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5th October 2009, 01:58 AM
Aadaab bazm ko..
Shuru-waati Khyaal ke mut-taliq, Ek mutqarib behar maiN ghazal apni janib se pesh kar raha huN .. Aur ek khaas baat,.. aage ki ghazloN mai maiN apna thakhallus ‘SIFAR’ ke naam ke sath diya karunga… kisi bhi khaami pe aapki beshkeemti raa’ii ka muntazir RahuNga…! Behar hai :- mutqarib (lGaGa lGaga lGaGa lGaGa)---(In Digit:-122 122 122 122) --------- Khyaal --------- Chalne se pehle kuch socha tha maiNe.. Ghaav har dil ka kharocha tha maiNe.. ki akhiri safar kee ab baari hai… aur kuch kaandhoN pe apni sawaari hai… aankheN sabki nam hai.. meri khushk sahi… har ek phool seene pe, be-intehaaN bhaari hai .. kaazib har rishte ki yaad ko,.. toote har armaan ke kaanch ko.. zameen-e-dil pe apne ashkoN se poNcha tha maiNe.. haaN ..! chalne se pehle kuch socha tha maiNe … _ _ _ _ _ Ghazal:- °-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o- Gali aakhiri hai, Nagar aakhiri hai… Ruki Zindgee kaa safar aakhiri hai… Kabhi na kamaaya hai palkoN tale jo.. Un ashqoN kaa rukh* pe basar aakhiri hai KahiN wo chupe haiN isi kaafile maiN.. Mujhe dekhti jo nazar aakhiri hai.. Meri bebasi thi akela hee chalna.. KhalaaoN* bhari ye dagar aakhiri hai.. Tu royaa badaa hai mujhe saath paakar.. Na gham kar ghadi ye agar aakhiri hai… Ki khaamosh rehna mera bheed bhar maiN.. Ye hi aaj arz-e-hunar* aakhiri hai.. ‘Sifar’ hi hai gar haasil-e-dam* meri jaaN.. Khuda ki panaah hi shikhar aakhiri hai.. HaaN…! Hanshi aakhiri hai, jigar aakhiri hai.. Ruki Zindgi ka, safar aakhiri hai .. °-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o- KunaaL (Sifar):- 05-10-2009 -------------------------------------------------------------- *Rukh --------------------------------- Gaal, Cheeks *KhalaaoN ---------------------- ---- KhaaliPan, Emptyness *Arz-e-Hunar ----------------------- Kala ka pradarshan, Display of Talent *Haasil-e-Dum -------------------- Jindgi ka nichhod, Result of Life -------------------------------------------------------------- In Hindi आदाब बज्म को, शुरुवाती ख्याल के मुत्तालिक , एक मुक्तारिब बहर मैं ग़ज़ल अपनी जानिब से पेश कर रहा हूँ.. और एक ख़ास बात, आगे कि ग़ज़लों मैं मैं अपना तखल्लुस 'सिफर' के नाम के साथ दिया करूँगा.. किसी भी खामी पे आपकी बेशकीमती राय का मुन्तजिर रहूँगा .... --------- ख्याल ---------- चलने से पहले कुछ सोचा था मैंने.... घाव हर दिल का खरोचा था मैंने... कि आखिरी सफ़र कि अब बारी है... और कुछ कांधो पे अपनी सवारी है, ... आँखें सबकी नम है,.. मेरी खुश्क सही,... हर एक फूल सीने पे बे-इन्तेहा भारी है...! काजिब हर रिश्ते कि याद को... टूटे हर अरमान के कांच को.. ज़मीन-ए-दिल पे अपने अश्कों से पोंछा था मैंने... हाँ..! चलने से पहले कुछ सोचा था मैंने ... ---------- ग़ज़ल ---------- गली आखिरी है नगर आखिरी है.. रुकी जिन्दगी का सफ़र आखिरी है.. कभी न कमाया है पलकों तले जो,, उन अश्कों का रुख पर बसर आखिरी है ... कहीं वो छुपे हैं इसी काफिले मैं... मुझे देखती जो, नज़र आखिरी है .. मेरी बेबसी थी अकेला ही चलना.. खलाओं भरी ये डगर आखिरी है.. तू रोया बड़ा है मुझे साथ पाकर.. न ग़म कर घडी ये अगर आखिरी है .. कि खामोश रहना मेरा भीड़ भर मैं.. ये ही आज, अर्ज़-ए-हुनर आखिरी है .. 'सिफर' ही है गर हासिल-ए-दम मेरी जाँ... खुदा की पनाह ही, शिखर आखिरी है.. हाँ ...! हंसी आखिरी है जिगर आखिरी है.. रुकी जिन्दगी का सफ़र आखिरी है.. ----------------------------------------- कुनाल (सिफर) :- ०५-१०-२००९ ----------------------------------------- Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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5th October 2009, 09:58 AM
KahiN wo chupe haiN isi kaafile maiN..
Mujhe dekhti jo nazar aakhiri hai.. Meri bebasi thi akela hee chalna.. KhalaaoN* bhari ye dagar aakhiri hai.. Tu royaa badaa hai mujhe saath paakar.. Na gham kar ghadi ye agar aakhiri hai… ..Bohat dino baad aapki peshkash padi...bohat dard hai aapke kalaam me kunaal bhai....saare sher lajawaab hain..... dil ko chu gayi aapki yeh ghazal... lafz nahi mil rahe tareef ke liye... itna hi kahungi...behad accha likha hai aapne....yuhi likhte rahiye.... aapki behan zainy |
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5th October 2009, 10:23 AM
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behad mutassir kiya mujhe aapke yeh ghazal ne.. kuch bhi kahunga to chota muH badi baat ho jaayegi... bhagwaan aapka kaif salaamat rakhe.. khush rahiye ..god bless Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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5th October 2009, 11:58 AM
bahot khub Kunaal ji
ehsaas mujhe bahot khaas lage sabhi sher dil ke kareeb rahe yuhi likhte rahiyen Regards  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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5th October 2009, 01:00 PM
Kunal Bhai ....... Aadaab
Wah too much touchy likha hai sahab kya kahen tarif ke kabil lafz nahi mil rahe bahut khoob... akhari safar amazing yaar son nice thought and expression keep it up...... Meri bebasi thi akela hee chalna.. KhalaaoN* bhari ye dagar aakhiri hai.. kya soch hai yaar bahut hi umda. dil se daad kabool kijiye janab.. sabhi sheron ki adaygii behad khoob hai... puri gazal khoobsurat hai.... Likhate rhaiye..... Khush rahiye.. Aapna khayal rakhiey... Khuda Hafez.. 
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5th October 2009, 06:49 PM
Khunaal ji.....bahut khub likha hai darde safar aakhiri aapne....mujhe khuch naya bhi seekha gaya aapka yeh aakhiri safanaama...acha laga padhkar....sabhi sher behtreen rahe.....matle se maqte tak.....aise hi likhte rahiye...
dil se daad....kabul kare.... khush rahiye... aur apna khayal rakhiye.... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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5th October 2009, 10:55 PM
Dear Kunal jii,
Namasteey! Kaise hain aap? Jii kal jab aapne yeh ghazal post ki tabhi padhli thi per sign inn nahi thi so reply kar na paayii so aaj wohi karnee aayii hu. Ji Ghazal behaat pasand aayii... Har sher dil ke kareeb raha ..andaaz dilkash rahye.. Ummed karti hu aap aur ghazal kmehfil ki nazar karegey .... yu hi likhtey rahye Take care mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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7th October 2009, 09:47 AM
Namaskaar Kunal jee,
Kaise hai aap?? Ummid karti hoon khairiyat se honge. aap ki ghazal ka har sher lajawaab raha.. qafiye aur raddif ke chunav mein bhi naya pan nazar aaya... ek acchi ghazal par dil se daad... yeh sher mujhe kuch jyada hee accha laga Meri bebasi thi akela hee chalna.. KhalaaoN* bhari ye dagar aakhiri hai.. aise hee likhte rahiye khush rahiye aap ki dost purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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11th October 2009, 06:20 PM
Shukriya Sis
ab bas likhna hi bohat din baad hota hai... kya kareN.. ki dard se sath kabhi chuthta hi nahi isi liye dard jhalak hi jaata hai.. mujhe accha laga tumhara yahaN aana Kunaal Quote:
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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11th October 2009, 08:39 PM
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Mujhe behad khushi ka ehsaas hua aapko is ghazal pe dekh ke .. aapko bhi khuda salamati de Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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11th October 2009, 08:43 PM
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Mujhe tumhara aana hi khaas laga aur kya kahuN tumhare sath ki umeed karunga Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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11th October 2009, 10:46 PM
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12th October 2009, 10:08 AM
Kunal ji, Bahut khoobsurat kalam h
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13th October 2009, 04:34 PM
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aapne khaak alfaazoN maiN utar k khaaksaar ko samajhne ki koshish ki ...mujhe aur khuda se kuch nahi chaiye dostoN ke sath ke alawa .. aur mujhe khushi hai khuda ne aap jaise dostoN ke libaas main mujhe ye neymat ata kee hai ...aap aise hi sath dete rahe... khuda aapko sukoon bakshe.. Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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13th October 2009, 04:45 PM
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Kuch baateN aapse karna chahunga is ghazal ke muttalik ... dekhiye .. jaisa ki aapne likha ki aapko kuch seekhne ko mila .. shayad maiN koi hasti nahi rakhta kisi ko kuch sikha sakuN .. par kab kahan koun see cheez humeN kuch sikha de humen ... maiN bas aapse ek cheez share karna chahta huN.. maiN jab bhi likhta huN ek tasweer nazar main utaar ke .. usi ke ird gird taana bana bunta huN.... mujhe khushi hai meri koshish main aapko naya pan laga .... aise hi sath dete rahiye ... Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th October 2009, 02:18 PM
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aapne ghazal padh lee thi yahi kaafi ho gaya humare liye .. reply ka kya hai .. aur tab bhi aap aaye humeN khat likha hum bas khushi ka izhaar nahi kar sakte ... hum bas aapki umeed ko poora karne ki koshish karenge ' Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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18th October 2009, 02:20 PM
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mujhe aapki daad sir aankhoN pe ... aur nayapan hona zaroori bhi warna koi dekhega bhi nahi post ko aap aayi accha laga kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th October 2009, 09:21 AM
Kunaal Ji
Happy deewali aapne in shabdo ko saadagi aur khoobsurat ke sath pesh -e- nazar kiya hai vo apane aap me ek kamaal ki koshish hai, wakai me insaan me sirf vichaar hi hote hai aur kuch nahi jis vo kis tarah se present karata hai, ye baat uske shabdo ke gyan pa nibhar karti hai kyoki jitna zyada shabdo ka gyan hoga utna hi ham apni soch ke aache se pesh kar paayege. wakai me mind blowing thoughts hai . "Its inspairable sequences" janab sab kuch akhari hai iska matlab hai ki nai shruvat hone ko hai shaayad uski pahal aap se ho... ajay nidaan http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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20th October 2009, 05:20 PM
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jawaab ka muntzir rahunga ... Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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24th October 2009, 11:10 PM
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Mujhe khushi hai aapko kuch to pasand aaya Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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24th October 2009, 11:14 PM
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Aur mujhe manmooniyat ka shikar dene ke liye maiN aapka teh dil se shukraguzaar hun ... baaki maiN aapki har baat se ittefaaq rakhta huN .. par maiN khud nahi jaanta mera gyaan kitna hai .. jo bhi kuch seekha hai aap logoN ke saamne rakh deta huN ,, aur accha lagta hai jab koi dil se sweekaar karta hai mere alfaaz ... aap aaye aaka shukriya Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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28th October 2009, 07:42 AM
bahut khoob bhai...ek arse baad aaya hoon aur aate hi yeh anmol nazraana..mazaa aa gaya
tere ishq ka hai jo suroor meri jaana majnu yeh tera *abtar aakhiri hai haaste huye khel jaayenge dil par mere gham-e-ishq ka manzar aakhiri hai Worthless yunhi likhte rahNaa... tumhara apna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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28th October 2009, 10:27 PM
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5th November 2009, 09:54 PM
[QUOTE=KunaaL;368351]Aadaab bazm ko..
Shuru-waati Khyaal ke mut-taliq, Ek mutqarib behar maiN ghazal apni janib se pesh kar raha huN .. Aur ek khaas baat,.. aage ki ghazloN mai maiN apna thakhallus SIFAR ke naam ke sath diya karunga kisi bhi khaami pe aapki beshkeemti raaii ka muntazir RahuNga! Behar hai :- mutqarib (lGaGa lGaga lGaGa lGaGa)---(In Digit:-122 122 122 122) --------- Khyaal --------- Chalne se pehle kuch socha tha maiNe.. Ghaav har dil ka kharocha tha maiNe.. ki akhiri safar kee ab baari hai aur kuch kaandhoN pe apni sawaari hai aankheN sabki nam hai.. meri khushk sahi har ek phool seene pe, be-intehaaN bhaari hai .. kaazib har rishte ki yaad ko,.. toote har armaan ke kaanch ko.. zameen-e-dil pe apne ashkoN se poNcha tha maiNe.. haaN ..! chalne se pehle kuch socha tha maiNe _ _ _ _ _ Ghazal:- °-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o- Gali aakhiri hai, Nagar aakhiri hai Ruki Zindgee kaa safar aakhiri hai Kabhi na kamaaya hai palkoN tale jo.. Un ashqoN kaa rukh* pe basar aakhiri hai KahiN wo chupe haiN isi kaafile maiN.. Mujhe dekhti jo nazar aakhiri hai.. Meri bebasi thi akela hee chalna.. KhalaaoN* bhari ye dagar aakhiri hai.. Tu royaa badaa hai mujhe saath paakar.. Na gham kar ghadi ye agar aakhiri hai Ki khaamosh rehna mera bheed bhar maiN.. Ye hi aaj arz-e-hunar* aakhiri hai.. Sifar hi hai gar haasil-e-dam* meri jaaN.. Khuda ki panaah hi shikhar aakhiri hai.. HaaN! Hanshi aakhiri hai, jigar aakhiri hai.. Ruki Zindgi ka, safar aakhiri hai .. °-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o-°-o- KunaaL (Sifar):- 05-10-2009 -------------------------------------------------------------- *Rukh --------------------------------- Gaal, Cheeks *KhalaaoN ---------------------- ---- KhaaliPan, Emptyness *Arz-e-Hunar ----------------------- Kala ka pradarshan, Display of Talent *Haasil-e-Dum -------------------- Jindgi ka nichhod, Result of Life -------------------------------------------------------------- In Hindi , , .. , '' .. .... --------- ---------- .... ... ... , ... ,.. ,... - ...! ... .. -- ... ..! ... ---------- ---------- .. .. ,, ... ... , .. .. .. .. .. .. , -- .. '' -- ... , .. ...! .. .. ----------------------------------------- () :- -- -----------------------------------------[QUOTE] Kunaal jii, Aadaab! Aaya hu to likhna to laazmee hai, lekin likhuN Kya? Hats Off...!!! Iss se zyada likhne layak nahi hu main, iss liye muafi ka talabgaar hu... Shabbakhair! Nacheez Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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6th November 2009, 12:51 AM
kunal bhai
Daad kabool kare...... bahoot hi umda aur karnpriye rachna hai... ise phad ke lag raha hai..aaj kam se kam kuch to accha hua pure din me, dhnyavad ishwar aapki kalam aur nazm ko aur nazaqut aur khoobsurti baqse...yehi dua hai izazut Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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11th November 2009, 06:02 PM
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aap aaya karo bas mujhe aur kya chaiye Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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11th November 2009, 06:03 PM
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sorry ki zaroorat hi nahi .. Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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13th November 2009, 06:42 PM
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aap apna khyaal rakheN .. Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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16th November 2009, 08:08 PM
Mere Bhai Kunal......
ek aur lajawaab kalaam.... ghazal ki bariiki se bhara hua... kai arse baad tumhe phir pada...wohi kashish...wohi dard....wohi shiddat.... likhte raho....... khush raho........... tumhara apna.......... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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3rd September 2015, 04:26 PM
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kunaal ji..........etni khoobsurat gazal....mere paas lafz nahi hai tareef ke liye...bas etna kahuNgi ki wahhhhhhhhhhh kya khoob likhtey hai aap. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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