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30th October 2004, 01:13 PM
Aadaab dosto…
Lijiey phir haazir huye hain aapke saamne…
ek chota sa paigaam apni betiyon ke naam kiya hai…meri betiyaan…meri zindagi mein bahaar banke aayin aur mera sab kuch ho gayin…ek aziz dost ne unko dekh kar meri "Pariyaan" pukara...tabse wo meri "Guardian angels" ho gayi hain...bus mere larazte bepanaah pyaar kee yeh koshish…shayad pasand aaye aapko…
[color=dark red]Meri Pariyon ke naam…..[/color]
Mera dil ho tum, Meri jaan ho tum
Mere athaah pyaar se anjaan ho tum
Jo khwaab bune ta umr maine
Mehkata wo gulistaan ho tum
Zindagi ke banjar sehra mein
Barasti *abr-e-baharaan ho tum
Us paak dar pe kiye sajde maine
Mujhpar us khuda ka ehsaan ho tum
[color=dark red]Clouds of spring[/color]
Aage badho badhti hee raho
Meri khwahish, mere armaan ho tum
Mujhe kismat haraane pe hai amaada
dekhein sab meri jeet Aalishaan ho tum
jaisi bhi hoon, hoon tumhari “Maa”
maanti hoon, meri *charah-jaan ho tum
gareebon se *shafaqat, be-bas kee ho taqat
haan *muflison kee *jaanissaraan ho tum
[color=dark red]doctor
kindness
wretched
who sacrifice life for others[/color]
mile na dard, aansoon, yaa *khaar raahon mein
gar mil jaayein bhi tau, na *nataawaan ho tum
Seena taan, *sar bulandi se jiyo tum
‘Paras’ kee daulat-e-*farozaan ho tum
[color=dark red]thorns
weak
keep one’s head high
shinning, luminous[/color]
dhal gayi khizaan, manzil hai kareeb, magar
saaye si rahoongi saath, na pareshaan ho tum
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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30th October 2004, 01:29 PM
Ye Sab...................ek Maa hi keh sakti hai ................apni aulaad ke liye.
Paras....bahut achchha laga aapka ye Apni bachchiyoN (I'mean PariyoN) ...ke prati prem parhkar.
Dua karta hooN wo uparwala unhe...wo sab deiN jo aap unke liye chaahti haiN.
Rachna to aapki hamesha ki tareh khoobsoorat hai hi.
Khus raho hamesha.
Chaand
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
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30th October 2004, 02:53 PM
Mera dil ho tum, Meri jaan ho tum
Mere athaah pyaar se anjaan ho tum
Jo khwaab bune ta umr maine
Mehkata wo gulistaan ho tum
Zindagi ke banjar sehra mein
Barasti *abr-e-baharaan ho tum
Us paak dar pe kiye sajde maine
Mujhpar us khuda ka ehsaan ho tum
Clouds of spring
Aage badho badhti hee raho
Meri khwahish, mere armaan ho tum
Mujhe kismat haraane pe hai amaada
dekhein sab meri jeet Aalishaan ho tum
jaisi bhi hoon, hoon tumhari “Maa”
maanti hoon, meri *charah-jaan ho tum
gareebon se *shafaqat, be-bas kee ho taqat
haan *muflison kee *jaanissaraan ho tum
doctor
kindness
wretched
who sacrifice life for others
mile na dard, aansoon, yaa *khaar raahon mein
gar mil jaayein bhi tau, na *nataawaan ho tum
Seena taan, *sar bulandi se jiyo tum
‘Paras’ kee daulat-e-*farozaan ho tum
dhal gayi khizaan, manzil hai kareeb, magar
saaye si rahoongi saath, na pareshaan ho tum
Paras!!
Well....What a beautiful expression... Kucch kucch suna thha pehle.. aur jo kucch reh gaya tha woh padh liya .... Reallly good words... Now u will say.. I repeat my words.... but what to do, U repeat ur performance.... Always back with a masterpiece
Well... Dua rhaegi ki Tumahari pariyan humesha khush rahein.... Have a wonderful time... TC
These lines r still my favourite...
Aage badho badhti hee raho
Meri khwahish, mere armaan ho tum
Mujhe kismat haraane pe hai amaada
dekhein sab meri jeet Aalishaan ho tum
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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hi -
30th October 2004, 03:17 PM
parasstaar sahiba
kasi ho?
rishte ...sab kuch hote hain...hmare liye rishte banana to asaan
hota hay...magar shayad ham kabhi un k ahmiyat samjh nahi sake
kyun k rishton k ahmiyat samjhna or us ahmiyat ko samjh kar byan karna us se bhi mushkil hota hay....
koi mane yah nahi magar MAA ka rishta aisa hay jis per logon ne bohat kuch likha magar bohat kuch kam...or us se kahin ziada mushkil AIK MAA ka apni olaad k liye likhna....
MERI PARIYON K NAAM
kya baat hay yar...tumhare lafzon k zariye ham ne ache tareeqe se is rishte ko or tumhare tumhari pariyon se laad pyaar ko samjhne ki koshish ki hay....jahan in lafzon main pyaar or shararat jhlakti hay wahan jo baat mujhay sab se achi lagi woh hosla or nasihat ka andaz...
Mujhe kismat haraane pe hai amaada
dekhein sab meri jeet Aalishaan ho tum
bohat khoob hay yar...bohat acha likha hay....bohat sari tareef tumhare lafzon k liye...or bohat sara pyar or duain tumhari un pariyon k naam....
apna khiyal rakhna...
KHAN...
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31st October 2004, 02:06 PM
wakai ...
chand bhai ne ek dum sahi kaha ... ki ye sab ek maa hi keh sakti hai ... aapka apni betiyon se jo pyar hai ,.... aur har maa ka jo pyar baccho se hota hai koi uska bayan nahi kar sakta ... kyunki mamta udelna ek maaa ke hi bas main hota hai .. paras ji aapke is kalam ko ek nagina hi samjhe ... aur apni betiyon ko jaroor sunaye ...
maa ki mamta ka mol hota koi na
uske sneh ke bina jeeta bhi koi na
bayan karne ko dhunde kitne shabdakosh*,
par alfaz kahin bhi milta koi na...
paras ji dua hai aapki pariya sada pariyon ki tarah pyar paye ,..
aapka apna
kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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1st November 2004, 12:20 PM
Hi Parastaar Ji,
WAkayi mein, The ultimate ode to u're daughters. Itna pyaara ke bas dil machal utha hai isse parh ke. Sahi mein khushnaseeb hai aap ki pariya aap jaisi chahne wali maa paa kar aur aap unhe.
Bohot khoob, har ek alfaz dil ko chhuu gaya. Dua karte hai aap logo ka pyaar sada u hi bana rahe.
Luvs,
Salim
If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul
Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
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Namaskar Paras ji -
1st November 2004, 09:10 PM
Namaskar Paras Ji
aaj aapki likhe ghazal padee bahut achi lagi yeh masuum si Rachna..............Shayad meray lafz kum pad jayein tareef kay liye................bahut pyara likha hay aapne...............Kuch panktiyaan were so sweet would like to appreciate
Aage badho badhti hee raho
Meri khwahish, mere armaan ho tum
Mujhe kismat haraane pe hai amaada
dekhein sab meri jeet Aalishaan ho tum
jaisi bhi hoon, hoon tumhari “Maa”
maanti hoon, meri *charah-jaan ho tum
gareebon se *shafaqat, be-bas kee ho taqat
haan *muflison kee *jaanissaraan ho tum
Jaise bhi hoon,hoon tumhari "Maa" bahut pyari pankti hay.Aap ko sukanya ka slaam ..........
bahut sundar rachna.............Too good.
Take Care
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2nd November 2004, 11:44 AM
Chaand Sahib, namaskaar...
Shukriya bahut bahut aapki shubhkaamnaaon ke liye, aapke sarahane ke liye...maa ke liye yeh sab kehna aasaan hai...koyi mushqil nahin...hai na...maine kuch ajooba nahin kiya...
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Pulkit my sweet friend...
always there to cheer me up...bless you...yeah those liines are my favorite too...meri haar nahin jeet hain woh...
take care
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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2nd November 2004, 11:51 AM
Khan Bhayyia...
aap aaye...bahut achha laga...aur aapne jo sher chunaa...i m really proud of it...pata nahin kaise likha gaya...lol...kabhi kabhi tau mujhe apni hee qaabliyat par naaz hone lagta hai...sar ka diameter thoda failtaa bhi jaata hai...lol
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maa ki mamta ka mol hota koi na
uske sneh ke bina jeeta bhi koi na
bayan karne ko dhunde kitne shabdakosh*,
par alfaz kahin bhi milta koi na...
waah kunal!
kitne sundar andaaz mein tumne daad dee...meri or se in lafzon ke liye daad kabuul karo...aur apne haath ko thoda aaraam bhi diya karo...taaki jaldi se jaldi theek ho jaao...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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3rd November 2004, 12:25 PM
paras meri behan
Mamta ki mohabbat aur aulaad se us ki unsiyet aur aqeedat ka itna bharpoor izhaar kiya hai tum ne ke mera dil apni behan ki mohabbat se labrez aur ankhein pur-nam ho gayee hain.
Mujhe pata hai ke jo behan itni achchi ho to “maan” to yaqeenan azeem ho gi hi tum.
Aur meri dua hai ke tumhari yeh masoom titliyaan aur meri bhanjiyaan bhi apni maan se yaqeenan itna hi pyaar karein gi jitna voh un se kerti hai.
Meri sab duayein aur shubh kaamnayein apni behan paras ke liye aur us ke parivaar ke liye.
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3rd November 2004, 12:41 PM
Mere man ka sakoon...mere dil ka chain..
mere khawaabo ki seema...mere jakhmo ka marham
mere seene ki thandak..mere ashko ka kinara..
mere armaan,meri jaan, meri khushboo,mera vazood
sab tum ho...sab tum ho...sub tum ho..
meri parchhayi, mere aangan ki mehek..
meri chandni, mere jeene ki aarzoo...
meri soch ka kinara..mere aanchal ka pyaar..
mere pyar ki paribhaasha..mera moh-jaal...
bas tum ho..bas tum ho..bas tum ho..
paras aapka ye kalaam par kar mujhe bhi bas yahi khyaal aaye..hope u will like it....aur ha..n main aapke kalaam ki kya tareef karu...sab kuchh to aap ne keh hi diya...aur iske liye tahe dil se daad kabool kare...
udas
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA LETI HOO
ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO
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"Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n
Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai"
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Re: Meri Pariyon ke Naam..... -
3rd November 2004, 12:55 PM
mere ghar aayi ek nanhi pari..
chandi ke haseen rath pe sawar....
uske aane se mere aangan mein
khil uthe phool gungunai bahaar..
dekh kar usko dil nahin bharta
chahe dekhun use hazaron baar.
HI PAARS
bahooot bahoot acha laga tumhe yahan dekh kar.....yeh geet yaad aa gaya aapko padh kar....bas itna hi kahunga ki is jhoothe jahan mein agar kuch sacha hai to wo hai maa ki mamta.aapne bahoot pyar se apne pyar ko gazal mein buna hai...bahoot khoob...
Zindagi ke banjar sehra mein
Barasti *abr-e-baharaan ho tum
Us paak dar pe kiye sajde maine
Mujhpar us khuda ka ehsaan ho tum
bahoot khoob....mein bejubaan ho gaya hoon...ab wo alfaaz kahan se laun jinhe aapki tareefon mein saja sakun....bahoot bahoot khoob !!!
Aage badho badhti hee raho
Meri khwahish, mere armaan ho tum
Mujhe kismat haraane pe hai amaada
dekhein sab meri jeet Aalishaan ho tum
wah !!!
mile na dard, aansoon, yaa *khaar raahon mein
gar mil jaayein bhi tau, na *nataawaan ho tum
Seena taan, *sar bulandi se jiyo tum
‘Paras’ kee daulat-e-*farozaan ho tum
bahoot khoob!!
wo pariyan jaroor safalta ki bulandiyon ko chuyengi,,jinki "maa" ho tum.
dhal gayi khizaan, manzil hai kareeb, magar
saaye si rahoongi saath, na pareshaan ho tum
sach paars...is sher ne to jaise mujhe butt bana diya hai...!! bahoot bahoot gehra sher hai...bahoot hi gehra..aur aisi gehrai sirf aur sirf maa hi ke pyar mein milti hai....sach kahun to mere dil mein yeh baat aa rahii hai ki kitne khushkismat hote hai wo log jinke sar pa maa ka saya rehta hai,,,tum bahoot achi ho...na sirf ek insaan,,ek shayra,,balki ek "maa" bhi....tumhari is gazal ne mujhe bhaavuk kar diya....im proud of u...
MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
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3rd November 2004, 01:27 PM
WAkayi mein, The ultimate ode to u're daughters. Itna pyaara ke bas dil machal utha hai isse parh ke. Sahi mein khushnaseeb hai aap ki pariya aap jaisi chahne wali maa paa kar aur aap unhe.
Bohot khoob, har ek alfaz dil ko chhuu gaya. Dua karte hai aap logo ka pyaar sada u hi bana rahe.
Thanks Candyboy...
aap yahaan aaye aur meri rachna ko yoon padhaa...aur uspe aapki shubhkaamnaayein...yaqeen maaniye bahut baar aisaa lagta hai ki mujhmein shayad kami reh gayi...achi maa ban ne kee...aap logon kee hausla afzaayi...meri himmat badhaayeigi ki har koshish tau kar sakti hoon na...
apna khayal rakhieyga....paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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3rd November 2004, 01:35 PM
Sukanya...
Jaise bhi hoon,hoon tumhari "Maa"
Yeh thoda shararat mein kaha...kyonki meri betiyaan...mujhe kayi baar kehti hain..."other mothers are not like you"...lol..."they allow their kids to do whatever" asal mein sach tau yeh hai...ki maa tau saari umr bachon se hee seekhti hai maa ban na bhi...aur mujh jaisee davaandol see maa tau bahut kuch seekhti hai...
yahan aane ka shukriyaa...sukanya
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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3rd November 2004, 01:46 PM
Mamta ki mohabbat aur aulaad se us ki unsiyet aur aqeedat ka itna bharpoor izhaar kiya hai tum ne ke mera dil apni behan ki mohabbat se labrez aur ankhein pur-nam ho gayee hain.
Mujhe pata hai ke jo behan itni achchi ho to “maan” to yaqeenan azeem ho gi hi tum.
Aur meri dua hai ke tumhari yeh masoom titliyaan aur meri bhanjiyaan bhi apni maan se yaqeenan itna hi pyaar karein gi jitna voh un se kerti hai.
Meri sab duayein aur shubh kaamnayein apni behan paras ke liye aur us ke parivaar ke liye.
Aankhein tau hamesha meri purnam ho jaati hain Mushi Bhayyia...aapka jawaab jab bhi padhti hoon...itna apnapan aur pyaar dete hain na aap mujhe...halanki main hamesha tang karti hoon apko...ulta aap raub bhi seh lete hain apni pagli see behan ka...bus...main aur titliyaan...itne pyaare 'bhai' aur 'mama' ko paa kitni khushkismet ho gayin hain...aapka haath hamesha hamare sar par rahe...aur kya chahiye...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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4th November 2004, 02:16 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by UDAS
Mere man ka sakoon...mere dil ka chain..
mere khawaabo ki seema...mere jakhmo ka marham
mere seene ki thandak..mere ashko ka kinara..
mere armaan,meri jaan, meri khushboo,mera vazood
sab tum ho...sab tum ho...sub tum ho..
meri parchhayi, mere aangan ki mehek..
meri chandni, mere jeene ki aarzoo...
meri soch ka kinara..mere aanchal ka pyaar..
mere pyar ki paribhaasha..mera moh-jaal...
bas tum ho..bas tum ho..bas tum ho..
udas
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Sunita...
Bahut hee pyaara dil ka haal likha hai...is mein maa ka pyaar bus umadh umadh ke aa raha hai...jaise ek maa sab kuch nyochawar kar rahi ho apne bachon pe...bahut achha laga padh kar...tumhari bhavukta dekh kar main muskura rahi hoon...kyonki khud ka aks jo dikh raha hai mujhe...lol...khayal rakhna apna...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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4th November 2004, 02:32 PM
mere ghar aayi ek nanhi pari..
chandi ke haseen rath pe sawar....
uske aane se mere aangan mein
khil uthe phool gungunai bahaar..
dekh kar usko dil nahin bharta
chahe dekhun use hazaron baar.
kitna sundar hai na yeh gaana...manoj
aur
chanda hai tu mera suraj hai tu
o meri aankhon ka tara hai tu
yeh bhi mujhe bahut pasand hai...tumne kaha
wo pariyan jaroor safalta ki bulandiyon ko chuyengi,,jinki "maa" ho tum.
meri aankhein bhar aayin...shukriyaa us bhagwaan ka jisne mujhe tum jaise doston se navaazzaa...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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4th November 2004, 08:34 PM
ab bhi aakhir dikhaa hii diya karishmaat-e-tasavuur = )
milte hain
"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"
kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN..
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8th November 2004, 07:35 PM
Punjabi mein ek baat kahi hai ki
maa warga ganchava buta
mainu nazar kithe na aaya
le ke jisto chaah udhari
rab ne swarg banaye....
paras...farz kitne bhi kyon na ho maa ka farz ko upar waale ne bhi sabse bada darjaa diya hai aur bakhoob hi diya hai...kyon maa ki hi kismat mein usne pariyan likhi hai aur pariyon ka pyaar bhi..sach aaj lagta hai kush kismat hai woh maa jise khuda ne ek nahi do do pariyon se nawaaza hai.....
kwaiish likhi thi ek bahut pehle aaj share karta hoon
dil ke do tukre kar dena
dono par hi mar jaaun
ek ko garv se kahun mein beta
ek beti par jaan lutaaon
mere do pankhon se udkar
jaanat ki bhi sair lagaaun
mere do anmol ratan
dono ko mein dil de jaaun
choti si kwaaish hai meri
ek janam mein kam na paaun
jab jaaun is duniya se mein
jag ko do parchaai de jaaun
paras...kush raho abaad raho...aur tumhari pariyon se sar par tumhara pyaar aur ashirwaad sada bana rahe!!
-tumhara apna
Qasid
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19th October 2005, 10:09 PM
Dearest Pras ji....................
Bahut bahut bahut achha likha hai... tumhe parh ke bahut achha laga... very nice.... and nice of you... dil se nikli duaa aur daad kubul karna... aur yun hi likhte rehna aur hamensha khush rehna.
take care and have a nice day.
be happy!
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17th July 2006, 12:51 PM
Namaskaar Paras Ji
Aaj fir ek 'Maa' ko bacchon per pyaar samarpit kartey hue parha. Is sansaar mein 'Maa' ki koi doosri misaal nahin hai.
Shabdon ko aapne bahaut hee khoobi se dhaala hai. Marm ehsaas karaaya hai.
v i p i n
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