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Muhabbat ka ye gham de do...... - 1st November 2015, 02:06 PM

mujhe dil me jagah apne bhale thodi si kam de do..
Mujhe chahat bhara ek pal tasavvur me sanam de do.

Zamane ka koi gam aur na ab hai ishq ki daulat..
Mite tanhaii tum aao ya ane ka bharam de do.

Kahaa.n mumkin hai tumko bhool kar ek pal bhi jee payein.
Chalo ye bhi kare.nge ham jo tum apnii kasam de do.

Tumhari dunya se ya rab mai.n rukhsat ha.ns ke ho jau.n.
Jo fir ek baar mere yaar ke sa.ng me janam de do.

Ye raah e zindgi meri badi asaan ho jaye
Muhabbat na sahi mujhko muhabbat ka ye gham de do.



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2nd November 2015, 11:50 AM

waaahhh bahut khoob madhu ji............. kyaa sher kahe hain aapne. ek se badh kar ek....


bahut umdah....... likhtirahen khush rahen..

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2nd November 2015, 12:33 PM

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20th November 2015, 02:30 PM

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waaahhh bahut khoob madhu ji............. kyaa sher kahe hain aapne. ek se badh kar ek....


bahut umdah....... likhtirahen khush rahen..

Shaad........
Shukriya shaad sahab........

Aate rahiye..
Khush rahein...



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bahut khoob madhu jee har ashar lajwaab hai....................


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11th December 2015, 09:03 PM

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Wahhhhh bohat khoob


Umdah Shabd aur jazbaat
Bahut bahut shukriya....ashiq sahab..
Aate rahiyega..

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22nd December 2015, 08:56 PM

Waah madhu jee...jawaab nahin aapka...baatein banan to koi aapse seekhe



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23rd December 2015, 11:57 AM

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Waah madhu jee...jawaab nahin aapka...baatein banan to koi aapse seekhe
agar ye tareef hai to shukriya aapka...aur is baat ka bhi shukriya ki vaqt ki kami hote huye bhi aapne meri ghazal par aane ka vaqt nikal hee liya der se hee sahi tawajjo to di...

aur doosri baat shayri ko aap mujhse kahiin pahle se jante aur samjhte hain....khayalon ko alfaaz dena ek hunar hee hai...aur jab khayaal dil se nikle hon...bayani asardaar ho tabhi aap jaise aala shayron ki daad milti hai...
aapki nazar mein agar ye batein banana hai...to yahi sahi...



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agar ye tareef hai to shukriya aapka...aur is baat ka bhi shukriya ki vaqt ki kami hote huye bhi aapne meri ghazal par aane ka vaqt nikal hee liya der se hee sahi tawajjo to di...

aur doosri baat shayri ko aap mujhse kahiin pahle se jante aur samjhte hain....khayalon ko alfaaz dena ek hunar hee hai...aur jab khayaal dil se nikle hon...bayani asardaar ho tabhi aap jaise aala shayron ki daad milti hai...
aapki nazar mein agar ye batein banana hai...to yahi sahi...
Madhu jee...maafi chahta hu...lagta hai aapko mera taareef karne ka dhang pasand nahin aaya.......aapne thoda galat matlab nikaal liya meri tareef ka......
I m really sorry if u hurt.......



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bahut khoob madhu jee har ashar lajwaab hai....................
shukriya rajinder ji,,,,

aapka sneh bana rahe......

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Bohat khoob Madhu

Bohat umda ghazal kahi hai aapne. Achche khayal hain aur aapne unhein khoobsoorat alfaaz diye hain. Bohat khoob.

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Bohat halka aur bohat bhaari sher hai ye .. nayapan nahi hai khyaal main par jis tareeke se tumne rakha hai naya bana diya hai ise tumne .. yahi shayri hai.. mubarakbad iske liye ..

Baaki gazal saada aur aam hai ... acchi koshish hai ye kaha jaa sakta hai..

Khyaal rakho apna .. aur likhte raho aise hi ..

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Bohat khoob Madhu

Bohat umda ghazal kahi hai aapne. Achche khayal hain aur aapne unhein khoobsoorat alfaaz diye hain. Bohat khoob.

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bahut himmat badhai hai aapne yahaan aakar...aate rahiyega....

apna khayaal rakhiyega..

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Bohat halka aur bohat bhaari sher hai ye .. nayapan nahi hai khyaal main par jis tareeke se tumne rakha hai naya bana diya hai ise tumne .. yahi shayri hai.. mubarakbad iske liye ..

Baaki gazal saada aur aam hai ... acchi koshish hai ye kaha jaa sakta hai..

Khyaal rakho apna .. aur likhte raho aise hi ..

Aapka apna

Kunaal

Bahut achcha laga aapko sher pasand aaya....

Aate rahiyega...

Take care
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