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Lightbulb Qurbaan malala qurbaan (revised) - 23rd October 2012, 10:55 AM

Dosto, I did not do a good job in my first attempt, Hope you will like the new poem. Regards

Hardev Ashk

QurbaaN Malala! QurbaaN!

T-assab-i-janooN

ke khilaaf
uthti awaaz ko
toone ik chehra diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!

QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

Dil hoteiN haiN kaafir

insaaN nahiN
achha sabak toone
unheiN paRHaaa diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!

QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

Kalam teri likhti rahe

laRti Rahe
Ham bhi saath haiN tere
Duniya ne ye dikha diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!

QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

Ho Lambi umr Malala teri!

haq ki tu jeete jahad
‘Ashk’ ne duaaoN ka
aaj tujhe guncha diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!
QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa


IN PRAISE OF MALAALA YOUSFZAI, 14 Year old Girl who was recently shot (October 2012)in Pakistan for her vocal stand against Taliban for right of education for women.


T-assab-i-janooN-wrath of fundamentalism, Jahad-struggle, guncha- bouquet

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3rd December 2012, 01:07 AM

i salute this poetry of urs, ise main takneeki taraajoo meN nahi tooluNga, bas yahi kahunga ki wah... us himmat wali ladki ki rooh ko khuda jannat bakshe... yuNhi apne behtareen khayaalon se aage v hume nawaajte rahiye...



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Exclamation Qurbaan malala qurbaan - 11th December 2012, 07:23 PM

Taish Sahib:

adaab. aapko klaam pasand ayaa, bahut shukriya. mere liye bhut zroori tha ki klaam waqt pe pesh karooN taki ye iske pannon me hi chupkar na reh jaaye. aap apni technical raaye bhi please deiN taaki aage se behtar likh skooN.


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Sodhi saahab SSA,

aapko yahaaN dekh kar bohat khushi hui

aapki yeh kaavish bhi bohat pasaNd aayi

ebazm ke dinoN meiN koi taqreeban 10-12 saal pehle jin shayaroN ko padh kar maiN behadd mutaasir hua karta tha aap un meiN se ek haiN aur yaqeenan aapko padh kar bohat kuch seekha bhi

yeh is forum ki khush naseebi hai ke aap yahaaN maujood haiN, aapse darkhuvaast hai ke aate raha kijiye

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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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WaaH ! Nihayat Khoob .. Hardev Ashq JI !

Kyaa Khoob Khayaal Nazm Hue HaiN ... UmdaaH !!

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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behad ummdah aur sacchaa bayaan aapne pesh kiyaa hai Hardev saahab....

malik aapko iska silaa ataa kare,, aur us ladki ki rooh ko sukoon... likhte rahen... mehfil me tashreef laate rahen...

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Lightbulb Qurbaan malala qurbaan (revised) - 28th December 2012, 11:35 AM

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Sodhi saahab SSA,

aapko yahaaN dekh kar bohat khushi hui

aapki yeh kaavish bhi bohat pasaNd aayi

ebazm ke dinoN meiN koi taqreeban 10-12 saal pehle jin shayaroN ko padh kar maiN behadd mutaasir hua karta tha aap un meiN se ek haiN aur yaqeenan aapko padh kar bohat kuch seekha bhi

yeh is forum ki khush naseebi hai ke aap yahaaN maujood haiN, aapse darkhuvaast hai ke aate raha kijiye

rab raakha
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Aadaab & SSA

apke saath to ebazm se saalo pahle raabta hua tha. Ruh khush ho gayi aapko yahaan dekhkar. Massha allah aap bhi bahut acha likhte hain aur ham sabh eik dusre se seekhkar hi aage bharte hain. Baaki learning is never ending.

Bahut shukriya aapne meri nazm pasand ki. ye meri dil se us bachi ke liye duaa hai ki vo kaamyaab ho taike Pakistan ke log aman se rah sakein aur aise hi aajakal hamaare India jo women rape ka cancer phail rahaa hai, usko nasht kiya jaaye aur ham uski jitna, jaise bhi ho sakein , help karein

Eik baar fir shukriya

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lazzat hai kuch gunaah meiN, chori meiN hai mazaa
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Dosto, I did not do a good job in my first attempt, Hope you will like the new poem. Regards

Hardev Ashk

QurbaaN Malala! QurbaaN!

T-assab-i-janooN

ke khilaaf
uthti awaaz ko
toone ik chehra diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!

QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

Dil hoteiN haiN kaafir

insaaN nahiN
achha sabak toone
unheiN paRHaaa diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!

QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

Kalam teri likhti rahe

laRti Rahe
Ham bhi saath haiN tere
Duniya ne ye dikha diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!

QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

Ho Lambi umr Malala teri!

haq ki tu jeete jahad
‘Ashk’ ne duaaoN ka
aaj tujhe guncha diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!
QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa


IN PRAISE OF MALAALA YOUSFZAI, 14 Year old Girl who was recently shot (October 2012)in Pakistan for her vocal stand against Taliban for right of education for women.


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Dosto, I did not do a good job in my first attempt, Hope you will like the new poem. Regards

Hardev Ashk

QurbaaN Malala! QurbaaN!

T-assab-i-janooN
ke khilaaf
uthti awaaz ko
toone ik chehra diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!
QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

Dil hoteiN haiN kaafir
insaaN nahiN
achha sabak toone
unheiN paRHaaa diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!
QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

Kalam teri likhti rahe
laRti Rahe
Ham bhi saath haiN tere
Duniya ne ye dikha diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!
QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

Ho Lambi umr Malala teri!
haq ki tu jeete jahad
‘Ashk’ ne duaaoN ka
aaj tujhe guncha diyaa

QurbaaN Malala!
QurbaaN!
kalam ne teri
TalbaN ka dil hilaa diyaa

IN PRAISE OF MALAALA YOUSFZAI, 14 Year old Girl who was recently shot (October 2012)in Pakistan for her vocal stand against Taliban for right of education for women.

T-assab-i-janooN-wrath of fundamentalism, Jahad-struggle, guncha- bouquet

Hardev Ashk
14 year old gal... Ufff
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Shiv ka sher yaad aayaa

Ye kaun hai jo mout nu badnaam kar reha
insaan nu insan de janm ne mareya..

Wo ab tak bapis b aa chuki hogi
Dunia aise hi logon se chalegi ..

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Exclamation Qurbaan malaal qurbaan - 21st January 2013, 01:22 AM

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What to say..

Shiv ka sher yaad aayaa

Ye kaun hai jo mout nu badnaam kar reha
insaan nu insan de janm ne mareya..

Wo ab tak bapis b aa chuki hogi
Dunia aise hi logon se chalegi ..

Humara hona na hona kis kaam ka

Janaab Janumanu Ji:

Shiv da sher vaquai maqool hai

inssan da wadda dushman oh khud te usdi lust for power, ego hai. ise layee shaayad vakhre samyaan te saade dharm hond vich aaye, par afsos koi vi dharam insaan di is kamzori nu control nahi kar sakya

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