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jab jab bhee aa ke mujh se kuch bola hai - 16th January 2006, 08:31 PM
jab jab bhee aa ke mujh se kuch bola hai
toone sukoon ka naya ek darwaza khola hai
har lafz tera apana hai duniya se kuch nahee liya
jo kiya tone mere liye kiye jo kiya toone kiya
duniya se kuch nahee liya

kal bhee main jab udas tha
aisa laga too tha jo mere pas tha
aur ankhon main yahan se wahan tak
panee hee panee tha
to mere dard kee tahreer bana
too mere gam kee kahanee the
mujh se lipat ke mujh se jane kya kah gaya
sara gam mit gaya bas thora sa dukh rah gaya

dukh maine khud hee bacahaya hai
dukh maine khud hee chipaya hai
dobara yahee dukh lene too kal ayega
dukh bacha ke rakhoonga tabhee to
phir tujh se milne ka pal ayega
zindgee dukh detee rahegee
too dukh mangata rahega
mere meethe khabon ke liye
too jagara rahega

tone mujeh dene ke liye kabhee
kisee se kcuh nahee liya
sab kuch apana laya hai
too hee tera jism hai
too hee tera saya hai
sadik hai pak hai too bahut bhola hai
jab jab bhee aa ke mujh se kuch bola hai
toone sukoon ka naya ek darwaza khola hai
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thanks - 25th January 2006, 09:28 PM
thanks zindgi aur devangi wada hai zindgee likhata rahoonga
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Re: jab jab bhee aa ke mujh se kuch bola hai - 1st March 2006, 08:12 PM
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jab jab bhee aa ke mujh se kuch bola hai
toone sukoon ka naya ek darwaza khola hai
har lafz tera apana hai duniya se kuch nahee liya
jo kiya tone mere liye kiye jo kiya toone kiya
duniya se kuch nahee liya

kal bhee main jab udas tha
aisa laga too tha jo mere pas tha
aur ankhon main yahan se wahan tak
panee hee panee tha
to mere dard kee tahreer bana
too mere gam kee kahanee the
mujh se lipat ke mujh se jane kya kah gaya
sara gam mit gaya bas thora sa dukh rah gaya

dukh maine khud hee bacahaya hai
dukh maine khud hee chipaya hai
dobara yahee dukh lene too kal ayega
dukh bacha ke rakhoonga tabhee to
phir tujh se milne ka pal ayega
zindgee dukh detee rahegee
too dukh mangata rahega
mere meethe khabon ke liye
too jagara rahega

tone mujeh dene ke liye kabhee
kisee se kcuh nahee liya
sab kuch apana laya hai
too hee tera jism hai
too hee tera saya hai
sadik hai pak hai too bahut bhola hai
jab jab bhee aa ke mujh se kuch bola hai
toone sukoon ka naya ek darwaza khola hai
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angel - 2nd March 2006, 01:26 PM
mujeh parhne se aap ko sukoon mila achha laga sun ke meree shayaree ko shukiya kahoonag kisee ko kabhee rahat detee hai agar
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2nd March 2006, 03:42 PM
anil sahab hamesha ki tarah ek aur aapki pyaari si rachna.....

kal bhee main jab udas tha
aisa laga too tha jo mere pas tha
aur ankhon main yahan se wahan tak
panee hee panee tha
to mere dard kee tahreer bana
too mere gam kee kahanee the
mujh se lipat ke mujh se jane kya kah gaya
sara gam mit gaya bas thora sa dukh rah gaya

bahaut khoob kehgaye aap...accha likkha hai...khush rahiyega hamesha.

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2nd March 2006, 05:09 PM
great post again ...

anil ji aaap to diwana hi bana ke chodoge

Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
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shukriya - 3rd March 2006, 10:41 AM
farhana bahut bahut dhanyawad is rachana ko pasand karne ke liye meree shayree ki kitab main apne nakshe zehan choretee rahana achha lagata hai
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cute ke liye - 3rd March 2006, 10:42 AM
cute ashu ke liye cute thanks
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bahut bahut shukriya - 3rd March 2006, 01:57 PM
bahut bahut shukriya shradha bahut achha laga mujhe tumhere meree is puranee rachana par ana
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hi anil - 3rd March 2006, 02:06 PM
Dhire dhire aapke sab kalaam dil mai utar rahe hai

Terrific combination of words.

Really good work keep continue.

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Kyaa sundar likha hain aapne Anilji,

Ek baar padhke ji nahin bhara, baar baar padha
aur har baar ek nayi khubi dikhaayi dee.

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shukria - 4th March 2006, 08:11 AM
acharya thanks achha lagata hai u r wth my shayri now ate rahte ho mah fil aur zyada achee ho jatee hai
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