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1st April 2013, 01:24 AM
Jaun Elia December 14, 1931 – November 8, 2002. was a notable Pakistani urdu languagepoet philosopher, biographer, and scholar. He was fluent in Arabic, English, Persian, Sanskrit and Hebrew.
Jaun Elia was born on 14 December 1931 in Amroha, Uttar Pradesh. He was the youngest of his siblings. His father, Shafiq Hasan Elia, was involved in art and literature and also an astrologer and a poet. This literary environment modeled him along the same lines, and he wrote his first Urdu couplet when he was just 8. As a young man he was interested in Islamic history. He migrated to Pakistan in 1957, and made Karachi his home. His poetry won him both acclaim and approbation in the local literary circle. He remained in quest of an ideal all his life. Unable to find the ideal eventually, he became angry and frustrated. He felt, perhaps with reason, that he had squandered his talent. Elia was an open anarchist and nihilist in generally a conservative and religious society. His elder brother Rais Amrohvi, himself a poet and influential intellectual, was murdered. He briefly worked as an editor with Ismaili Tariqah and Religious Education Board in Karachi. He acquired knowledge of philosophy, logic, Islamic history, the Muslim Sufi tradition, Muslim religious sciences, Western literature, and Kabbala. His synthesis of this knowledge into his poetry differentiates him from his modern contemporaries. He also edited the Urdu literary magazine Insha, through which he came to know another Urdu writer, Zahida Hina, whom he later married. He had two daughters and a son with her. Jaun and Zahida divorced in the mid-1980s which left him alcoholic and depressed.He died after a protracted illness on 8 November 2002 in Karachi. Some of his poetry collection:
Part 1 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=086YoP7kNr0 Part 2 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZZGJL0o84-o Part 3 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7l3JpnQPamE  Kaisa dil aur uske kya gham jee, Yu’n hee baatain banaatey hain, hum jee, Kya bhalaa aasteen aur daaman, Kab se palkein bhi ab nahi nam jee, Ussey ab koi baat kya kerna, Khud se bhi baat kije kam-kam jee, Dil jo dil kya tha, ek mehfil tha, Ab hai darham jee aur barham jee, Baat be-tour ho gayi shayad, Zakhm bhi ab nahi hai, marham jee, Haar duniya se maan le shayad, Dil, hamaare mein ab nahi, dam jee, Hai yeh hasrat ke zibah ho jaun, Hai shikan is shikam ki zaalam jee, Kaise aakhir na rang khele’n hum, Dil lahoo ho raha hai, jaanam jee, Hai kharaaba yeh husniya apna, Roz majlis hai aur maatam jee, Waqt dam bhar ka khel hai usme, Besh az besh hai, kam az kam jee, Hai azal se abad talak ka hisaab, Aur bus ek pal hai peham jee, Be-shikan ho gayi hai woh zulfein, Is gali mein nahi rahe kham jee, Dasht-e-dil ka ghazaal hee na raha, Ab bhalaa kis se kijiye ram jee… Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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1st April 2013, 12:56 PM
Masha Allaah zainy saahiba.......... sach kahun to tahe dil se mutassir huaa main aapke is nek kaam se.... behad khushi ka sabab hai ke is poore mahine jaun hamaare saah rahenge...
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2nd April 2013, 01:24 AM
Shukriyah Sameer sahab........
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2nd April 2013, 01:26 AM
meri aql-o-hosh ki sab haalatein
tumne saanchein mein junoon mein dhaal deein kar lia tha maine ahd-e-tark-e-ishq tumne phir baahein gale mein daal deein yun to apne qaasidaan-e-dil ke paas jaane kis kis ke liye paighaam hain per likhe hain maine jo auron ke naam mere wo khat bhi tumhare naam hain ye tere khat, tiree khushboo, ye tere khawab-o-khyaal mataa-e-jaan hain tere qaul-o-qasam ki tarah guzishtaa saal maine inhein gin ke rakha tha kisi ghareeb ki jori hui raqam ki tarah kitne zaalim hain jo ye kehte hain tod lo phool, phool choro mat baagbaaN ! ham to is khyaal ke hain dekh lo phool, phool toro mat hai muhabbat, hayaat ki lazzat warna kuch lazzat-e-hayaat nahin kya ijazat hai, ek baat kahuuN wo….magar khair koii baat nahin sharm, dehshat, jhijhak, parishaani naaz se kaam kyuN nahin letiiN aap, wo, jee, magar, ye sab kya hai tum miraa naam kyuN nahin letiiN saalhaa saal aur ek lamhaa koi bhi to na inmein bal aaya khud hi ek dar pe maine dastak dee khud hi ladkaa sa main nikal aaya -Jaun Elia http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNNqVSftXAc Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd April 2013, 10:54 AM
sharm, dehshat, jhijhak, parishaani
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2nd April 2013, 11:01 AM
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mujhe pata naheen tumhara in ashaar ko post kerne ka yahan kyaa matlab hai. mager mein tumhien ek baat bataayoon jo shayed tumhein pata na ho. John Eliya saheb ki tamaam zindagi in hi ashaar ki tarah muntashir aur bikhri bikhri se guzri hai. Un ke ehbaab yeh baat bohat achchi tarah jaante hain. Voh ek bad-dimaagh, rookhe insaan ke taur per jaane jaate hain mager voh kyaa they in ashaar mein zahir hota hai. kitne zaalim hain jo ye kehte hain tod lo phool, phool choro mat baagbaaN ! ham to is khyaal ke hain dekh lo phool, phool toro mat anyway thanks for sharing. God bless you. mushi |
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2nd April 2013, 11:06 AM
Musharraf sahab...accha laga aapko is thread per dekhker....is thread ko banane ka maqsad sirf yahi hai hum is mahine Jaun sahab ko zyada zyada jaan sakeiN, aur unke kalamoN ko padh sakeiN....
sabhi members se guzarish hai ke is thread per Jaun sahab ki ghazaleiN /nazameiN yahaaN post kareiN... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd April 2013, 11:12 AM
John Eliya saheb ki ek khoobsurat ghazal mein bhi aap doston se share kerna chahoon gaa.
SEENA DEHAK RAHA HAI TO KYA CHUP RAHE KOEE KYUN CHEEKH CHEEKH KER NA GALA CHEEL LE KOEE SAABIT HUAA SUKOON E DIL O JAAN KAHEEN NAHEEN RISHTON MEIN DHOONDTA HAI TO DHOONDA KARE KOEE TARK E TUALLUQAAT KOEE MASALA NAHEEN YEH TO VOH RAASTA HAI KE BAS CHAL PARHE KOEE DEEWAAR JAANTA THA JISE MEIN VOH DHOOL THEE AB MUJH KO ETIMAAD KI DAAWAT NA DE KOEE MEIN KHUD YEH CHAHTA HOON KE HAALAAT HON KHARAB MERE KHILAAF ZEHER UGALTA PHIRE KOEE HAAN THEEK HAI MEIN APNI ANA KA MAREEZ HOON AAKHIR MERE MIZAAJ MEIN KYUN DAKHL DE KOEE EK SHAKHS KER RAHA HAI ABHI TAK WAFA KA ZIKR KAASH IS ZABAN DARAAZ KA MUUN NOACH LE KOEE JOHN ELIYA |
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2nd April 2013, 11:41 AM
kitne zaalim hain jo ye kehte hain
tod lo phool, phool choro mat baagbaaN ! ham to is khyaal ke hain dekh lo phool, phool toro mat waahh bhai gauhar pesh kiyaa hai apane.. kamaal ka sher kaha gaya hai.. kamaalke andaaz ke saath... aur kamaal ke waqt pe kamaal kisharing ki hai aapne mushi bhai..... thanks alo bro.... keep sharing and let us know more and more about him... tc Shaad... |
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3rd April 2013, 12:06 AM
Kisi Libaas Ki Khushboo Jab Ud Ke Aati Hai
Tere Badan Ki Judaii Bahut Satati Hai Tera Baghair Mujhe Chain Kaise Padta Hai Mere Baghair Tujhe Neend Kaise Aati Hai - Jon Elia tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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3rd April 2013, 01:35 AM
Ek Gali thi jab us se Hum nikle
aise nikle ke jaise dumm nikle Koocha-e-Arzoo jo tha, us mein Zulf-e-Jaanan tarha ke khum nikle Aag Dil-Sheher mein lagi jis din sabse aakhir mein vaan se hum nikle jinse Dil ka mo´amla hota yaan bohot kam hi aise gham nikle hai shikayat ke voh bhi voh nikla hai nadamat ke hum bhi hum nikle "Jaun" yeh jo vujood hai, yeh vujood kya banegi agar adam nikle Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th April 2013, 01:23 AM
Naya ek rishta paida kyun karein hum
Bicharna hai to jhhagra kyon karain hum Khamoshi se ada ho rasm.E.Duri Koi humgama barpa kyon karain hum Ye kafi hai k hum dushman nahi hain Wafa-Dari ka da’awa kyon karain hum Wafa, ikhlaas, qurbani, mohabbat Ab inn lafzon ka peecha kyon karain hum Suna dain ismat.E.Maryam ka qissa? Par ab iss baab ko waa kyon karain hum Zulekhaa.E.Azeezaan baat ye hai Bhala ghaatay ka sauda kyon karain hum Hamari hee tamanna kyon karo tum Tumhari hee tamanna kyon karain hum Kia tha e’had jab lamhon mein hum nay To saari umar iifa kyon karain hum Nahi dunya ko jab parwah hamari To phir dunya ki parwah kyon karain hum Barehna hain sar.E.Bazaar to kia Bhala andhon se pardah kyon karain hum Hain baashinday issi basti k hum bhi So khud par bhi bharosa kyon karain hum Pari rehnay do insaanon ki laashain Zameen ka bojh halka kyon karain hum Ye basti hai muslamaanon ki basti Yahan kar.E.Maseeha kyon karain hum http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CVpgw-qVclU Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th April 2013, 11:15 AM
John saheb ke kalam ka zikr ho to yeh 2 shayr jo unhon ne doston ki ek mehfil mein kahe mein kabhi naheen bhool sakta.
kamal shakhsiyet thi john saheb ki fil-badih kehte they aur kyaa khoob "Chara saazon ki charah saazi se" Dard badnaam to naheen ho gaa Haan dawa do , mager yeh batla do "Mujhe aaraam to naheen ho gaa" musharrafhusain |
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4th April 2013, 12:08 PM
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Musharraf sahab aapki baatoN se mehsoos hota hai ke aap Jaun sahab ko personally jaantay thay?...... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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famous lovely lines of Jon saheb...... thanks for sharing musharraf bhai.... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Mera ek sawaal un logoN se jo John saahab ke baare me zyaada ilmiyat rakhte hain aur khastaur se musharraf sahab aapse...
Janaab ka asal naam kya johN Eliya hi thaa... Ya fir john inhone kisi cheez se mutassir ho kar takahllus ki tarah istemaal kiyaa.... jaise ki inki paidaish UP ke muslim gharaane me huii.. to ye naam kaisaa hai.. agar ho sake to iska maaini bataiyegaa.... mujhe is baare me bilkul bhi ilm nahi hai... jo ho sake to roshni daaleN... shukriyaa Shaad... |
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5th April 2013, 06:50 PM
kisi libaas ki khushboo jab ud ke aati hai
tere badan ki judaii bahut satati hai tera bagair mujhe chain kaise padta hai mere bagair tujhe neend kaise aati hai minnatein hain khyaal ki tere khoob guzri tere khyaal ke sath maine ek zindagi basar kar dee tere naa-deeda khatt-o-khaal ke saaath saari aql-o-hosh ki aashaiyein tumne saanchein mein junoon mein dhaal deein kar lia tha maine ahd-e-tark-e-ishq tumne phir baahein gale mein daal deein dil mein jinka nishaan bhi na raha kyun na chehroN pe ab wo rang khilein ab to khaali hai rooh jazboN se ab bhi kya ham tapaak se na milein mere aur uske darmiyaan ab to sirf ek roo ba roo ka rishta hai haaye wo rishta, haaye khamoshi ab faqat guftagoo ka rishta hai Jaun Elia Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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7th April 2013, 01:18 AM
aKhlaaq na barteNge mudaaraa na kareNge
ab hum kisii shaKhs kii paravaah na kareNge kuchh log ka_ii lafz galat bol rahe haiN isalaah magar ham bhii ab isalaah na kareNge kam_go_ii ke ek vasf-e-himaaqat hai bahar to kam_go_ii ko apanaayeNge chahakaa na kareNge ab sahal pasaNdii ko banaayeNge vatiiraa taa der kisii baab meN sochaa na kareNge Gussaa bhii hai tahaziib-e-ta'lluq kaa talabagaar ham chhup haiN bahare baiThe haiN Gussaa na kareNge kal raat bahut guur kiyaa hai so ham ai "Jaun" tay kar ke uThe haiN ke tamannaa na kareNge Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th April 2013, 12:55 AM
Tujh se gilay karoon tujhe janaa’n manaaon main,
Ik bar apne aap mein aaon to aaon main, Dil se sitam ki be’saro kaari hawaa ko hai, Woh gard urraa rahi hai ke khud ko ganwaaon main, Naadim hoon woh ke jis pe nadaamat bhi ab nahin, Woh kaam hain ke apni judai kamaaon main, Kyon’kar ho apne khawab ki aankhon mein wapsi, Kis taur apne dil ke zamamon mein jaaon main, Ik rang si kamaa’n ho khushbu sa ik teer, Marham si ik wardaat ho aur zakham khaon main, Shikwa sa aik dareecha ho, nasha sa ik sakoot, Ho shaam aik sharab si aur larr’khraon main, Phir is gali se apna guzar chahta hai dil, Ab is gali ko kaunsi basti se laaon main.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th April 2013, 03:07 PM
abhii farmaan aayaa hai vahaaN se
ke haT jaauuN maiN apne darmiyaaN se yahaaN jo hai tanaffus hii meN kam hai parinde uR rahe haiN shaaKh-e-jaaN se dariichaa baaz (?) hai yaadoN kaa aur maiN havaa suntaa huN peRon ki zabaaN se thaa ab tak m’arkaa baahaar kaa dar-pesh abhii to ghar bhii jaanaa hai yahaaN se falaaN se behtar thii Ghazal falaaN kii falaaN ke zaKhm acche the falaaN se Khabar kyaa duuN maiN shah’r-e-raftugaaN kii ko’ii lauTe bhii shah’r-e-raftugaaN se yahii anjaam kyaa tujh ko havas thaa ko’ii puuche to meer-e-daastaaN se Jaun Elia http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWRNVUPCbKg Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th April 2013, 12:46 AM
kitane aish uDaate hoNge kitane itaraate hoNge
jaane kaise log vo hoNge jo us ko bhaate hoNge us kii yaad kii baad-e-sabaa meN aur to kyaa hotaa hogaa yuuN hii mere baal haiN bikhare aur bikhar jaate hoNge baNd rahe jin kaa daravaazaa aise gharoN kii mat puuchho diivaareN gir jaatii hoNgii aaNgan rah jaate hoNge merii saaNs ukhaDate hii sab baiN kareNge ro'eNge yaanii mere baad bhii yaanii saaNs liye jaate hoNge yaaro kuchhh to baat bataa'o us kii qayaamat baahoN kii vo jo simaTate hoNge in meN vo to mar jaate hoNge http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_Fz3cte9D0 Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th April 2013, 09:10 AM
Waahhh kya khoob Nageene khoj kar laati ho Zainy saahiba aap......
Bhaot ummdah intekhaab hain... thanks for sharing...... |
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10th April 2013, 04:57 PM
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haalat-e-haal kay sabab haalat-e-haal hi gaii shouq meiN kuchh nahiN gaya shauq ki zindagii gaii tera firaaq jaan-e-jaaN aish tha kya meray liye yaani teray firaaq meiN khoob sharaab pii gaii teray wisaal kay liye apnay kamaal kay liye haalat-e-dil keh thi kharab aur kharab ki gaii aik hi hadisa to hai aur woh yeh keh aaj tak baat nahiN kahi gaii baat nahin sunii gaii baad bhi teray jaan-e-jaaN dil meiN raha ajab samaaN yaad rahi teri yahaN phir teri yaad bhii gaii us kay badan ko dii namood hum ne sukhan meiN aur phir us kay badan kay waastay aik qabaa bhi sii gaii sehn-e-khayal-e-yaar meiN ki na basar shab-e-firaaq jab say woh chandna gaya jab say woh chandni gaii nasha-e-shauq-e-rang meiN tujh say judaai ki gaii aik lakeer khoon ki beech meiN kheench di gaii thi jo kabhi sar-e-sukhan meri woh khaamoshi gaii haaye kahan sunan ki baat, haaye woh bat hi gaii shauq ki aik umr meiN kaisay badal sakayga dil nabz-e-junoon hi to thi sheher meiN Doobti gaii us ki galii se uTh kay maiN aan paRa tha apnay ghar aik galii ki baat thi aur gali gali gaii us ki umeed-e-naaz ka hum say yeh maan tha kay aap umr guzaar dijiye umr guzaar di gaii daur ba daur, dil ba dil, dard ba dard, dam ba damm teray yahaN ri´ayat-e-haal nahiN rakhi gaii jaun junoob-e-zard kay khaak basar yeh dukh uThha mauj-e-shmial-e-sabz-e-jaaN aai thi aur chali gaii kya woh gumaaN nahiN raha? haan woh gumaN nahin raha kya woh umeed bhi gaii? haan woh umeed bhi gaii baat koi umeed ki mujh say nahiN kahi gaii so meray khwab bhi gaye, so meri neend bhi gaii jaaniye kya talaash thi jaun meray wujood meiN jis ko maiN DhoonDta gaya, jo mujhay DhoonDti gaii aik khushi ka haal hai khush-sukhanaN kay darmyaaN izaat-e-shaaiqeen-e-gham thi jo rahi sahi gaii jab maiN tha shehr-e-zaat ka tha mera har nafas azaab phir maiN wahaN ka tha jahaN haalat-e-zaat bhi gaii tum nay bohot sharaab pii is ka sabhi ko dukh hai jaun aur jo dukh hai woh yeh hai tum ko sharaab pii gaii jaan teray firaaq meiN shaam say shab jo ki gaii khuub sharaab pii gaii aur kharaab pii gaii shikwa jo hai to is ka hai shikwa nahiN kiya gaya ranj jo hai to is ka hai baat faqat sahi gaii sood-o-zayaaN to khair kya in ki tameez hai ajab waisay isi tameez meiN apni to zindagi gaii jis ka surood-e-roshni mehfil-e-shab faroz tha us dil-e-daagh zaar say apni hi roshni gaii Jaun elia Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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11th April 2013, 05:15 PM
Sameer mere bhai
sorry mein aap ke mail jis mein aap ne John eliye saheb ke naam ke bare mein poocha hai dekh naheen saka thaa. muazrat khuah hoon. John saheb ke naam ke bare mein mujhe bhi kaafi ibhaam raha hai. mein koshish karoon ga ke jald hi is bare mein aap ko tafseeli jawab de sakoon. Khush rahein . musharrafhusain |
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12th April 2013, 12:26 PM
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Asal me baat kuch khaas nahi hai, naam to kisi ka bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai.. magar ye jaan'na accha lagta hai us shakhs ke baare me jo aapko behad pasand ho, ke aisi kya wajah thi, ke inhone apna naam john rakha... ye ye lafz khud urdu arbi ka ho aur mujhe pata na ho... bas yahi jaanna chahta tha.. agar aap bataenge to behad mehrbani hogi.... shukriyaa Shaad... |
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12th April 2013, 02:57 PM
zaKhm-e-ummiid bhar gayaa kab kaa
Qais to apne ghar gayaa kab kaa aap ik aur niind le liijiye qaafilaa kuuch kar gayaa kab kaa dukh ka lamhaa azal abad lamhaa vaqt ke paar utar gayaa kab kaa apna muuNh ab to mat dikhaoa mujhe naasiho, maiN sudhar gayaa kab kaa nasshaa hone kaa be-tarah thaa kabhi par vo zaalim utar gayaa kab kaa aap ab puuchney ko aaye haiN? dil merii jaan, mar gayaa kab kaa Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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12th April 2013, 11:50 PM
ham to jaise yahaaN ke the hii nahiiN
dhuup the saayabaa.N ke the hii nahiiN [saayabaa.N = cornice] raaste kaaravaaN ke saath rahe marhale kaaravaaN ke the hii nahiiN [marhale = obstacles/difficulties] ab hamaaraa makaan kis kaa hai ham to apane makaaN ke the hii nahiiN in ko aaNdhi meN hii bikharanaa thaa baal-o-par yahaaN ke the hii nahiiN [baal-o-par = arms and wings] us galii ne ye sun ke sabr kiyaa jaane vaale yahaaN ke the hii nahiiN [sabr karanaa = to be patient] ho terii Khaak-e-aastaaN pe salaam ham tere aastaaN ke the hii nahiiN [Khaak = dust; aastaaN = threshold] Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th April 2013, 04:13 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uRNa9UNm4Jg Tum haqiqat nahi ho hasrat ho Jo mile khaab meN wo daulat ho MaiN tumhare hi dam se zinda huN Mar hi jauN jo tum se fursat ho Tum ho khushbu k Khab ki khushbu Aur utni hi, be – murawwat ho Tum ho pahlu meN par qaraar nahi Yaani aisa hai jaise furqat ho Tum ho angRayii rang O nikhat ki Kaise angRayi se shikaayat ho Kis tarah choR duN tumhein janaN Tum meri zindagi ki aadat ho Kis liye dekhti ho aayeena Tum to khud se bhi khubsurat ho DaastaaN khatm hone wali hai Tum meri aakhri muhabbat ho Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th April 2013, 05:24 PM
Tum ho angRayii rang O nikhat ki
Kaise angRayi se shikaayat ho Kis liye dekhti ho aayeena Tum to khud se bhi khubsurat ho wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.. . Zainy Saheba... be-had shukriyaaH....... is kalaam se mustafeed hone k liye........ tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th April 2013, 09:04 AM
MaiN tumhare hi dam se zinda huN
Mar hi jauN jo tum se fursat ho Wallaah kya kehne.... is sher ke liye 500 rupae meri taraf se inaam zainy jee......   |
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14th April 2013, 03:13 PM
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Pasand karne ke liye shukriyah Hassan sahab............. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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14th April 2013, 03:14 PM
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......Waqay Anmol sher hai............... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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14th April 2013, 03:24 PM
aik saayaa meraa masiihaa thaa !
kaun jaane, vo kaun tha, kyaa thaa ? vo faqat sehn tak hii aatii thii maiN bhii hujre se kam nikaltaa thaa tujh ko bhuulaa nahiiN vo shaKhs ke jo terii baaNhoN meN bhii akelaa thaa jaan-levaa thiiN KhaahisheN varnaa vasl se intizaar achchaa thaa baat to dil-shikan hai par, yaaro ! aql sachchii thii, ishq jhuuTa thaa ! apne mayyaar tak na pahuNchaa maiN mujhko Khud par baRaa bharosaa thaa jism ki saaf-go’ii ke baa-vasf ruuh ne kitnaa jhuuT bolaa thaa ! Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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15th April 2013, 10:34 AM
John Eliya saheb ka ek shayr jo hamesha mere shareek e haal rehta hai.
"MEIN BHI AJEEB SHAKHS HOON, ITNA AJEEB HOON KE BAS" "KHUD KO TABAAH KER LIYA, AUR MALAAL BHI NAHEEN" |
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