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Arrow wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai... - 24th October 2005, 01:37 PM

Dosto...

Tarq-e-wafa pe harf-e-wafa laana asaan nahin hota...dilbar ki shokh adaayein, uski mehboobi-e-nazar ki meharbaaniyaan bhulaaye nahin bhulatiin...bus isi soch ko le kar kuch likha hai...


hai uski nazar jo qaatil uski khataa nahin hai
ilzaam nahin hai uspe woh bewafa nahin hai

falak se tuute huye sitare girte nahin zameen pe
wo gira raha thaa mujhko usko pata nahin hai

aab-e-deedaah munawwar jo hazaar haadson se
tau kaise main yeh keh doon dil dukhta nahin hai

chahatein bhi ajab rahin uski, nafratein bhi gazab
ab baad-e-saba sa mujhmein wo mehakta nahin hai

rakhta tha kabhi dard mera kaleje se lagaaye jo
meri aah-o-fugaan pe ab wo tadapta nahin hai

jaane kab wo ruuth jaaye jaane kab dil todh jaaye
sapnon mein bhi aaye tau palat ke dekhta nahin hai

uski be-taaluqqi pe paara paara huya yeh dil
wo dabe paanv mere dil se kyun gaya nahin hai

mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai


aab-e-deedaah = tearful eyes
munawwar = bright
aah-o-fugaan = cry of distress
parastish = worshipping


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

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24th October 2005, 01:48 PM

Parastaar G Adaab

Ummed hai mijaaz ba-khair honge. Aap ki yeh ghazal nazar se guzri, bohot hi umdaa kaavish ka namuuna hai aapki yeh ghazal. Jo ashaar zyaadah pasand aaye woh hasb-e-zel hai. Daad kubool kijiyega..


rakhta tha kabhi dard mera kaleje se lagaaye jo
meri aah-o-fugaan pe ab wo tadapta nahin hai

uski be-taaluqqi pe paara paara huya yeh dil
wo dabe paanv mere dil se kyun gaya nahin hai

mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai

Ummeed hai aage bhi issi tarah likhti rahengi aap. Apna khayaal rakhiyega. Filhaal izaazat. Dua go.


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hai uski nazar jo qaatil uski khataa nahin hai
ilzaam nahin hai uspe woh bewafa nahin hai

falak se tuute huye sitare girte nahin zameen pe
wo gira raha thaa mujhko usko pata nahin hai

Waaaaaaaaaahhhhh... kya keh diya hai...!


aab-e-deedaah munawwar jo hazaar haadson se
tau kaise main yeh keh doon dil dukhta nahin hai

chahatein bhi ajab rahin uski, nafratein bhi gazab
ab baad-e-saba sa mujhmein wo mehakta nahin hai

Beautifulllll......!


rakhta tha kabhi dard mera kaleje se lagaaye jo
meri aah-o-fugaan pe ab wo tadapta nahin hai

jaane kab wo ruuth jaaye jaane kab dil todh jaaye
sapnon mein bhi aaye tau palat ke dekhta nahin hai

uski be-taaluqqi pe paara paara huya yeh dil
wo dabe paanv mere dil se kyun gaya nahin hai

Kya baat hai.....!


mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai

Waaaaaahhh....but...Woh khuda ho naa ho... Mohabbat ibaadat ho hi jaati hai...!

Dear Guruji,

As always a beautiful beautiful expression... Loved every word of it... Pehle do sher aur aakhiri sher... yeh bass dil me gehre utar gaye.... mujhe bhut pasand aayi tumhaari yeh ghazal bhi... Do keep writing...TC


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paras di..........
kya kahooN apke is kalaam par.....main sach keh rahi hooN maine aise naayaab kalaam bahut kam padhe haiN yahaan par.....apka title hi padhkar attract ho gayii maiN.....di main kuch nahi keh paaungi.....bas ye hai ki aaj se maiN apki fan ho gayi hooN..seriously saying.....wonderful creatioN....and the maktaa is juz breathtaking......
thanx a lott...........
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24th October 2005, 04:23 PM

hai uski nazar jo qaatil uski khataa nahin hai
ilzaam nahin hai uspe woh bewafa nahin hai


ji..............

falak se tuute huye sitare girte nahin zameen pe
wo gira raha thaa mujhko usko pata nahin hai


Haay..... re Dil.

aab-e-deedaah munawwar jo hazaar haadson se
tau kaise main yeh keh doon dil dukhta nahin hai


Bilkul dukhta hai ji.

chahatein bhi ajab rahin uski, nafratein bhi gazab
ab baad-e-saba sa mujhmein wo mehakta nahin hai


kya kahiyega ise...waqt waqt ki baat hai.

rakhta tha kabhi dard mera kaleje se lagaaye jo
meri aah-o-fugaan pe ab wo tadapta nahin hai


phir wahi sa dard.

jaane kab wo ruuth jaaye jaane kab dil todh jaaye
sapnon mein bhi aaye tau palat ke dekhta nahin hai


ye to jiyad.dati hi ho gayi.

uski be-taaluqqi pe paara paara huya yeh dil
wo dabe paanv mere dil se kyun gaya nahin hai


kaash ...

mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai



Kya pata....shaayad kisi ki khaatir wo 'Khuda' bhi ho....


Paras dil se daad tumhaari is rachna ko.....dil ko chhu gai tumhaari ye rachna.

Khush raho likhti raho.

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Re: wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai... - 24th October 2005, 05:32 PM

hai uski nazar jo qaatil uski khataa nahin hai
ilzaam nahin hai uspe woh bewafa nahin hai

falak se tuute huye sitare girte nahin zameen pe
wo gira raha thaa mujhko usko pata nahin hai

rakhta tha kabhi dard mera kaleje se lagaaye jo
meri aah-o-fugaan pe ab wo tadapta nahin hai

jaane kab wo ruuth jaaye jaane kab dil todh jaaye
sapnon mein bhi aaye tau palat ke dekhta nahin hai

mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai

paras sahiba
kaisi hai aap??? yun to aksar aapke kalaam par aata hooon,,magar na jane kyun aapki jubaan ki jatilta mujhe ghabra deti hai...magar yeh kalaam ,,,kya baat hai,,,bahooot bahooot shaandaaar...ek ek sher aise chamak raha hai jaise daag-e-dil ho koi...dil ki bekasi ko jis lehje mein aapne bayaan ki hai use padh kar koi tareeef karne ke liye na ruke,,aisa naamumkin hai...
yeh kalaam isiliye bhi mujhe apne dil ke bahooot kareeeb laga kyunki yeh saral hai,,aapke baaki kalaamon ke muqaable,,magar ghaav dil par bahooot gehre karta hai.
isi khubsurati se likhte rahiye
meri daad aur dua kuboool kijiye...waise dard par "wah" keh raha hooon,,,iske liye muaafi ka talabgaar hooon
take care
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24th October 2005, 07:21 PM

priy paras,

gr8 ........

tumhari yah rachna bahut pasand aayi....

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24th October 2005, 07:48 PM

Dearest Paras ji,

As always very well written. bahut achha laga tumhe parh ke, daad kubul karna aur yun hi likhe rehna... sadaa khush raho.


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24th October 2005, 08:00 PM

dd sach kehta hoon ghazab dhaya hai aapne apne is kalaa se.shayad mere dil ko utar ke rakh diya.main aapki har ek baat se sehmat siway us aakhiri baat ke.kyunki dd kabhi kabhi pyar us hadd tak pahunch jata hai ki humara mehboob hi khuda ban jata hai.aur ek baat hai usse jyada jalim aur koi hota bhi nahi.bas likhte rahiye.aur gustakhi maaf kijiyega itna kuch kehne ke liye.


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24th October 2005, 09:07 PM

Paras di,

kya gazab likha hai.. aur sabse achhi mujhe last line.. sach me mohhbat ki jaati hai use khuda ka darza nahi dena chahiye...

Dreat work didi


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25th October 2005, 08:03 AM

Di jaan lena koyi aapse sikhtey! dard chalkata hua !

hai uski nazar jo qaatil uski khataa nahin hai
ilzaam nahin hai uspe woh bewafa nahin hai
uski nazar hai kaatil, vo bewafa nahi haaaye di..


falak se tuute huye sitare girte nahin zameen pe
wo gira raha thaa mujhko usko pata nahin hai
vo gira raha hai mujhko usko pata nahi hai.........falak se tuteey taarey, ka jabardast combinaiton hai taarey ka tutna aur girna aur dil ka bhi......

aab-e-deedaah munawwar jo hazaar haadson se
tau kaise main yeh keh doon dil dukhta nahin hai
dil dukhta nahi hai itne haadson se,,,,aah!

rakhta tha kabhi dard mera kaleje se lagaaye jo
meri aah-o-fugaan pe ab wo tadapta nahin hai
wah! this one is damn..something..

jaane kab wo ruuth jaaye jaane kab dil todh jaaye
sapnon mein bhi aaye tau palat ke dekhta nahin hai
sapno me bhi palat kar naa dekhna haaye di........jaan le leti tusi ta meri.

mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai

like pulkit said muhoobat ibadat ban jati hai!

too good di
dard chalak raha hai, tarap dikh rahi hai apke likhne me...dil ko chua hi nahi cheer bhi diya aapke dard ne

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25th October 2005, 11:29 AM

WOW!

Aap sab doston ka apne iss kalaam pe reaction dekh kar bilkul hairaan nahi huyi...malum thaa wo aakhiri sher kuch naagawaar guzregaa...

mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai

itna hi kahoongi ki jab halaat ki talkhiyaan dil pe giraan guzrein tau dil bagawat pe utar aata hai, dimaag pe junoon sa chaa jaata hai....kalam baagi ho kar likhne lagti hai...go haqiqat tau yeh hai ki...

kaise use hum dekhate falak ke chaand mein
aisee tau koyi baat na thee *maahtaab mein

moon


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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Re: wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai... - 25th October 2005, 07:03 PM

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Dosto...

Tarq-e-wafa pe harf-e-wafa laana asaan nahin hota...dilbar ki shokh adaayein, uski mehboobi-e-nazar ki meharbaaniyaan bhulaaye nahin bhulatiin...bus isi soch ko le kar kuch likha hai...


hai uski nazar jo qaatil uski khataa nahin hai
ilzaam nahin hai uspe woh bewafa nahin hai

falak se tuute huye sitare girte nahin zameen pe
wo gira raha thaa mujhko usko pata nahin hai

aab-e-deedaah munawwar jo hazaar haadson se
tau kaise main yeh keh doon dil dukhta nahin hai

chahatein bhi ajab rahin uski, nafratein bhi gazab
ab baad-e-saba sa mujhmein wo mehakta nahin hai

rakhta tha kabhi dard mera kaleje se lagaaye jo
meri aah-o-fugaan pe ab wo tadapta nahin hai

jaane kab wo ruuth jaaye jaane kab dil todh jaaye
sapnon mein bhi aaye tau palat ke dekhta nahin hai

uski be-taaluqqi pe paara paara huya yeh dil
wo dabe paanv mere dil se kyun gaya nahin hai

mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai


aab-e-deedaah = tearful eyes
munawwar = bright
aah-o-fugaan = cry of distress
parastish = worshipping

taareef karu to kis aashaar ki karu paras ji sabhi ek se badh ke ek hain... & last one...sachh me jhakjhor gaya... aur bilkul sahi kaha aapne...
alwayz luv to read u ..
khayal rakhiyega apna


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Talib Sahib Adaab...

aapko chand ashaar pasand aaye, chaliye aapki hidaayetein raayegaan nahin guzri...laga ki goya meri mehnat bhi vusool huyi...shayri ke is safar mein kabhi kabaar yoonhi aapki inaayat rahe tau aayandah bhi likhne ki vajah milti rahegi...


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

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25th October 2005, 08:26 PM

uski be-taaluqqi pe paara paara huya yeh dil
wo dabe paanv mere dil se kyun gaya nahin hai

mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai


Namaskar Paras Ji

iss baar to aapka qalam padh sirf ek shabd Zubaan par aaya waah!!!bahut khoob likha hay aapney ek jheel se gehra laga yeh qalam aur yeh karishma bahut kum log kar saktey hain jinmein se ek aap hain......hamare daad kabul kijeyega.....wo dabe paanv wali pankti padh ek geet yaad aa gaya....from veer zaara.....tum chupa na sakogi main woh raaz huun main tumharey hi dil ki to awaz huun......

keep writing


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Re: wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai... - 25th October 2005, 08:43 PM

Paras di,

Acha laga padh kar... Kaafi pyaar tha ismein....
Yunhi likhte raho....

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hi - 25th October 2005, 09:25 PM

paras
kasi ho?
sorry kuch der ko offline hwa yahoo se..
abhi wapis aon ga...
tumhara offline mila to klik kiya...
natije main itni piyari syari parhne ko mili...
bohat acha lagta hay tumhe parhna...
acha ik baat batao main to shayd in baton ko seekh nah
saka abhi tak ...koshish kar raha hu..yeh jan na chahta hu k ise
jo shahkar tumne likha hay ghazal kahain gay yah nazm...
btana zaror ..magar jo bhi ho kmaal lafz hain kmaal likhna
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25th October 2005, 09:29 PM

Sweet pulkit...

have you heard the Shakespearean phrase..."the lady doth protest too much"...well sometimes you say something to mean something else...

puure kalaam mein agar mohabbat ibadat nahin lagi tau mera likhna hi bekaar hua...haan last sher deliberate thaa...to bring out the feelings of a protesting heart...jo cheekh raha hai ki usne be-reham sitamgar ko khuda kaise maan liya...par dil ka muaamla hai...aur uspe ikhtiyaar insaan ke bas mein nahin...

kaise use hum dekhate falak ke chaand mein
aisee tau koyi baat na thee maahtaab mein


nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho

--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan

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25th October 2005, 09:37 PM

tumhare liye kasak...

gar kasak mein kashish na hoti tau bandagi na hoti
kasak hai tau zinda hain, warna zindagi na hoti


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25th October 2005, 09:40 PM

chaand sahib...

jawaab mein ek hee sher ko baar baar dohraa rahi hoon...lekin isse har koyi samjhega nahin...aap zaroor samajh paayeinge...

kaise use hum dekhate falak ke chaand mein
aisee tau koyi baat na thee maahtaab mein

bataayiega zaroor...


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26th October 2005, 09:42 AM

meri behna

apni kotahi per shirmandgi ke saath haazir hoon.
kem mayegi ka ehsaas hai.
khair, tum ne yeh ghazel bohat khoobsurat aur bhai ke mizaaj se hem-ahang ho ker kahi hai, is liye mujhe to pasand aanaa hi hai.
yeh voh tarz e bayaan hai jo mujhe pasand aataa hai.
isi tarah likhti raho, jug jug jiyo, aur khoob khush raho yehi bhai ki dua hai.
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Re: Re: wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai... - 27th October 2005, 10:08 AM

Manoj...

mujhe afsos hai ki meri mehnat ke baad bhi tumhe mere kalaam jatil lagte hain...kyunki maine tau pichle kuch kalaamon ko kaafi saralta se likha thaa...gar isliey tumhein pareshaani huyi...tau mujhe muaaf karna...kyunki iss wajah se tum mere kalaam nahin padh rahe ho...aur tumhari raaye ki talabgaar tau hamesha se hi rahi hoon...tum jaante ho...aayinda dhyaan rakhoongi...


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27th October 2005, 10:12 AM

shukriya meena ji...

aapki daad mere liye bahut ehmiyat rakhti hai....bus ranj iss baat ka hai...ki aap apni raaye se khulkar nawaazti nahin...kuch tau kami rehti hogi mere likhne mein...


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27th October 2005, 10:15 AM

Sweet Parul...

tumhein kalaam achha laga...bus dil khush hua...aage bhi saath nibhaana...


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27th October 2005, 10:20 AM

Dear Lucky...

tumhein kalaam pasand aaya achha laga...aur phir tumhein last sher ke liye aapatti huyi yeh dekhkar aur achha laga...tumhein apne sawaal ka jawaab tau mere pehle do teen replies mein mil gaya hoga...tum sahi kehte ho...aur mera likhna saakshi raha hai iss baat ka ki mohobbat ibadat hi ka duusra naam hai...

take care chote bhayyia


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27th October 2005, 10:22 AM

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Paras di,

kya gazab likha hai.. aur sabse achhi mujhe last line.. sach me mohhbat ki jaati hai use khuda ka darza nahi dena chahiye...

Dreat work didi
Jee haan madam...nahin dena chahiye magar dil ke muaamle mein dakhal nahin diya jaa sakta...aur dil use khuda hi maankar chalta hai...


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28th October 2005, 09:47 AM

Pyaari priya...

tumhara shiddat se mere kalaam ko padhna phir har sher pe shabashi dena...comment karna...bus dil ko bahut sukoon sa de gaya...laga ki mehnat safal huyi...aur haan koyi chahe kuch bhi dil behlaane ke liye kahe...mohobbat ko ibadat hee mana gaya hai...duniya ke har kone mein, har dharm mein, har zubaan mein...bus yoonhi di ko likhne ka hausla deti rehna...


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
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28th October 2005, 09:50 AM

Arre yeh kya hua pallavi...

tum apni hansi chodh ke nahin gayin...kya mere kalaam ne itna sanjeeda kar diya tumhein...nothing doing...you must always leave your laughter behind...it always brings a big grin on my face...


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28th October 2005, 09:58 AM

Dear Sukanya ji...

aapka aana mujhe padhna...phir hamesha shabaashi dena...mere liye bahut mayne rakhta hai...

tum chupa na sakogi main woh raaz huun main tumharey hi dil ki to awaz huun......

maine yeh gana nahin suna...agar suna bhi hai tau shayad dhyaan se nahin...ab tau sun na hee padhega...shukriya sunkar bataaongi kaise laga...

Main hi main ab tumhaare khayaalon mein hoon
Main jawaabon mein hoon, main sawaalon mein hoon
Main tumhaare har ek khwaab mein hoon basa
Main tumhaari nazar ke ujaalon mein hoon

lyrics abhi dekhe...wow...beautiful!


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28th October 2005, 10:03 AM

Shukriya Rohin...

mujhe taajjub iss baat pe hota hai...ki jo ladka itna patar patar karta hai jab batiyata hai ya chat karta hai ya shayri pe logon ko apni baton se mobilize karta rehta hai...wo do tuuk sa jawaab kyun deta hai mujhe...why not comment, criticize, analyse ...anything...don't expect this abbreviated answer from you...samjhe...


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28th October 2005, 10:07 AM

Hey khan bhayyia...

aap aaye aapko achha laga yeh kalaam...bus jee khush hua...ab yeh nazm hai ya ghazal mujhe nahin malum...itna ilm tau mujhe nahin hai...haan koshish tau ghazal likhne ke kee thee...but kahin kahin se behr se kharij hai tau yeh mukammal ghazal nahin ho paayi...

ghazal mein behr ka hona zaroori hai...aur behr bhi kitne tarah kee hoti hain...aur mujhe tau ek bhi behr ka saleeka nahin aata...sorry couldn't help you out


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28th October 2005, 10:15 AM

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meri behna

apni kotahi per shirmandgi ke saath haazir hoon.
kem mayegi ka ehsaas hai.
khair, tum ne yeh ghazel bohat khoobsurat aur bhai ke mizaaj se hem-ahang ho ker kahi hai, is liye mujhe to pasand aanaa hi hai.
yeh voh tarz e bayaan hai jo mujhe pasand aataa hai.
isi tarah likhti raho, jug jug jiyo, aur khoob khush raho yehi bhai ki dua hai.
kisi dost ka shayr apni behan ki nazer kerta hoon
"QASEM KHUDA KI MOHABBAT NAHEEN AQEEDAT HAI"
"DIYAAR E DIL MEIN BOHAT EHTIRAAM HAI TERA"

Ejazat chahta hoon , apna bohat khayal rakhna

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QASEM KHUDA KI MOHABBAT NAHEEN AQEEDAT HAI"
"DIYAAR E DIL MEIN BOHAT EHTIRAAM HAI TERA"

kitna pyaara sher hai bhayyia...

aur aapne is nikkammi behan ki nazar kiya...is tohfe ko zindagi bhar yaad rakhoongi...aapko ghazal pasand aayee...khushkismeti hai meri...ab jaa kar aapki advice, aapki tanqeed ka asar dikhaayi de raha hai...aage bhi zaroor mujhe raaste pe laate rahiegaa...apko tau malum hai badi jaldi gadbad kar deti hoon...

aur bhayyia jo aapne shuru mein sharmindagi zaahir kee...mujhe bilkul achha nahin laga...aapne kaha tau thaa ki kaam zyada hai aur office hours kam...so aapki masruufiyat se wakif tau thee hi...aage se iss tarah ka lehja at least mere saath mat istemaal kiya karein...


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Re: wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai... - 29th October 2005, 01:25 AM

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Dosto...

Tarq-e-wafa pe harf-e-wafa laana asaan nahin hota...dilbar ki shokh adaayein, uski mehboobi-e-nazar ki meharbaaniyaan bhulaaye nahin bhulatiin...bus isi soch ko le kar kuch likha hai...


hai uski nazar jo qaatil uski khataa nahin hai
ilzaam nahin hai uspe woh bewafa nahin hai

falak se tuute huye sitare girte nahin zameen pe
wo gira raha thaa mujhko usko pata nahin hai

aab-e-deedaah munawwar jo hazaar haadson se
tau kaise main yeh keh doon dil dukhta nahin hai

chahatein bhi ajab rahin uski, nafratein bhi gazab
ab baad-e-saba sa mujhmein wo mehakta nahin hai

rakhta tha kabhi dard mera kaleje se lagaaye jo
meri aah-o-fugaan pe ab wo tadapta nahin hai

jaane kab wo ruuth jaaye jaane kab dil todh jaaye
sapnon mein bhi aaye tau palat ke dekhta nahin hai

uski be-taaluqqi pe paara paara huya yeh dil
wo dabe paanv mere dil se kyun gaya nahin hai

mujhe us se hai mohabbat 'parastish' ise na samjho
wo sirf mera mehboob hai mera khuda nahin hai


aab-e-deedaah = tearful eyes
munawwar = bright
aah-o-fugaan = cry of distress
parastish = worshipping
Guddo didi...

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aapka apna

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7th November 2005, 07:17 PM

Mere Bhayyia...

"QASEM KHUDA KI MOHABBAT NAHEEN AQEEDAT HAI"
"DIYAAR E DIL MEIN BOHAT EHTIRAAM HAI TERA"

Deir se jawaab de rahi hoon...muaaf kijieyga...aur itna khubsurat sher aapne tohfe mein diya...main khud ko bahut khushnaseeb samjhati hoon...ki mujhe apka pyaar mila hai...aur ek mentor ki guidance bhi...


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

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7th November 2005, 07:20 PM

kunnu mere chote bhayyia...

tumne mujhe samay nikaal kar padha...samjha..uspe daad bhi di...aur kya chahiye...apna khayaal rakhna...


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mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
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