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maiN pathar ha - 20th August 2008, 03:15 PM
na maiN hassaN na maiN rovaaN ,sach jani mai pathar ha,
jithe digaN othe hi khalovaaN,sach jani mai pathar ha,

prem darya di dhara ban vareya bahut tu mere te,
par baneya na koi nishan, sach jani mai pathar ha,

muarat na meri ban-ni koi, tu keete yatan hajaraN,
tu vi aak ke sut jana,sach jai maiN pathar ha,

na bane ne geette mere, jo tu alarh varese khed lendi,
maiN onve hi ha ik saar, sach jani maiN pathar ha,

aape vich hi tapya maiN,te tapi jana,
koi baithe na dhoh lake,sach jani main pathar ha,

tera paak tupata chanan jeha,rahe roshan,
maiN kala aapni kaloN naal, sach jani main pathar ha,
tu v choh ke vekh leya,maiN jinda na hoya,
par tu kion na hoya 'Ram' , je maiN pathar ha???
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21st August 2008, 02:39 AM
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na maiN hassaN na maiN rovaaN,
sach jani mai pathar ha,
jithe digaN othe hi khalovaaN,
sach jani mai pathar ha,

prem darya di dhara ban
vareya bahut tu mere te,
par baneya na koi nishan,
sach jani mai pathar ha,

muarat na meri ban-ni koi,
tu keete yatan hajaraN,
tu vi aak ke sut jana,
sach jai maiN pathar ha,

na bane ne geette mere,
jo tu alarh varese khed lendi,
maiN onve hi ha ik saar,
sach jani maiN pathar ha,

aape vich hi tapya maiN,te tapi jana,
koi baithe na dhoh lake,
sach jani main pathar ha,

tera paak tupata chanan jeha,rahe roshan,
maiN kala aapni kaloN naal,
sach jani main pathar ha,

tu v choh ke vekh leya,
maiN jinda na hoya,
par tu kion na hoya 'Ram' ,
je maiN pathar ha???
Babbu ji, tusi Great Poet ho eh ta sanu pata si, par ek Great Person vi ho, eh vi pata lag gaya, kyon ke jo duje diya galtiya dekhan di bijay aapniya galtiya dekhde han, oh hamesha hi great poeple hunde han, jo tusi ess poem ch darsaya hai

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22nd August 2008, 04:58 PM
This is perhaps the best poem so far posted on this site. Damn beautifull. Jawaab nahi. Ik din bahut wadhey poet banogey babbu ji. wasdey raho. Ajj maiN chaNhundaa haaN ke bahut kujh likhaaN tuhaadey laee par akhar nahi labh rahey. Bas jeeondey raho

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This is perhaps the best poem so far posted on this site. Damn beautifull. Jawaab nahi. Ik din bahut wadhey poet banogey babbu ji. wasdey raho. Ajj maiN chaNhundaa haaN ke bahut kujh likhaaN tuhaadey laee par akhar nahi labh rahey. Bas jeeondey raho
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25th August 2008, 03:41 PM
na maiN hassaN na maiN rovaaN ,sach jani mai pathar ha,
jithe digaN othe hi khalovaaN,sach jani mai pathar ha,

prem darya di dhara ban vareya bahut tu mere te,
par baneya na koi nishan, sach jani mai pathar ha,

muarat na meri ban-ni koi, tu keete yatan hajaraN,
tu vi aak ke sut jana,sach jai maiN pathar ha,

na bane ne geette mere, jo tu alarh varese khed lendi,
maiN onve hi ha ik saar, sach jani maiN pathar ha,

aape vich hi tapya maiN,te tapi jana,
koi baithe na dhoh lake,sach jani main pathar ha,

tera paak tupata chanan jeha,rahe roshan,
maiN kala aapni kaloN naal, sach jani main pathar ha,

tu v choh ke vekh leya,maiN jinda na hoya,
par tu kion na hoya 'Ram' , je maiN pathar ha???


bahut khoob babbu ji.....partama tuhadi kalam nu hor vadiya likhan di taqat bakshy....jeeunde raho...kush raho.

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26th August 2008, 08:39 PM
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na maiN hassaN na maiN rovaaN ,sach jani mai pathar ha,
jithe digaN othe hi khalovaaN,sach jani mai pathar ha,

prem darya di dhara ban vareya bahut tu mere te,
par baneya na koi nishan, sach jani mai pathar ha,

muarat na meri ban-ni koi, tu keete yatan hajaraN,
tu vi aak ke sut jana,sach jai maiN pathar ha,

na bane ne geette mere, jo tu alarh varese khed lendi,
maiN onve hi ha ik saar, sach jani maiN pathar ha,

aape vich hi tapya maiN,te tapi jana,
koi baithe na dhoh lake,sach jani main pathar ha,

tera paak tupata chanan jeha,rahe roshan,
maiN kala aapni kaloN naal, sach jani main pathar ha,

tu v choh ke vekh leya,maiN jinda na hoya,
par tu kion na hoya 'Ram' , je maiN pathar ha???


bahut khoob babbu ji.....partama tuhadi kalam nu hor vadiya likhan di taqat bakshy....jeeunde raho...kush raho.
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[quote=A-DEEP;304739]Bahut hi sohna likhiya hai yaar,


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