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Tumhara Hona - 23rd February 2006, 11:03 AM

Yeh post main apne pati ko dedicate kar rahi hoon........ Aasha hain aap sabko pasand aayegi. Rachnaa meri to nahin hain per lagtaa hain jaise mere man ki bhaavnaae kisine bakhoobi likhi hain.

Ek tumhara hona
Kya se kya kar detaa hain
Be-zubaan chat, deewaaron ko
Ghar kar detaa hain
Khaali shabadon mein
aata hain
aisa arth pironaa
geet ban gaya-saa
lagtaa hain
ghar ka konaa konaa
ek tumhara hona

Sapnon ko swar detaa hain
aarohon avrohon se
samjaane
lagti hain
Tumse judkar
cheezein bhi
batiyaane lagti hain
Ek tumhara hona
apnaapan bhar detaa hain

Ek tumhara hona
kya se kya kar detaa hain.


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23rd February 2006, 12:31 PM

hmmmm minus ji pahile ek sawal ka jabab
aap minus kyu hai plus kyu nahi bus plus ho jaayiye

kidding

achha likha hai aapne aur sach bhi

ek tumhara hona hi sab ehsas dilata hai
tum ho to jag mai ujiyara ,nahi to suraj bhi dhal jata hai
mahke jeevan ka aangan tumse man mai bhi muskana khile
tum na ho to sirf mai hi nahi , har phool murjhata hai

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great - 23rd February 2006, 12:34 PM

bahut achha shardhha ko parhte dekha laga yoon hee see koyee shayree to woh parhtee nahee main bhee ye link khola bahut khush hoon main ki itnee achee rachana parhee maine ab jab likho agar mumkin ho link dena mujhe


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23rd February 2006, 01:02 PM

Shrdhji.........

aap ne kahaa main minus kyun hoon????
plus kyu nahin???
per aapka rachnaa padhnaa aur kuch panktiyaan isme jodnaa
achcha laga. aapko rachnaa pasand aayi janker khushi hui.

aapke rachnaa padhte rahne se aur aise hi jawaab dene se minus ko plus hote der nahin lagegi is
shayri.com pe. jawaab dene ke liye shukriyaa.......


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23rd February 2006, 01:06 PM

Mashahoor Shayarji.

Aap to masoom bhi hain aur shayar bhi.
aapko rachnaa pasand aayi jaankar achcha laga.

Aabhar....


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