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A SOUL OF LOVE
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Teri baho mein mer jaane ko jee chahta hai -
7th October 2008, 11:18 PM
Kabhie kabhie kuchh ker guzar jaane ko jee chahta hai,
Bas you hi teri baaho mein mer jaane ko jee chahta hai.....
Jo gire ashq teri aankho se jahaa se lad jau mein,
Ban k hasi tere hoto pe bikher jaane ko jee chahta hai.......
Meri her saans tere tasavvur ka aks nazar aati hai,
Banke dhadhkan tere DIL mein utar jaane ko jee chahta hai.....
Tere daaman mein simat jau ek masoom si DUAA banker,
KHUDA manglu usko,toh tere sazde me GIR jane ko ji chahta hai...
"ANAA" TUM MERI ZINDAGI HO,MERI HER KHUSHI HO/KKKHAN
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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7th October 2008, 11:31 PM
suhan allah. khan saab , bade romantic ho rahe ho.
lagta hai mulaqat ho gayi hai.....
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Huii Sabse Paraayi
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8th October 2008, 03:21 AM
Kabhie kabhie kuchh ker guzar jaane ko jee chahta hai,
Bas you hi teri baaho mein mer jaane ko jee chahta hai.....
Jo gire ashq teri aankho se jahaa se lad jau mein,
Ban k hasi tere hoto pe bikher jaane ko jee chahta hai.......
Meri her saans tere tasavvur ka aks nazar aati hai,
Banke dhadhkan tere DIL mein utar jaane ko jee chahta hai.....
Tere daaman mein simat jau ek masoom si DUAA banker,
KHUDA manglu usko,toh tere sazde me GIR jane ko ji chahta hai...
"ANAA" TUM MERI ZINDAGI HO,MERI HER KHUSHI HO/KKKHAN
Tahir Ji
Bahot khusi hui aapke nagme padh kar ....aise hi muskurate rahiye aur pyar bhari Nagme likhte Rahiye ....Mahfil to aapse hai ...Mahfil ko Roshan karte rahiye ....
Dua'oN kii saath
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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8th October 2008, 12:46 PM
tahir ji,
jo likha wo bahoot hi khubsurat hai apke aise hi behtreen nagmo ki khuwahis rahegi. likhte rahe.
raj
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10th October 2008, 10:00 PM
khan bhai.............kaya khoob ahsaas bayaan kiye haiN aapne, jiske liye bhi yeh likha hai agar woh pad le to......bhai jaan, umr bhar ke liye woh aapki ho jaye
bahut badiya poetry bani hai yeh.....yoon hi likhtey rahiye aur mahfil mein aate rahiye.
kush rahiye
duao.n ke saath
khan sister
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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A SOUL OF LOVE
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10th October 2008, 10:20 PM
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khan bhai.............kaya khoob ahsaas bayaan kiye haiN aapne, jiske liye bhi yeh likha hai agar woh pad le to......bhai jaan, umr bhar ke liye woh aapki ho jaye
bahut badiya poetry bani hai yeh.....yoon hi likhtey rahiye aur mahfil mein aate rahiye.
kush rahiye
duao.n ke saath
khan sister
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sister khan aap toh aise hi punchh rahi haise aapko pata hi nahi ki woh kaun hai,or duaa dene k liye shukriya,or haa sachche dil se tareef ki hai na,verna mein kabhi bhie apni kamiyo ko door nahi ker paaonga,
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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11th October 2008, 07:37 PM
wah ...kya baat hai...padh kar dil khush ho gaya..........aysa lag raha hai jaise koi mere hi dil baat apne lafzon me bayaan kar raha ho.........Tahir saheb...intehayi khoobsurat ehsaas hain apke........superb...
khush rahiye...khuda apki har tamanna poori kare...Ameen
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11th October 2008, 11:34 PM
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wah ...kya baat hai...padh kar dil khush ho gaya..........aysa lag raha hai jaise koi mere hi dil baat apne lafzon me bayaan kar raha ho.........Tahir saheb...intehayi khoobsurat ehsaas hain apke........superb...
khush rahiye...khuda apki har tamanna poori kare...Ameen
zainy
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Assalamu alaikum va rahmatullahi va barakatuhu,zainy sahiba aap jaisi shayra ko mujh haqeer shayer ka qalaam pasand hai, iske liye mein khud ko khushkismat samajhta hu,khuda se duaa hai ki aap isi tarah se mere qalaam per tadabbur kerte rahiye or wakai'atan ger k koi galti nazar aaye toh aapko pura haq hai ki aap meri galti sudharne mein meri madad karein,
HAMESHA AAPKI DUAAO KA MUSTAHIQ tahir kkkhan
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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12th October 2008, 02:15 PM
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Assalamu alaikum va rahmatullahi va barakatuhu,zainy sahiba aap jaisi shayra ko mujh haqeer shayer ka qalaam pasand hai, iske liye mein khud ko khushkismat samajhta hu,khuda se duaa hai ki aap isi tarah se mere qalaam per tadabbur kerte rahiye or wakai'atan ger k koi galti nazar aaye toh aapko pura haq hai ki aap meri galti sudharne mein meri madad karein,
HAMESHA AAPKI DUAAO KA MUSTAHIQ tahir kkkhan
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Wa alaikum assalam va rehmatullahi va barakatuhu...theek hai tahir saheb....aapne kaha hai .isi liye haq se aapki ghalti sudhar rahe hain hum.....word qalaam nahi hai ,balki kalaam hai.....aage se khayal rahiyega....
tc
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5th November 2008, 09:22 PM
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Wa alaikum assalam va rehmatullahi va barakatuhu...theek hai tahir saheb....aapne kaha hai .isi liye haq se aapki ghalti sudhar rahe hain hum.....word qalaam nahi hai ,balki kalaam hai.....aage se khayal rahiyega....
tc
zainy
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AS SALAMU ALAIKA VA RAHMATULLAH, aapne meri gazal ko pasand kiya or mere kahe mutabiq mere ki gai mistakes ko sahi kiya iske liye mein aapka shukr guzaar hu, bahut din baad aapka shukriya adaa kiya iske liye mein apse muaafi chahunga.....
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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6th November 2008, 01:55 AM
Tere daaman mein simat jau ek masoom si DUAA banker,
KHUDA manglu usko,toh tere sazde me GIR jane ko ji chahta hai
Very Nicee Keep it up
'MY Way Of Life'
People Laugh On Me Becoz i Am Different.
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And i Laugh On Them Becoz They Are All The Same. . . Thats Called... 'ATTITUDE'...LIVE IT!
Just MaLik
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A SOUL OF LOVE
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25th November 2008, 03:13 PM
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Tere daaman mein simat jau ek masoom si DUAA banker,
KHUDA manglu usko,toh tere sazde me GIR jane ko ji chahta hai
Very Nicee Keep it up
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raat sahab bas abhie abhie aapka reply dekha,aapko meri gazal k aash'aar pasand aaye , iske liye mein aapka shukr guzaar hu,
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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19th June 2009, 10:13 PM
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suhan allah. khan saab , bade romantic ho rahe ho.
lagta hai mulaqat ho gayi hai.....
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are nahi islaam anu bhai. woh toh bachpan mein hi mil gai thi ..jab mein 7 saal ka tha..bas tab se saath hai.....
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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20th June 2009, 09:32 PM
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Kabhie kabhie kuchh ker guzar jaane ko jee chahta hai,
Bas you hi teri baaho mein mer jaane ko jee chahta hai.....
Jo gire ashq teri aankho se jahaa se lad jau mein,
Ban k hasi tere hoto pe bikher jaane ko jee chahta hai.......
Meri her saans tere tasavvur ka aks nazar aati hai,
Banke dhadhkan tere DIL mein utar jaane ko jee chahta hai.....
Tere daaman mein simat jau ek masoom si DUAA banker,
KHUDA manglu usko,toh tere sazde me GIR jane ko ji chahta hai...
"ANAA" TUM MERI ZINDAGI HO,MERI HER KHUSHI HO/KKKHAN
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masha allah...
behad behad behad khoobsurat nazm....
"daaman mein simat jau ek masoom si DUAA banker,
KHUDA manglu usko,toh tere sazde me GIR jane ko ji chahta hai..."
my fav. lines....
yuhin likhte rahiega....
aapki dost
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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21st June 2009, 07:38 AM
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tahir ji,
jo likha wo bahoot hi khubsurat hai apke aise hi behtreen nagmo ki khuwahis rahegi. likhte rahe.
raj
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ji.....inshallah...allah ne chaha toh u hi likhne ki nakaam koshish kerta rahoonga.
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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2nd July 2009, 04:39 PM
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Originally Posted by Tahir kkkhan
Kabhie kabhie kuchh ker guzar jaane ko jee chahta hai,
Bas you hi teri baaho mein mer jaane ko jee chahta hai.....
Jo gire ashq teri aankho se jahaa se lad jau mein,
Ban k hasi tere hoto pe bikher jaane ko jee chahta hai.......
Meri her saans tere tasavvur ka aks nazar aati hai,
Banke dhadhkan tere DIL mein utar jaane ko jee chahta hai.....
Tere daaman mein simat jau ek masoom si DUAA banker,
KHUDA manglu usko,toh tere sazde me GIR jane ko ji chahta hai...
"ANAA" TUM MERI ZINDAGI HO,MERI HER KHUSHI HO/KKKHAN
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As salam walekuM
Wah Tahir Bhai, Bahut hi masoomiyat se dil mein ghar karne wale aapke ashar rahe.
Bhaut khooB......
Aapke ahsaas behad khoobsurat lage..........
Khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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