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zindgi banya hai tainu - 19th November 2009, 10:44 AM

chahunda ha tere naal meelaN chalaN,anth tak, akheer tak,
khona nahi chunda kadi v tainu,

zindgi sachi sohni hai bahut,
kion ki zindgi banaya hai tainu,

galvakdi teri nal bhul jan sabh pashemaniyaN,
reshami rumal vang hikk te sajaya hai tainu..

swarthi ho janda ha kujh jyada
jad tere bahut bahut nere hunda ha...
kadi daseya te kdade tere toN chupaya hai tainu..

rabh jane kinna zajbati haN main tere lai,
kadi tainu pata lagge taN mainu jaroor khaiN..
kadi tu v moonhoN dasiN ki kinna chaheya hai tainu..

har pal har ghari tainu yaad karan,
khali rakheya haiN khud nu ,ki tainu khud ch sara smo lava..
zinda ha,ta ki ji bhar ke takna hai tainu..

meri prabhat v tere naal ,meri sham v tere naal,
par poonjh nahi sakda hanju tere, apna hath bana ke rumal,
khoya v bahut, jinna paya hai tainu..

aun vale kal da dar nahi, jinna beet gaye da bhey hai,
teri doooori badi aseha hai..
jinna nere ona door v paya hai tainu.....
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21st November 2009, 04:18 AM

Bahut der baad parte oN tusi Babbu ji............bahut bahut hi pyara likhia hai tusi.




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27th November 2009, 09:58 AM

Babbu ji kadi kadi enna wadhiyaa likh dendey oN ki tuhaadey saahmney baith ke tuhanu sunan da man kardaa hai. Sach much bahut hi shaandaar si. wasdey raho..... Ajj kal bahut ghat likhdey ho tusi vi.... Naaraz te nahi saadey naal?? Heer ji ne aunaa band kar ditta hai. AseeN hameshaa tuhaanu udeekdey haaN. Cheti pheraa paayeyaa karo


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28th November 2009, 12:52 PM

[quote=Preet Dil Di;374559]Bahut der baad parte oN tusi Babbu ji............bahut bahut hi pyara likhia hai tusi.

SSA PREET JI
bas vese hi thoda nizi rujheveya ch reh jaida hai
par man sdc te hamesha hi rehnda hai
tusi ena beshkimti reply dita.. thank you very much
par tusi khud bahut hi kamal da likhde ho
rooh fook dinde ho har poem ch

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28th November 2009, 01:01 PM

[quote=tilakji;375353]Babbu ji kadi kadi enna wadhiyaa likh dendey oN ki tuhaadey saahmney baith ke tuhanu sunan da man kardaa hai. Sach much bahut hi shaandaar si. wasdey raho..... Ajj kal bahut ghat likhdey ho tusi vi.... Naaraz te nahi saadey naal?? Heer ji ne aunaa band kar ditta hai. AseeN hameshaa tuhaanu udeekdey haaN. Cheti pheraa paayeyaa karo

SSA TILAK JI...
bas tuhadi housla afjai naaal thoda bahut likh laida hai
par DEEP JI PREET JI SACHI PUNJABI SECTION DI JAAN HAN
tuhadi reply kise v poem di ehmiyat bana dindi hai
tuhade iss khoobsurat reply lai v tuhada bahut bahtu shukriya TILAK ji
tuhade naal koi naraz kive ho sakda hai..
tusi iss mehfil ch sabh toN ajeej ho...
par kehnde ne na ki ..'aur bhi gum haiN jamane me mohabat ke siva'..
bas nizzi rujheveyaN ton kai vaar fursat ghat mildi hai
koshish karaga agge toN jaldi hazri lava saka
ik vaar fer shukriya Tilak ji..
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14th December 2009, 09:35 AM

Zindgi sachi sohni hai bahut..........or tuhadi kavita sohni hai bahut.
   
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15th December 2009, 02:54 PM

[quote=rajinderseep;377457]Zindgi sachi sohni hai bahut..........or tuhadi kavita sohni hai
Rajinderseep ji tusi read kita and iss yog lagga k tusi reply de sako, tuhada bahut bahut dhanvaad
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31st January 2010, 11:22 AM

Oh My God Babbu ji, tuhadi kihari kihari line di tareeef kara, sariya hi ek duje to vad ke sohniya han, har line ch hi kamaaaaal hi kamaaaal aa ji
Baki talik g bilkul theek kehnade han Dil krda a ke tuhade samne baith suniyea tuhadi hi poem


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3rd February 2010, 10:04 AM

babbu ji.....bahut vadiya likhiya hai tusi.....baabu ji pyar vich milna bahut ghat te judaai aksar hi hundi hai....dua kardi aa haan ki tuhada pyar tuhanu jaroor miley....!

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[quote=sunita virender;382968]babbu ji.....bahut vadiya likhiya hai tusi.....baabu ji pyar vich milna bahut ghat te judaai aksar hi hundi hai....dua kardi aa haan ki tuhada pyar tuhanu jaroor miley....!

rabb raakh..

SUNITA JI..dua lai bahut bahut shukargujar ha..
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3rd February 2010, 06:35 PM

[quote=ADHURI HEER;382779]Oh My God Babbu ji, tuhadi kihari kihari line di tareeef kara, sariya hi ek duje to vad ke sohniya han, har line ch hi kamaaaaal hi kamaaaal aa ji
Baki talik g bilkul theek kehnade han Dil krda a ke tuhade samne baith suniyea tuhadi hi poem..
umm.. Rabh tuhadi har rejh poori kare..
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