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Josh maano baat Pooja ki zaraa tum - Pooja or Dhaval ki jugal'bandi |
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Josh maano baat Pooja ki zaraa tum - Pooja or Dhaval ki jugal'bandi -
12th June 2015, 06:19 PM
Hello Shayar People
 ...Bahot Saalo baad yaha pe kuch post kar rahi hu... ya yun kahu ke post karne pe Majboor kiya gaya hai mujhe  .... or vo insaan DHAVAL hai jisne haath pakad ke mujhse khud ki aadhi-adhuri ghazal puri karwai hai  .. hehehe... just kidding... kai logo ne kaha tha mujhe ke main wapas likhna shuru karu par time hi nahi mil pa raha tha... Par Arse baad main wapas aai hu Dhaval ke sath .. humne pahle bhi kai baar sath me Ghazal likhi hai post ki hai ... usi purani yaad ko tazaa karte hue hum dono ki likhi hui ek koshish yaha Pesh kar rahi hu.. Ummid hai aap sabhi ka Pyaar hume milega jese pahle milta tha  ....Hai zaruurii zindagee mein pyaar yaaron Ghum bhi lelo muft me do char yaaron Aa gayaa jo aashiqon me naam meraa Dhadknon kii badh gayii raftaar yaaron Saikado ghum bhar diye chhote se dil me Pyaar me tohfe mile bekaar yaaron Ro padoge jo mai keh duu raaz dil ka Lut chuke haiN ishq mein har baar yaaron Dosatii or dushmanii men farq yeh haii Dosatee gul dushmanii haii khaar yaaroN Arsa-e-zist guzri us mahobbat ko fanah hue Hai ab bhi zikr uska mujhme shumaar yaaron Khud sa na wo raha na mujhko mujh sa chhoda Ye hashr tha jab mile kisi gali koonche bazar yaaron Josh maano baat Pooja ki zaraa tum Muskuraa kar mushkile karo paar yaaron  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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12th June 2015, 06:52 PM
Deepika ji namaste,
Yoon to aap kafi purani member hai par hum naye members ko pehli baar mauka mila hai aapko padhneka.... Bohot khoob gazal hui hai....gumzada ehsaas jo joshile bhi hai aur positive bhi.....behad khoobsurat gazal...aapko aur Dhaval sahab dono ko bohot bohot shubhkamnayen Daad kubul farmaiyega Duao k sath Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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12th June 2015, 07:57 PM
Dear pooja..
Bahut khushi huyi ki aakhir aapne sab logon ki request ka maan rakha aur itni khoobsoorat ghazal hamare sath share ki..aap dono ki jugalbandi ko salaam..bahut pyare ehsaason se saji huyi peshkash lagi mujhe..sabhi ashaar bahut khoob... dher sari daad aur duayein aapke liye aur dhaval bhai k liye... Likhti rahiye.. aati rahiyega.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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12th June 2015, 08:40 PM
Deepika ji ,
Bahut acha kalam raha apka per ye sher bahut bhaya mujhe .. Dosatii or dushmanii men farq yeh haii Dosatee gul dushmanii haii khaar yaaroN Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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12th June 2015, 11:03 PM
Dear poojaa
Namaste tumhe bazm mein dekh kar jo khushii ho rahii hai usse lafzon mein bayaan maiN kar nahiiN saktaa... kaafi waqt beet chukaa thaa likhnaa jaise tumne bandh hi kar diyaa thaa... par aaj bazm mein koshish ko dekh kar bahot hi khushii ho rahii hay.... main yahee chaahtaa huun ki bazm se tum jiudii raho aur hameshaa likhtee raho... mujhe aaj bhee yaad hai main jab bazm se nayaa nayaa judaa thaa aur kuchh post kiyaa thaa.. tab sab se pehla reply thaa wo tumharaa thaa aur tumne hi hausalaah badhaayaa thaa ki achchaa likhaa hay uss waqt maine kahaa tha ki tum mujhse bhee achha likhtee ho... aur yeh baat sach haii aur abhii bhee main maantaa huun main aaj jitnaa bhee likhnaa seekhaa hu .. bahot se logon se seekhaa huu... tumse bhee kaafi kuchh seekhaa hay... warnah main to sms dhoondh ke yahaan se chalaa hi jaataa ... shayri.com ne mujhe anmol dost diye hain....mujhe uss dost aur dostee par garv hai....merii baat maanne ke liye mai tujhe shukriyaah to nahii kahuunga kyuunki mujhe tumhaari DaaNT nahiin khaani aur wo bhi italian lang. men.. ...par fir bhi baDaa wala thank u Chalo ab bahot taareef kar dee teri warnaa hameshaa ki tarah hawaa me udne lagegi .. hahaha Aise hi bazm ko sajaatee raho.... yahee darkhwaast haii....likhtee raho hameshaa... thoda lamba reply de diya hai Dil se daad Grazie ... tumhara dost Dhaval |
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13th June 2015, 10:50 AM
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arzee samahiye ya guzaarish , ab aayee hain to aatee rahaa karen.... khush rahen...... shaad..... |
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14th June 2015, 04:51 PM
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Bohot khoob. Ekdam madhosh kar dene walaa, pyaar aur dosti ko darshata huaa aapka yeh kalaam dil tak pahuncha. dheroN daad qubool farmaayeiN. Aur aainda bhi humeiN paDhne ka mauqa dete raheiN. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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14th June 2015, 05:44 PM
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Achha lag raha hai yaha wapas aake... Or sab ke sath wapas judke khushi horahi hai bahot.... Apko meri or Dhaval ki ye koshish pasand aai uske liye a biggg thanku.. .. Grazie... Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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16th June 2015, 12:17 PM
Welcome back pooja jee.....arse baad aapko pada...bahut accha laga ...aati raha kariye mehfil mein...aapke bina sooni sooni hai.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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16th June 2015, 01:27 PM
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bahut khoob pooja jee wah kya khyalaat pesh kiye hai maza aa gaya padhkar aati rahiye likhti rahiye duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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16th June 2015, 02:10 PM
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Matko Chottu muje kitni khushi ho rhi hai tuje SDC par vapis dekh kar...shayad maiN expalin bhi nahi kar sakti aur tu samaj sakti hai yeh baat us se bhi khushi ki baat yeh ki tu aur Chottu dono aik saath phir se likh rhe ho...tareef kya karuN ab maiN, pta hi hai ki dono bahut kamaal ka likhte ho  aap dono ki yeh shayri behad khoobsurat hai. reps +++ added bahut sare pyar ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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16th June 2015, 08:32 PM
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(now dont call me a copy cat )Mujhe bhi bahut khushi hui ke sab ka sath mil raha hai yaha...ghazal likhi par vo sab ko pasand aayi ye badi bat hai.... Koshish jarungi ke likhti rahu..yaa kam se kam yaha aati rahu... Saraahne ke liye bahot sara thanku Grazie Pooja ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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