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Story Of A Broken Heart!!! - 13th December 2005, 09:50 PM

I’m waiting for her to hold all the shattered pieces of my heart together…
I wish her to be right beside me…Holding me in the arms of affection and binding me with love…As I live on a dream that is soon fading away…Now I’ve no one to look up to…but still my heart beats for you…

I look at the ocean so deep…rising tides approach me with a hope of taking me with them…but all my hopes are shattered as they leave me all alone…
And now only your memories, that keep rising in my heart, the pain of separation
Is what that is on my mind…

Years have gone by…you dint realize that…
I put my heart on paper a million times…alas! They couldn’t reach you…
And now even my dreams and hopes seem to be moving away from me…leaving me with nothing to live for…nothing to live with…

And yet the pain, lying deep down inside my heart has come up to speak with my heart…
It looked at me with pity and flows out of me as tears from my eyes…
Those drops fell on to the sand…and a name was engraved on it…
It’s no wonder that it is your name that I can find…
I wish you were there to see all this…
Just to know what you mean to me…

I wish…

I wish…


This is the story of a broken heart…

This is my story...


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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13th December 2005, 09:56 PM

Dear karthik,

Glad to read your feelings here... and I can see the pain of separation in your words... you beautifully expressed yourself. take good care of yourself dear and keep writting... hope to see you online soon.

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13th December 2005, 10:06 PM

dearest karthik...
when u showed me the intro i was just amazed by the intensity of the pain that u have been able to express in just few lines.....but after reading it completely i feel that i lack the words to express you how much i liked it....so much pain......the intensity of pain is very well expressed by you sweets....i am really touched by your story...all i can do is pray for you so that god can lessen ur pain n give you strength n courage to bear it....very well written.....keep it up karthik...i m really a lover of ur writing these days....


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13th December 2005, 10:13 PM

mere karthik,

kaash......

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14th December 2005, 06:19 AM

Wonderful bro... you are really getting it up there...
and it is hitting us right here...

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14th December 2005, 04:59 PM

Dear Karthik,

Wish... Kaash... They are endless....no end to it....!

Really beautiful expression... Do keep writing.. Take care of urself...!


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14th December 2005, 09:16 PM

hey bro its hurty but u have to forget the past.............plz bro cant see u like that


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16th December 2005, 10:57 PM

hello parul...thanks for comin
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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18th December 2005, 06:51 PM

farhanaa...well...i don mind if u r my fan but....
jus kiddin...
but seriuosly...thanks a lott...
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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18th December 2005, 06:52 PM

kaashh...

maa...take caree


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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18th December 2005, 11:03 PM

well...rohin...if it can hit u there...then what i wrote is a success...
thanks
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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19th December 2005, 10:32 PM

hello pulkit bhai...
thanks a lot for ur appreciation...
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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19th December 2005, 11:08 PM

arre idiot!

lagta hai tere iss heart ko thoda sa shock dena padega....taki yeh theek ho jaaye....come on man.....dont be sad....its not good for u....plus....i need u to be happy.......i dont like it when ur sad....whos gonna take care of me then?

but instead of tht.............perfect....thoughtful....wonderful ....painful...lovey dovey .....and really nice!

enough tareef mr. karthik?
well....i kno one thing...when one day u become a big famous person...i can say "hey! i kno tht idiot!" ...ha

take care
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p.s. was this happy enough?


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19th December 2005, 11:21 PM

my dear karthik....
i was not reading it for so many days even after having a look... but today i finally read it... my goddd... u r really crossing d intensity of pain. & tht too with such refined words.... ufffffff.... but dear we all wd like to c u in cheerful mood n writing... though u write so well in every way....
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21st December 2005, 06:53 PM

heyy mehul...thanks for the reply n for ur concern...but i'm doin fine don worry...its jus a thought as i already told u
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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24th December 2005, 04:01 PM

enough tareef mr. karthik?
well....i kno one thing...when one day u become a big famous person...i can say "hey! i kno tht idiot!" ...ha


well...warda...for ur long mesg full of praise...i hav only one word...thank u...
and well...first let me become famous then u can call me idiot
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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25th December 2005, 09:49 AM

my dear karthik....
i was not reading it for so many days even after having a look... but today i finally read it... my goddd... u r really crossing d intensity of pain. & tht too with such refined words.... ufffffff.... but dear we all wd like to c u in cheerful mood n writing... though u write so well in every way....
take care



thanks a lot palloo...ur reply completed the post of mine...thanks a lot
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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