon per haavi hai. dost bohat khoob likha hai aap ne. isi tarah aur isi sanfe sukhan mein likhiye. meri duyayein aap ki tamaam kaamiyabiyon mein aap ke hamqadam hoan gi. God bless you. musharrafhusian |
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6th December 2004, 11:56 AM
mast bhai
bohat khub ,,, ek behtreen kalam dil kr jazbat udel diye aapne sare ... ek shikayat .. si hai dil ki .. bakhoob bayan kiya hai har aashar ... sach aap to shayari ka chamakta sitara hai .. jiski chamak se ye jahan roshan hai ... bhai likhte rehna yun hi ... tumhaara bhai raj bas raj hi raj |
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8th December 2004, 08:10 PM
Mushi bhaiyaa aapki maujoodgi paakar mein apne wajood ka wazn mehsuus kar paa raha hoon. Waise to nahi kahunga ki yeh mera likha sabse pasandida kalaam hai par itna zaroor hai ki aab yeh mera sabse yaadgar kalaam zaroor raheGaa... aapko yaha paakar ek sher rukte nahi ruk raha....
Chashm-e-mast raha karti thi muntazir dekho Khaaliq aaya bhi mere ghar aur pata na chala Aapna sayaa isi tarah humpar mustaqil rakhiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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8th December 2004, 08:15 PM
raj bhai
aapne hamesha ki tarah ek baar phir mera saath diya iska tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon main...mein to bas is parivaar ka hissa hoon aap jaisa nayaab dost mile yaha par jinhone hamesha se mere likhe ko sarahyaa raj bhia sitaara to aap hai jo yaha hameshaa aakar hamare likhe ki chamak badhaate hai...aap bhi aage yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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8th December 2004, 09:10 PM
Dear mast Bhai,
kya kahe yaar no words can match. classic...u got talent....keep it up. pappu.  |
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9th December 2004, 08:24 PM
Muqammal cheez ka duniya mein koi naam nahi
Kaun sehtaa hai aur kispar zulam hota hai Bas likhe jaate hai 'mast' dard teri mehfil mein Kabhi padh lete hai woh zakhmon pe marham hota hai Anu Bhai! Dil ko chho gaye aapke yeh shabd bhi... Simple n beautiful as always.... Loved themmm... Plz do keep writing  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Bahut khoob -
9th December 2004, 10:02 PM
kaun jaane kise gham hota hai
Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai.... Bahut hi khoobsoorati se dard ko pesh kiya hai Mast aapne....or ye punch line to waakai jaan hai aapki rachna ki... aasha hai aage bhi aapse kuchh eisa hi behtreen parhne ko milega. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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9th December 2004, 10:09 PM
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10th December 2004, 08:00 PM
Pappu Bhai,
aapne padha aur seene se lagaya bas sukoon mil gaya dil ko. aapne padh kar ise classic khud bana diya shukriya dost aage bhi saath dete rahiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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10th December 2004, 08:03 PM
Pulkit Bhai...Hameshaa ki tarah saath dene ka shukriya...bas yeh alfaaz aap sab milkar hi isme pyar aur mohabbat ka ras bhar dete hai ki bas kya kahun...
aage bhi hamesha saath dijiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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10th December 2004, 08:08 PM
Chaand Bhai..aapne ise padha ke aapne tarah ek khubsurat chand laga diya...Bhai..aap hamesha se adarsh rahe ho aur aapki prerna se aage bhadtaa aaya hoon..
aise hi saath dete rahiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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10th December 2004, 08:10 PM
Di aapki kamoshi bhi bina kahe sab keh jaati hai aur kehkar bhi kuch nahi kehti....
apna haath sada mere sar par rakhiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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25th July 2011, 09:44 AM
aaj phirse ise padh kar aankh bhar si aayiii
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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26th July 2011, 02:27 PM
banjare lot aye hay basti ki or
Koi barish hay jo ab brasne ko hay Mast.. Yad to sab kuch hay bus koi bahana nahi milta is traf ane k liye... Shrabi shrab pene k bahane tlash karta hay or shayar dard pane k bahane dhondta hay.. agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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27th July 2011, 07:38 AM
Khan bhai kaise ho aap?
Sahi kaha bhai aapne insaan waqt bewaqt halaat ke haathon majboor hai par khuda ka shukr hi kahungaa ki aap mujhe bhule nahiN.. -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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