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Question Ham Ji rahe hain Is tarah - 31st May 2004, 06:51 PM

Kis Tara Se Jeeta hain??

har subha ka suraj kuchh aur kaheta hain..
ansuo main aankho ka noor kuch aur raheta hain..

ankhe pyasi hain tuze dekhne ko is tara...
ab to pattharo ka chahera b hame kuch aur lagta hai

muskurahat saja li hian ham ne apne hotho pe...
par khali dil mere aaj b tere doorioo ko rota hain...

aarzu thi tuze dekhane ki zindagi bhar...
par wo khuda bhi yaaro bas kuchh aur sochta hain.....

puchhte hain wo : din kistara se kaat te hain..?
door chale gae to dil hame yaad b karta hain??

muskurahat gam aur mahobbat sulagte hain sath sath.....
koi ja ke unse kahede kucch is tara se jeeta hain "aakash"


~:@ka$h:~


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1st June 2004, 07:08 PM

Hello Aakaash...

Welcome to this site... Achchhaa likhaa hai aap ne... Khas kar yah line ...

muskurahat gam aur mahobbat sulagte hain sath sath.....
koi ja ke unse kahede kucch is tara se jeeta hain "aakash"

Hame pasand aayaa.. Likhte rahiye...

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