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Chaand or mai -
24th May 2013, 03:44 PM
pehle har raat...mujhe raat bhar...takta tha wo Chaand
Pehle har raat ..mujh pe nazar...rakhta tha wo Chaand, na jaane kyoN ...mujhko ye dakhal andaazi na bhaati thi na jaane kyoN .. uski ye aadat... mujhe raas na aati thi, wo aksar meri muflisi pe..reh reh ke muskuraata tha raat bhar apni chaandni se ...mere badan ko jalaata tha, apne aasmaan me hone per... bada gurur tha usko, chamakte chehre me wo... aksar un daagoN ko chhupaata tha, mujhe bhi khabar thi shaayad.. mai usko na jhuka paunga meri bhi nazar thi shaayad...khud ko utna na utha paunga, or kabtak is jalan me jeeta...khudko kuchh yooN samjha liya gaye roj maine bhi ... apni diwaaroN pe Chhappar laga liya...  Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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25th May 2013, 09:35 AM
sadiyoN baad aapko yahaaN dekh kar dil ko bahut khushi hui saaheb, aur ahcha likha hai aapne, aapke likhne me vo ek ajeeb si kasak ki feeling aaj bhi kaayam hai, kush alag si aapki ye kaavish padh ke bahut maza aaya, yuNhi likhte rahiye saaheb...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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29th May 2013, 10:57 AM
Chand mere bhai
zabardast aur kamal ka khayaal pesh kiya hai aapne. meri bharpoor daad qubuul karein apni is nazuk khayali aur parwaz e takhuyul ki. khush raehein, aabaad rahein. musharrafhusain |
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31st May 2013, 09:40 PM
Shukriya DostoN aapki is zarra-nawaazi ke liye.. mai jaanta hooN kuchh khas nahi likh paata per aapki daad jaroor use khaas bana deti hai...
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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Warm welcome Chaand ji |
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Warm welcome Chaand ji -
1st June 2013, 12:09 PM
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SDC ka CHAAND......EID ka Chaand..... lout aaye hai phir se purani bahareN, ho rha hai dil ko gumaaN...............! sabko kar do khabar ab na rhe koi gayab, SDC par bahut haseeN hai ab samma. Chaand ji, behad khoobsurat ahsaas...hame behad khush hai aapko vapis SDC par dekh kar...abhi abhi hamne purani member Sukanya ji ko bhi SDC par pada unki tazza gazal ke saath aur ab aapko...bahut khush hai ham....! agar hamare nye member Heera hai to purane member Sona hai, aur Heere ko jodne ke liye Sone ka hona bahut jaroori hai......!! aate rahiyega god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Welcome back Chaand ji |
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Welcome back Chaand ji -
10th October 2014, 11:31 PM
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dekho Chaand aaya, chaand nazar aaya............. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th October 2014, 06:44 PM
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Gazab dhaa raha hai ab bhi chaand..kya baat huzoor aapki is hat ke rachnaa ki to hum kayal ho gaye.. autograph lene delhi aana padegaa ab to Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa aapka apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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11th October 2014, 08:06 PM
Bahut khoobsurat rachna chaand ji...khyaal bahut pasand aaye....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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12th October 2014, 04:14 PM
bahot khoob Chaand bhai......... aapki kavish ne dil khush kar diyaa........
likhte rahiye...... Shaad.... |
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13th October 2014, 10:19 PM
Shukriya DostoN meri is rachna ko dobaara yahaaN jivit karne ke liye or meri hausla afzaai ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hooN...
Sunita ji... aapne to lagta hai kasam kha li sab dostoN ko phir se jodne ki... koshish rahegi aapki is koshish ko ham sab or aage barha sakeiN. Dhanyawaad ek baar phir. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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13th October 2014, 10:37 PM
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Chaand ji...dosto ka milna to khushi ki baat hoti hai...aur ham chahte hai ki ham kuch aur to kisi ke liye bhi kar nahi sakte, par dosto ko milane ka kaam to kar sakte hai...sabki khushi meiN hame bhi khushi mil jaati hai...! aik aur aik gayareh hote hai, aapki tarah hame baaki sab dosto ka saath bhi mil jaye to hame yakeen hai SDC par phir wahi mahool hoga jaisa hamare aane par tha yaani ki aaj se 7-8 saal pehle shukriya Chaand ji, hame saath dene ke liye .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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