Touta Phir Khawab Mera -
5th November 2003, 12:20 PM
Hi Friend
Umeed Hai Aap Logo Ko Pasand Aayeaga
Touta Phir Khavab Mera Annkh phir Nam Hai
Muskura Raha Hou Lakin Ab Dil Main Gham Hee Gham Hai
Jou Chaltey They Muskura Key Ithla Key Sharma Key Saath Merey
Aaj Unhi Rasto Per Chaltey Tanha Hum HAi
Touta Phir Khawab Mera Annkh phir Nam Hai
Muskura Raha Hou Lakin Ab Dil Main Gham Hee
Jou Chaltey They Muskura Key Ithla Key Sharma Key Saath Merey
Aaj Unhi Rasto Per Chaltey Tanha Hum HAi
bahooot khoob sahab...
dil ko choo liya aap ke sher ne...behad acha hai....
hamari daad kubool kariye....aur aise hi likhte rahiye...
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MANOJ
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karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
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5th November 2003, 10:57 PM
Amir Jee, achha likhte hein aap. Dardka rishta bhi keya ajeeb rishta hoti hein. Dard se mera daman vharde yea Allah fhir mujheko deewana karde yea Allah. Gazal gayi huyi hein Chitra Singh Jee. Shukriya. Aise hi likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.
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