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fikraaN vich muk jana - 19th August 2008, 01:43 PM

fikran de vich mai jameya sajjna ,
fikraan vich muk jana,

preet aapni nu tere jed karda,
lagda mai muk jana,

ya fer tutna tare wangu
vich ambri hi muk jana,

ya fer gila balan sajna,
mukan tak dhukh jana,

ya fer rejh sarapi koi,
jehne dil andar suk jana,

ya fer ik chakor nimana,
chann wall udari bhardeda khamb adh wate tut jana,

ya fer ik purana calendar
langhi tareek te fer kude vich sut jana,

ya fer ikk basi full,
na mandir te na knajri de kothe dhareya jana,

tera thukraya kaun nawajega mainu,
sachi til til karda muk jana...




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19th August 2008, 03:16 PM

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fikran de vich mai jameya sajjna ,
fikraan vich muk jana,

preet aapni nu tere jed karda,
lagda mai muk jana,

ya fer tutna tare wangu
vich ambri hi muk jana,

ya fer gila balan sajna,
mukan tak dhukh jana,

ya fer rejh sarapi koi,
jehne dil andar suk jana,

ya fer ik chakor nimana,
chann wall udari bhardeda khamb adh wate tut jana,

ya fer ik purana calendar
langhi tareek te fer kude vich sut jana,

ya fer ikk basi full,
na mandir te na knajri de kothe dhareya jana,

tera thukraya kaun nawajega mainu,
sachi til til karda muk jana...



hamesha di tarah bahut umda likhiya hai.....dilli mubarakbaad kabool karo.
reps +++

kush raho


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20th August 2008, 08:58 AM

[quote=sunita virender;304182]hamesha di tarah bahut umda likhiya hai.....dilli mubarakbaad kabool karo.
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21st August 2008, 02:34 AM

Babbu ji tuhadi poetry hamesha hi bahut khubsurat hundi hai, very gooooooooood lines

tera thukraya kaun nawajega mainu,
sachi til til karda muk jana...


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21st August 2008, 09:32 AM

[quote=ADHURI HEER;304347]Babbu ji tuhadi poetry hamesha hi bahut khubsurat hundi hai, very gooooooooood lines

tera thukraya kaun nawajega mainu,
sachi til til karda muk jana.
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22nd August 2008, 04:50 PM

Shaandaar hai babbu ji. Shiv di jhalak payi kujh. Fantastic


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24th August 2008, 06:23 AM


Babbu ji bahut hi sohna likhiya hai.
har ek line var var parnh lai dil karda hai.

preet aapni nu tere jed karda,
lagda mai muk jana








   
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30th August 2008, 11:48 AM

[quote=tilakji;304456]Shaandaar hai babbu ji. Shiv di jhalak payi kujh. Fantastic

TILAK JI tusi ena jyada maan dita hai tuhada bahut bahut rini ha..
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30th August 2008, 11:51 AM

[quote=Preet Dil Di;304557]Babbu ji bahut hi sohna likhiya hai.
har ek line var var parnh lai dil karda hai.

preet aapni nu tere jed karda,
lagda mai muk jana

thanks PREET JI..
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