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Love eh kaisi teri reet jogiya - 10th April 2010, 05:37 PM

tere vadeya ne kadoN hona poora ..!!
eh kaisi teri preet jogiya...
mainu es agg vichoN sarnoN bacha lay..
karenga kadoN thanda seet jogiya...

na pavai bhave kanna vich kach diyaN mundra..
tere naini dekha mai aapni tasveer jogiya..
kujh tur ta sahi tu mere dar vall nu..
maiN v mana teri sachi suchi preet jogiya...

meri rooh nu tu chalani hoN toN bacha lay..
kioN sune tu meri dil vali chees jogiya..
mainu apna lay mainu dubnoN bacha lay..
tu jane kion na meri tees jogiya..

aja RANJHAN de ves.. mera vasade pardes..
pardes v ho jaye mera des jogiya...
mera harra ve tu aja dar alakh jaga ja..
maiN v ho java tere hi ves jogiya...

bas ik khyal tere..ghuman char chufere..
maiN hoi ve shudaiya de bhes jogiya..
mere dil da tu chain..vekh mere ronde nain..
mera hoja bas mera.. mere badal jaan sare mare lekh jogiyaa..

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13th April 2010, 02:01 AM

bai ji....baut badhia likhia aa tusi...bilhul vakhraa ja aa....
aja RANJHAN de ves.. mera vasade pardes..
pardes v ho jaye mera des jogiya...

mera harra ve tu aja dar alakh jaga ja..
maiN v ho java tere hi ves jogiya.



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15th April 2010, 09:17 AM

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tere vadeya ne kadoN hona poora ..!!
eh kaisi teri preet jogiya...
mainu es agg vichoN sarnoN bacha lay..
karenga kadoN thanda seet jogiya...

na pavai bhave kanna vich kach diyaN mundra..
tere naini dekha mai aapni tasveer jogiya..
kujh tur ta sahi tu mere dar vall nu..
maiN v mana teri sachi suchi preet jogiya...

meri rooh nu tu chalani hoN toN bacha lay..
kioN sune tu meri dil vali chees jogiya..
mainu apna lay mainu dubnoN bacha lay..
tu jane kion na meri tees jogiya..

aja RANJHAN de ves.. mera vasade pardes..
pardes v ho jaye mera des jogiya...
mera harra ve tu aja dar alakh jaga ja..
maiN v ho java tere hi ves jogiya...

bas ik khyal tere..ghuman char chufere..
maiN hoi ve shudaiya de bhes jogiya..
mere dil da tu chain..vekh mere ronde nain..
mera hoja bas mera.. mere badal jaan sare mare lekh jogiyaa..

Babbu ji kihari kihari line bare kiha sariya hi ek duje to vad ke sohniya han, har line ch vakhari gall vakhra rang


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17th April 2010, 07:50 AM

SSA Babbu ji.....tusiN bahut hi vadhia likhia hai.....eddaN hi sanu sabh nu apni kalam de roo-b-roo karvande rehna....apna khayal rakhna




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[quote=RANJOT MANN;388782]bai ji....baut badhia likhia aa tusi...bilhul vakhraa ja aa....
aja RANJHAN de ves.. mera vasade pardes..
pardes v ho jaye mera des jogiya...
mera harra ve tu aja dar alakh jaga ja..
maiN v ho java tere hi ves jogiya.

mehrbani Ranjot ji .. tuhade beshkimti reply lai..
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[quote=ADHURI HEER;388917]Babbu ji kihari kihari line bare kiha sariya hi ek duje to vad ke sohniya han, har line ch vakhari gall vakhra rang


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[quote=Preet Dil Di;389109]SSA Babbu ji.....tusiN bahut hi vadhia likhia hai.....eddaN hi sanu sabh nu apni kalam de roo-b-roo karvande rehna....apna khayal rakhna

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17th April 2010, 10:37 AM

Babbu jii..........bahuttttttttt vadiya likhiya hai tusi, ek ek lafz dil nu chu geya, eh taan menu geet vaang lagiya, ek baar tusi b es nu gun-guna ke dekho taan sahi....

eh geet geya mere dil nu cheer jogiya,
sahi na jave teri judaai wali peed jogiya.


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[quote=sunita virender;389131]Babbu jii..........bahuttttttttt vadiya likhiya hai tusi, ek ek lafz dil nu chu geya, eh taan menu geet vaang lagiya, ek baar tusi b es nu gun-guna ke dekho taan sahi....

eh geet geya mere dil nu cheer jogiya,
sahi na jave teri judaai wali peed jogiya.


likhdey raho.....rabb raakha


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originaly posted by ababbu ji.........

tere vadeya ne kadoN hona poora ..!!
eh kaisi teri preet jogiya...

mainu es agg vichoN sarnoN bacha lay..
karenga kadoN thanda seet jogiya...

wah wah bahut khoob mazaa aa gya.



   
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shukriya Rajinderseep JI.. tusi ena pyara reply ditta..

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