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Taklif - 19th January 2005, 10:58 AM

Ek bar fir koshish ki hai

Tu dost hai mera,jamana janta hai,
Tu daga dega kisi ko to TAKLIF hogi muje

Tu agar muje na chahe to koi gila nahi,
Tu wafa karega kisi or se to TAKLIF hogi muje

Is kdar chahne laga hu tujko main ki,
Jo kaanta tuje laga to TAKLIF hogi muje

Ke kush rahna naya jaha basa ke tu,
Teri judai ki to ab her pal TAKLIF hogi muje


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hi! - 19th January 2005, 11:24 AM

nice words! keep it up

take care
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19th January 2005, 02:18 PM

Bhai waha kya taklif hai padh kar such me maza aa gaya
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19th January 2005, 02:26 PM

Tu dost hai mera,jamana janta hai,
Tu daga dega kisi ko to TAKLIF hogi muje

iska jawab hai

mene tujse kabhi wada e wafa na ki thi
fir meri bewafai pe tuje taklif kyu hai?

mene na kabhi kiya sath chalne ka wada umer bhar
fir meri judai pe tuje taklif kyu hai?

mene kabhi na tuje chaha hai jara bhi
fir meri Ruswai pe tuje taklif kyu hai?

Kesi rahi.............

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20th January 2005, 09:57 AM

hi khilona ji na jane kyu apki Shayri itni lubha jati hai
anyway very nice and thoughtful words,

Kaliya g ne bhi kafi achcha jawab diya,

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