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viah... - 25th October 2009, 06:18 PM

os khuda to hor ni mangna,bas mann lve ik dua.
mere seene nal tu kheh j ban k koi hwa.
aapa gal lag jayiye,koi hor ghadi na aave.
baahaa'n teriyaa de vich bhave jaan v nikal jave.

tera mera haan diye ho janda j viaah.
jind vech k poore krda tere sare chaa.

ik dooje de khyaal lai k,turde nalo nal.
hasdi-2 zindgi honi c,sohni te khushhaal.
main tainu c tichra krniyaa,tera garam subaah.
tu rusdi bdi sohni lage,jdo beh j muh fulla.
tainu ghut k hiq nal launda,aape lainda mna.
tera mera haan diye ho janda j viaah...

jo kehndi tu suit dwaunda.
husn tere to jaan lutaunda.
tera har ik chaa pugaunda.
bhave mera mukda saah.
tera mera haan diye j......

pai gyi doori,ki majboori.
hun ishq nu tarse choori.
sohni dubbe ajj v,vagde khooni dariyaa.
tera mera.

kio hai kita mere nal.
vekh na skia tere nal.
yad teri de chere nal.
shad gya mainu khuda....
tera mera haan diye.....
   
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28th October 2009, 02:22 PM

Deep ji geet te theek si par eh line kujh kamzor lagdee hai

tera mera haan diye ho janda j viaah.

Agar es nu kisey hor tarah likhan kar sako taan changaa hovegaa


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17th August 2010, 10:28 AM

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os khuda to hor ni mangna,bas mann lve ik dua.
mere seene nal tu kheh j ban k koi hwa.
aapa gal lag jayiye,koi hor ghadi na aave.
baahaa'n teriyaa de vich bhave jaan v nikal jave.

tera mera haan diye ho janda j viaah.
jind vech k poore krda tere sare chaa.

ik dooje de khyaal lai k,turde nalo nal.
hasdi-2 zindgi honi c,sohni te khushhaal.
main tainu c tichra krniyaa,tera garam subaah.
tu rusdi bdi sohni lage,jdo beh j muh fulla.
tainu ghut k hiq nal launda,aape lainda mna.
tera mera haan diye ho janda j viaah...

jo kehndi tu suit dwaunda.
husn tere to jaan lutaunda.
tera har ik chaa pugaunda.
bhave mera mukda saah.
tera mera haan diye j......

pai gyi doori,ki majboori.
hun ishq nu tarse choori.
sohni dubbe ajj v,vagde khooni dariyaa.
tera mera.

kio hai kita mere nal.
vekh na skia tere nal.
yad teri de chere nal.
shad gya mainu khuda....
tera mera haan diye.....


deep ji ahsaas dil nu chu gaye ek tadap ek majboori da ahsaas hoeya tuhanu padke.

rabb tuhanu khush rakhe


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17th August 2010, 11:10 AM

ik dooje de khyaal lai k,turde nalo nal.
hasdi-2 zindgi honi c,sohni te khushhaal.
main tainu c tichra krniyaa,tera garam subaah.
tu rusdi bdi sohni lage,jdo beh j muh fulla.
tainu ghut k hiq nal launda,aape lainda mna.
tera mera haan diye ho janda j viaah...


bahut hi pyare ehsaas DEEP JI..
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20th August 2010, 10:49 PM

thnx sunita g,,and ababbu g..mehrbani....bas shyd sahi ja nai likh skia ,,ehsaas ta bahut pyare ne..........ki dsa
   
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