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23rd December 2005, 11:26 PM
Those days have gone…days of sadness and despair…shattered hopes and fluttering fortunes…when there was no one to care, but had so much to share.
I put my heart on paper soaking in the ocean of tears…I cried …I cried till all the tears dried out…even the tears have left me but not my pain. One moment of love, one moment of caress just to know that some one cares…that is all I needed to live for years together with my heart full of pain… but I never felt like it… Hours of darkness filled me with tears. Red were my eyes that fought the dark lonely nights with your memories on mind. Tears dropped like rain. Alas! I could never find a rainbow. I turned the pages of my heart and searched for the memories that I could cherish and live on…never did I manage to find one. Words of love that flew from my heart are only for you. Even they could feel the pain but u could never understand…words that broke the shackles of pain and hurt got along to reach you. I wish they could reach your heart and sing a song of love…if only you could think about me for a while I wouldn’t be feeling so bad…for all my efforts and pain if only you could spare a moment of love for me, I wouldn’t have been sitting alone weeping… Words are hard to come by… feelings have filled my heart… and now it can’t take any more…tears have dried up…I wont cry any more…I want to share some thing but no one who really care…feeling of loneliness is killing me… Those days have gone perhaps…days of sadness and despair, as my soul also wants to leave me... I feel alone… Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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24th December 2005, 03:38 PM
good bro but like to say 1 thing dont worry be happy i'm always there for u
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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Re: Moment Of Love!!! -
24th December 2005, 05:04 PM
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nice...  but why u feel alone... we all are with u... jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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25th December 2005, 12:34 AM
hi karthik.....very well expressed dear....i could feel the pain in ur loneliness....plz take care of urself n remember ur friends r alwaz there for u...but i even know that this loneliness cant be filled by us....
 anywaz take good care of urself.chow Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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kartik ji -
25th December 2005, 09:03 AM
very well said , sach u have depth in ur word .anyone who is reading u can read ur heart feelings too .that is really gud
aapki dost 
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25th December 2005, 09:23 AM
beautifully written dear..take care & keep writting!
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26th December 2005, 09:07 PM
hey mehul...thanks yaar
take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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26th December 2005, 09:09 PM
heyy shweta...thanks yaar...for bein there...
take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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26th December 2005, 09:11 PM
heyy farhana...glad to knw tht u liked it...
thanks take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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26th December 2005, 09:29 PM
hello srdh...
sorry don no ur name... thanks for the replyy... take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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DEar kartik -
27th December 2005, 06:27 AM
my name is shrddha jain .u can call me shrdh or shrddha thnx for replying .aise hi likhte raho
apna khyaal rakhna shrddha
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27th December 2005, 12:36 PM
Hey Karthik,
As always u've just put ur heart out on paper... Loved it...! Its good those moments have passed...Try to find new joys in other things...Not as easy as it is to advice....! Soo... Do keep writing...Take care...Keep Smiling...! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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