Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Aapki Shayri

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
...begana bana diya
Old
  (#1)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
...begana bana diya - 15th December 2004, 03:08 PM

Aankhon mein aansoon hain magar
Unhe kehkar paani tumne gum chupa liya
Udass tha chechra magar
Hoto pe hassi se tumne gum chupa liya
Humme apna kaha tha magar
Dil ka haal chupakar tumne begana bana diya

Love
Rohin
"Truth might be bitter than reality
Reality is darker then darkness itself
But what you believe in is just a mirage
The reality is a desert you donít wanna see"
   
Reply With Quote
ek din ......
Old
  (#2)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
ek din ...... - 23rd December 2004, 06:19 PM

ek din tha jab hum uchak kar aasman ko chuna chahte the
aaj hum zameen se paon uthane se bhi darte hain

ek din tha jab hum suraj ke aankhon mein aankhein dal dekhte the
aaj hum andhere mein bhi aankehin kholne se ghabrate hain

ek din tha samundar ke bahave ke khilaf hum tairte the
aaj hum pani ke paas jaane se katrate hain

ek din tha hum andhiyon se bhi lad jaate the
aaj hum hawa ke jhoke se duur bhagte hain

ek din tha kaanton pe chal apni manzil tai karte the
aaj hum phool ko chunne se darte hain

ek din tha hum Garzte badalon ki aawaz ko chup karate the
aaj hum dil ke dhadkne ki aawaz se bhi ghabrate hain

ek din hum jeena chahte the
aaj hum maut ka inteezar kartein hain

Kyon......

Thanks

Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
hi
Old
  (#3)
$hivani
Registered User
$hivani is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 125
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: baroda
Rep Power: 17
hi - 24th December 2004, 04:58 PM

hi rohinji.....u r excellent!!!!! i dont know wat else to say...plz keep writing!...bye 4 now! take care!


koshish ko hamari please nakarna mat.........gar pasand aaye to likhna zaroor ek khat....
   
Reply With Quote
hi
Old
  (#4)
chandni_jain
Registered User
chandni_jain has a spectacular aura aboutchandni_jain has a spectacular aura aboutchandni_jain has a spectacular aura about
 
chandni_jain's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 182
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: kolkatta
Rep Power: 19
hi - 25th December 2004, 05:44 PM

hi rohinji aapke dono sher hi bhut ache hai lekin dusra wala to bhut hi acha hai humari daad kabul kare or ase hi likhte rhyega
ok bye
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
29th December 2004, 03:34 PM

Hi Chandni, Shivani,

I am really touched by your appreciation. Hope you like what ever i am gonna write next. Hope you come visit this thread again and provide your valuable inputs.

Thanks

Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
29th December 2004, 08:24 PM

Hi,

this is my take on what life is

Yeh Zindagi hai ek maikhana
Har lamha ek payala sharaab ka
ISke har boond mein hai nasha aisa
Ki Hosh mein aana ab gawara na raha....


Hope you all like this one too

Love
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#7)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
4th January 2005, 12:50 PM

Hi,

Happy new year to one and all and i hope everyone likes these few lines.

Kehna to tha mujhe bahut kuch magar kahoonga Kuch nahi,
Tumhe sunana tha bahut kuch magar sunaonga kuch nahi,
Dil mein hai jo dard usse mein ab dil mein hi rakhoonga
Maut mil jaaye mujhe yehi dua karoonga


Love
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
6th January 2005, 09:36 PM

Hi Everyone,

Apne kandhe par uthaye hua tha meine apni hi laash
Saans le raha tha magar tha nahi koi ehsaas
Dhadak raha tha dil magar thi nahi koi awaaz
Yeh kya ho gaya hai mujhe Kyon hoon mein udaas
Sab kuch hai paas mere magar phir bhi hai khali pan
Kya yehi saaza hai meri jo kiya meine tujhse pyaar


Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#9)
disha for u
Registered User
disha for u is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 2
Join Date: Jan 2005
Rep Power: 0
6th January 2005, 10:16 PM

Kehena hai jo tujhe
Abbhi kehe do mujhe
Sunna hai mmujhe
Sab kuch jo kehena hai tujhe
Dil khul ke mujhe bole de
Hai jo dard tere dil me
Kan khulke sunle
Har pal mei hu tere sathme
with love
disha
   
Reply With Quote
hi
Old
  (#10)
banjara''''
kuch likhne ki koshish
banjara'''' has a spectacular aura aboutbanjara'''' has a spectacular aura aboutbanjara'''' has a spectacular aura about
 
banjara'''''s Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 930
Join Date: Feb 2003
Rep Power: 20
hi - 6th January 2005, 11:53 PM

rohin
good work
keep writing
khan


banjara''''
agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon
or judai main mohabbat kasi????
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#11)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
6th January 2005, 11:58 PM

Hi Disha and Banjara,

Thanks for the reply and the encouragement i will hope to see you visit this thread again and provide ur valuable inputs.

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Re: ...begana bana diya
Old
  (#12)
friendnidhi
Registered User
friendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to behold
 
friendnidhi's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 962
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 25
Re: ...begana bana diya - 7th January 2005, 05:48 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Rohin
Aankhon mein aansoon hain magar
Unhe kehkar paani tumne gum chupa liya
Udass tha chechra magar
Hoto pe hassi se tumne gum chupa liya
Humme apna kaha tha magar
Dil ka haal chupakar tumne begana bana diya

Love
Rohin
"Truth might be bitter than reality
Reality is darker then darkness itself
But what you believe in is just a mirage
The reality is a desert you donít wanna see"
Kya bat hai Rhin ji bahut acha likha hai, hum to kuch bhi nahi iske age

Aankhon ke aansun tumhe dikhana nahi chahte the
Udas chehre se apne apko wakif nahi karana chahte the
Apko humne apna mana hain
isliye apne gum apko dena nahi chahte the.
dosti ka matlab hi hai dost ko khusi dena
apki isi khusi ko hum apse chinna nahi chahte the.

Regards Nidhi


Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear

"Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...."
  Send a message via Yahoo to friendnidhi  
Reply With Quote
Re: ek din ......
Old
  (#13)
friendnidhi
Registered User
friendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to behold
 
friendnidhi's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 962
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 25
Re: ek din ...... - 7th January 2005, 05:54 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Rohin
ek din tha jab hum uchak kar aasman ko chuna chahte the
aaj hum zameen se paon uthane se bhi darte hain

ek din tha jab hum suraj ke aankhon mein aankhein dal dekhte the
aaj hum andhere mein bhi aankehin kholne se ghabrate hain

ek din tha samundar ke bahave ke khilaf hum tairte the
aaj hum pani ke paas jaane se katrate hain

ek din tha hum andhiyon se bhi lad jaate the
aaj hum hawa ke jhoke se duur bhagte hain

ek din tha kaanton pe chal apni manzil tai karte the
aaj hum phool ko chunne se darte hain

ek din tha hum Garzte badalon ki aawaz ko chup karate the
aaj hum dil ke dhadkne ki aawaz se bhi ghabrate hain

ek din hum jeena chahte the
aaj hum maut ka inteezar kartein hain

Kyon......

Thanks

Rohin
Rohin ji kya khub likha hai apne

Apki aankhon mein roshni hai aisi ki andhere mein bhi roshni karde
aapka tej dekhkar suraj apse nazrein nahi mila sakta

Pani dekh kar apko darta hai apse
lehron ki kya aukad ki apke khilaf jayein

Hawa ka jhonka to apke sath ata hai
toofan aap khud hain, to toofan kya ayga apke age

Phool to apki rahon mein bich chuke hain
aur kaante to phoolon se komal ho gayein hai

Badal ki garj apki dhadkonon se ati hai
zara gaur farmaiyega

woh insaan hi kya jo jeeke mare
insan wahi jo maut ko apne sath le je chale

kosish ki hai reply dene ki, dont mind if it is not good

Regards Nidhi


Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear

"Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...."
  Send a message via Yahoo to friendnidhi  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#14)
friendnidhi
Registered User
friendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to behold
 
friendnidhi's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 962
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 25
7th January 2005, 05:56 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Rohin
Hi,

this is my take on what life is

Yeh Zindagi hai ek maikhana
Har lamha ek payala sharaab ka
ISke har boond mein hai nasha aisa
Ki Hosh mein aana ab gawara na raha....


Hope you all like this one too

Love
Rohin
Robin ji aap bhi kamal hai, is thread par to chaye hue ho
Wah ustaad wah!!!!

Hosh mein aaiye huzoor
is nashe mein kho mat jaiega
aur bhi kai nashe hai zindagi mein
jiske mein aapko khona padega


Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear

"Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...."
  Send a message via Yahoo to friendnidhi  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#15)
friendnidhi
Registered User
friendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to behold
 
friendnidhi's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 962
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 25
7th January 2005, 05:59 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Rohin
Hi,

Happy new year to one and all and i hope everyone likes these few lines.

Kehna to tha mujhe bahut kuch magar kahoonga Kuch nahi,
Tumhe sunana tha bahut kuch magar sunaonga kuch nahi,
Dil mein hai jo dard usse mein ab dil mein hi rakhoonga
Maut mil jaaye mujhe yehi dua karoonga


Love
Rohin
Rohin ji dil ki bat agar kisi se share karenfge to acha rahega
too good

Kehna jo hai apko woh ab keh dijiye
sunana tho jo bhi woh hamein suna dijiye
dil ka dard dil mein na rakhiye
is dost ke sath share kijiye
kyon aisi dua karte hain aap
kahin khud ke dushman to nahi ho aap.......??????????


Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear

"Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...."
  Send a message via Yahoo to friendnidhi  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#16)
friendnidhi
Registered User
friendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to beholdfriendnidhi is a splendid one to behold
 
friendnidhi's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 962
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 25
7th January 2005, 06:10 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Rohin
Hi Everyone,

Apne kandhe par uthaye hua tha meine apni hi laash
Saans le raha tha magar tha nahi koi ehsaas
Dhadak raha tha dil magar thi nahi koi awaaz
Yeh kya ho gaya hai mujhe Kyon hoon mein udaas
Sab kuch hai paas mere magar phir bhi hai khali pan
Kya yehi saaza hai meri jo kiya meine tujhse pyaar


Thanks
Rohin
kya bat hai rohin ji, kya shabd likhe hain apne, too good.


Na Chaho kisi ko itna ~ ~ ki chahat tumhari majboori ban jaye ~ ~ chaho kisi ko itna ki ~ ~ tumhara pyar us ke liye zaroori ban jaye...............


Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear

"Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...."
  Send a message via Yahoo to friendnidhi  
Reply With Quote
Re: Re: ...begana bana diya
Old
  (#17)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
Re: Re: ...begana bana diya - 7th January 2005, 07:39 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by friendnidhi
Kya bat hai Rhin ji bahut acha likha hai, hum to kuch bhi nahi iske age

Aankhon ke aansun tumhe dikhana nahi chahte the
Udas chehre se apne apko wakif nahi karana chahte the
Apko humne apna mana hain
isliye apne gum apko dena nahi chahte the.
dosti ka matlab hi hai dost ko khusi dena
apki isi khusi ko hum apse chinna nahi chahte the.

Regards Nidhi
Nidhi ji,

Bahut shukriya aap mere nimantran par yahan aayin. Bahut aacha laga aapne waqt nikal kar mere har sher ka reply bhi kiya.

Isliye mein bhi aapke har ek sher ka jawab dena chahta hoon.

Shayad kuch waqt lage magar yahan jaroor aayega.


Sagar see aankhon mein tere aasoon na aaye
isliye har mushkil se lad sakte hain hum
Tere chehre par ek muskurahat ke liye
Ek naya jahan bassa sakte hain hum

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Re: Re: ek din ......
Old
  (#18)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
Re: Re: ek din ...... - 7th January 2005, 07:53 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by friendnidhi
Rohin ji kya khub likha hai apne

Apki aankhon mein roshni hai aisi ki andhere mein bhi roshni karde
aapka tej dekhkar suraj apse nazrein nahi mila sakta

Pani dekh kar apko darta hai apse
lehron ki kya aukad ki apke khilaf jayein

Hawa ka jhonka to apke sath ata hai
toofan aap khud hain, to toofan kya ayga apke age

Phool to apki rahon mein bich chuke hain
aur kaante to phoolon se komal ho gayein hai

Badal ki garj apki dhadkonon se ati hai
zara gaur farmaiyega

woh insaan hi kya jo jeeke mare
insan wahi jo maut ko apne sath le je chale

kosish ki hai reply dene ki, dont mind if it is not good

Regards Nidhi

Hi Nidhiji,

Bahut khub. Itna aacha likhn k baad ant mein kya likh diya aapne....???

"kosish ki hai reply dene ki, dont mind if it is not good"

Aapne jo likha hai bahut aacha likha hai.

Aaena chahta tha dekhna khush humme
Magar dekh chehra meine aaene mein
Poocha is aaene se, ki khata kya ki humne
Jo chehre par khushi aate hain aansoon banke

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#19)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
7th January 2005, 08:01 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by friendnidhi
Robin ji aap bhi kamal hai, is thread par to chaye hue ho
Wah ustaad wah!!!!

Hosh mein aaiye huzoor
is nashe mein kho mat jaiega
aur bhi kai nashe hai zindagi mein
jiske mein aapko khona padega

Hi Nidhi ji,

Mein koi ustad nahi Ek phakir hoon.

Ek gaana yaad aata hai

alaah ke baande hasde...... aalah ke bande hasde.....Ho na ho kal phir aayega....

Shayad yeh gaana suna hoga aapne.

Anyways a few lines for you

Pyaar, khushi aur Sharab
Kissi ka nash aacha nahi hota
duur chali haati hain yeh jab
Insaan jeena nahi chahta

Love
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#20)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
7th January 2005, 10:40 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by friendnidhi
Rohin ji dil ki bat agar kisi se share karenfge to acha rahega
too good

Kehna jo hai apko woh ab keh dijiye
sunana tho jo bhi woh hamein suna dijiye
dil ka dard dil mein na rakhiye
is dost ke sath share kijiye
kyon aisi dua karte hain aap
kahin khud ke dushman to nahi ho aap.......??????????

Hi Nidhi ji,

Wah bahut khub ,

Ashk ke aasoon ki daastan kaise kahoon
Hai seene mein jo dard usse jahir kaise karoon
Dil toda hai aaj kissine humara us tute dil ke tukde kaise dikhaaon
Ro rahi hai ruh meri uski tadap tujhe mehsoos karoon kaise

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#21)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
8th January 2005, 12:37 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by friendnidhi
kya bat hai rohin ji, kya shabd likhe hain apne, too good.
Nidhi ji

Bahut bahut shukriya. Mujhe bahut acha laga ki aapko bahut acha laga. Meine aapke kayin Post pade hain woh bahut ache the. Magar bahut baar aapke sher ke koi jawab nahi soch pata tha aur kabhi bahut busy hota tha. Isliye aapko meine finally yeh link bheja laga tha aapko bhi pasand aayega. Thanks

Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#22)
priyanka jain
Registered User
priyanka jain will become famous soon enough
 
priyanka jain's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 791
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: nagpur
Rep Power: 0
8th January 2005, 02:02 PM

HELLO ROHIN JI,

mujhe yeh nahi samajh mein aa raha hai ki mein aapse kya kahu mera matlab mein aapka kis tarah shukriyada ada karu aapko ek baat kehna chahungi u r simply supreb HATS OFF TO YOU.....

i would like to thank u from the bottom of my heart that u invited me to see this mail of urs ......... i m so lucky i should say that i read it as it is simply simply simply superb.... please dont think i m over exaggerating but i m saying it truly....

aapne aur nidhiji ne jis tarah yahan mail kiye hai wakai mein taareef karne ke liye shabdh nahi hai mere paasss..... mein aaj bahut khush hun ki mein bhi ismein ek reply bhej rahi hun..

mein naahi aapke aur nidhi ji ke kabil hun jo itne ache sher aur unke itne ache reply de saku isliye mujhe maaf karna ki mein aapko itna acha jawab nahi bhej paayi.....

rohin :-
Aankhon mein aansoon hain magar
Unhe kehkar paani tumne gum chupa liya
Udass tha chechra magar
Hoto pe hassi se tumne gum chupa liya
Humme apna kaha tha magar
Dil ka haal chupakar tumne begana bana diya

APNA KEHKAR TUMNE HUME BEGANA TO BANA DIYA....
DIL KA HAAL NA KEHKAR HUME PARAYA TO BANA DIYA...
AB SOCHKAR ROYA KARO,
KAHIN AANKHO MEIN HUME RAKH KAR BAHA TO NA DIYA....


i know its not good but ya ek prayas kiya hai.....
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#23)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
8th January 2005, 02:14 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by priyanka jain
HELLO ROHIN JI,

mujhe yeh nahi samajh mein aa raha hai ki mein aapse kya kahu mera matlab mein aapka kis tarah shukriyada ada karu aapko ek baat kehna chahungi u r simply supreb HATS OFF TO YOU.....

i would like to thank u from the bottom of my heart that u invited me to see this mail of urs ......... i m so lucky i should say that i read it as it is simply simply simply superb.... please dont think i m over exaggerating but i m saying it truly....

aapne aur nidhiji ne jis tarah yahan mail kiye hai wakai mein taareef karne ke liye shabdh nahi hai mere paasss..... mein aaj bahut khush hun ki mein bhi ismein ek reply bhej rahi hun..

mein naahi aapke aur nidhi ji ke kabil hun jo itne ache sher aur unke itne ache reply de saku isliye mujhe maaf karna ki mein aapko itna acha jawab nahi bhej paayi.....

rohin :-
Aankhon mein aansoon hain magar
Unhe kehkar paani tumne gum chupa liya
Udass tha chechra magar
Hoto pe hassi se tumne gum chupa liya
Humme apna kaha tha magar
Dil ka haal chupakar tumne begana bana diya

APNA KEHKAR TUMNE HUME BEGANA TO BANA DIYA....
DIL KA HAAL NA KEHKAR HUME PARAYA TO BANA DIYA...
AB SOCHKAR ROYA KARO,
KAHIN AANKHO MEIN HUME RAKH KAR BAHA TO NA DIYA....


i know its not good but ya ek prayas kiya hai.....
Hey Priyanka,

Its beautiful Never say that what u have written is not good. As long as the thoughts come from the heart it is good.

A few lines hope to encourage u to feel that way.

Khamoshi bhi teri kuch kehti hai
Ankhein bhi ek dastan sunati hain
Teri har dhadkan
Tere pyaar ka geet gati hain

Thanks priyanka for replying.
Please never feel that way again we are friends i hope right.
So never gain

Take Care
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#24)
priyanka jain
Registered User
priyanka jain will become famous soon enough
 
priyanka jain's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 791
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: nagpur
Rep Power: 0
8th January 2005, 02:25 PM

hello rohin ji,

quote:
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Originally posted by Rohin
ek din tha jab hum uchak kar aasman ko chuna chahte the
aaj hum zameen se paon uthane se bhi darte hain

ek din tha jab hum suraj ke aankhon mein aankhein dal dekhte the
aaj hum andhere mein bhi aankehin kholne se ghabrate hain

ek din tha samundar ke bahave ke khilaf hum tairte the
aaj hum pani ke paas jaane se katrate hain

ek din tha hum andhiyon se bhi lad jaate the
aaj hum hawa ke jhoke se duur bhagte hain

ek din tha kaanton pe chal apni manzil tai karte the
aaj hum phool ko chunne se darte hain

ek din tha hum Garzte badalon ki aawaz ko chup karate the
aaj hum dil ke dhadkne ki aawaz se bhi ghabrate hain

ek din hum jeena chahte the
aaj hum maut ka inteezar kartein hain

Kyon......

Thanks

Rohin
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
aapke is quote ka jawab maine diya to hai par agar galti hui ho to maaf karna.... koshish hai


aaj aap zameen se paon uthane se bhi darte hain
aaj aap andhere mein bhi aankehin kholne se ghabrate hain
aaj aap pani ke paas jaane se katrate hain
aaj aap hawa ke jhoke se duur bhagte hain
aaj aap phool ko chunne se darte hain
aaj aap dil ke dhadkne ki aawaz se bhi ghabrate hain
aaj aap maut ka inteezar kartein hain


aisa isliy ki aapne gum ke saath rishta jod liya hai.....
aisa isliy ki aapne phoolo ki jagah kaanto ko pasand kiya hai...
aisa isliy ki aapne udaasi ko apna ghar maan liya hai......
aur aisa isliye kyonki ki aapke pyaar ne aapko dhoka diya hai...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#25)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
8th January 2005, 02:28 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by priyanka jain
hello rohin ji,

quote:
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Originally posted by Rohin
ek din tha jab hum uchak kar aasman ko chuna chahte the
aaj hum zameen se paon uthane se bhi darte hain

ek din tha jab hum suraj ke aankhon mein aankhein dal dekhte the
aaj hum andhere mein bhi aankehin kholne se ghabrate hain

ek din tha samundar ke bahave ke khilaf hum tairte the
aaj hum pani ke paas jaane se katrate hain

ek din tha hum andhiyon se bhi lad jaate the
aaj hum hawa ke jhoke se duur bhagte hain

ek din tha kaanton pe chal apni manzil tai karte the
aaj hum phool ko chunne se darte hain

ek din tha hum Garzte badalon ki aawaz ko chup karate the
aaj hum dil ke dhadkne ki aawaz se bhi ghabrate hain

ek din hum jeena chahte the
aaj hum maut ka inteezar kartein hain

Kyon......

Thanks

Rohin
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
aapke is quote ka jawab maine diya to hai par agar galti hui ho to maaf karna.... koshish hai


aaj aap zameen se paon uthane se bhi darte hain
aaj aap andhere mein bhi aankehin kholne se ghabrate hain
aaj aap pani ke paas jaane se katrate hain
aaj aap hawa ke jhoke se duur bhagte hain
aaj aap phool ko chunne se darte hain
aaj aap dil ke dhadkne ki aawaz se bhi ghabrate hain
aaj aap maut ka inteezar kartein hain


aisa isliy ki aapne gum ke saath rishta jod liya hai.....
aisa isliy ki aapne phoolo ki jagah kaanto ko pasand kiya hai...
aisa isliy ki aapne udaasi ko apna ghar maan liya hai......
aur aisa isliye kyonki ki aapke pyaar ne aapko dhoka diya hai...
Wah Priyankaji wah,

Sach pata hai aapko.

Reply bahut jald karoonga

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#26)
priyanka jain
Registered User
priyanka jain will become famous soon enough
 
priyanka jain's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 791
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: nagpur
Rep Power: 0
8th January 2005, 02:30 PM

aapke reply ka wait karungi.....
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#27)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
8th January 2005, 02:36 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by priyanka jain
aapke reply ka wait karungi.....
Priyanka ji,

Toh yeh lijiye aapka reply. Ummed hai aapko pasand aayega

Kaanton ki chuban humesha rehti hai phoolon ki khooshboo nahi
Gum saath hota hai humesha magar khushi nahi
tute aaene ko jod bhi doge to lakeer reh jaayegi
Tuta jo mera dil hai pyaar to phir bhi tumse yeh karega hi

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Hi Rohin!
Old
  (#28)
yashmax
Shayri Dil se...
yashmax is on a distinguished road
 
yashmax's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 453
Join Date: Apr 2004
Rep Power: 17
Hi Rohin! - 8th January 2005, 03:47 PM

Rohin mere Dost,

Aap ko bhi Naya Saal Mubarak ho...


Aap ka jawaab nahi yaar...
Kaafi Dard hai har ek line mein aap ke....
Aap ka pyar mein inn sabhi post mein
dekh sakta hu aur mehsus bhi kar sakta huu...

Iss haad tak aap ne accha likha hai ke mere paas ilfazo ki
kaami bhanak rahi hai..

Saach mein dost tusi badde great ho!
Pyar hum sabhi ko great bana deta hai....
Aur shayar to zaroor banata hai....


Dost issi tarha aap likhte rahiye..aur humara saath pate rahiye..
Ijazat chahta hu....
aap ka dost yogesh....


~ Dosti Dil se ~
: : Dost har lamha saath tumhare hai hum : :
Listen to your mind...but follow your heart.
"Anyone who believes sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain."
----------------------------------------------
: : Yogesh : :
  Send a message via Yahoo to yashmax Send a message via AIM to yashmax  
Reply With Quote
Re: Hi Rohin!
Old
  (#29)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
Re: Hi Rohin! - 8th January 2005, 03:53 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by yashmax
Rohin mere Dost,

Aap ko bhi Naya Saal Mubarak ho...


Aap ka jawaab nahi yaar...
Kaafi Dard hai har ek line mein aap ke....
Aap ka pyar mein inn sabhi post mein
dekh sakta hu aur mehsus bhi kar sakta huu...

Iss haad tak aap ne accha likha hai ke mere paas ilfazo ki
kaami bhanak rahi hai..

Saach mein dost tusi badde great ho!
Pyar hum sabhi ko great bana deta hai....
Aur shayar to zaroor banata hai....


Dost issi tarha aap likhte rahiye..aur humara saath pate rahiye..
Ijazat chahta hu....
aap ka dost yogesh....

Dost yogesh,

Tahe dil se mera shukriya kabul karein

Kabhi kabhi dekh gum apna aasoon baha ta hoon
Toh phir dekh doosron ko apne aap pe hasta hoon
Mera kya hai, kyun hoon udas, aakhir dil hi to tuta hai
Unka kya zinka jahan ujad gaya hai..?

Hope this new year brings you love and happiness.

Take Care
Thanks for coming here

Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#30)
Pulkit_gupta
Humanity
Pulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant future
 
Offline
Posts: 6,226
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 39
8th January 2005, 04:00 PM

Yeh Zindagi hai ek maikhana
Har lamha ek payala sharaab ka
ISke har boond mein hai nasha aisa
Ki Hosh mein aana ab gawara na raha....


Loved this Sher Rohin!! Good Work... Keep it Up!!


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
  Send a message via Yahoo to Pulkit_gupta  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#31)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
8th January 2005, 04:05 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta

Loved this Sher Rohin!! Good Work... Keep it Up!!
Thanks a lot Pulkit, for coming.

A very happy new year to you.

Hope you come again

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#32)
Pulkit_gupta
Humanity
Pulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant future
 
Offline
Posts: 6,226
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 39
8th January 2005, 04:14 PM

Tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye!!

Hey Rohin Buddy!

A very very Happy and Prosperous New Year to you... May u keep writing wonderful shayris this year.. and may i keep adding them to my collection.. obvuiously with ur name

TC


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
  Send a message via Yahoo to Pulkit_gupta  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#33)
devdaas
Registered User
devdaas is on a distinguished road
 
devdaas's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 112
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: London
Rep Power: 16
8th January 2005, 04:22 PM

ZINDAGI HAI PHASLA AUR PHASLA HAI MAUT BHI
PHASLON KE DARMIYAN SEHMI HUI HAI ZINDAGI
PHASLE HI PHASLE HAIN RU BRU HAR GHADI
MAR GAYE TO HADSA HAI JEE LIYE TO ZINDAGI
HADSON KE SILSILEY HAI ZINDAGI KE DARMIYAN
WAHI GHADI ZINDAGI HAI WAHI GHADI MAUT BHI
WAQT ACHA YA BURA PHASLON KE HAIN GHULAM
HAR DAUR HAI IK PHASLA AUR PHASLA HAI DAUR BHI
HUM MEIN TUM MEIN BHI HAIN PHASLON KE SILSILEY
BAD GAYE TO MAUT HAI KAM HUE TO ZINDAGI...........



Devdaas...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#34)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
8th January 2005, 04:29 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by devdaas
ZINDAGI HAI PHASLA AUR PHASLA HAI MAUT BHI
PHASLON KE DARMIYAN SEHMI HUI HAI ZINDAGI
PHASLE HI PHASLE HAIN RU BRU HAR GHADI
MAR GAYE TO HADSA HAI JEE LIYE TO ZINDAGI
HADSON KE SILSILEY HAI ZINDAGI KE DARMIYAN
WAHI GHADI ZINDAGI HAI WAHI GHADI MAUT BHI
WAQT ACHA YA BURA PHASLON KE HAIN GHULAM
HAR DAUR HAI IK PHASLA AUR PHASLA HAI DAUR BHI
HUM MEIN TUM MEIN BHI HAIN PHASLON KE SILSILEY
BAD GAYE TO MAUT HAI KAM HUE TO ZINDAGI...........



Devdaas...
Devdaas ji

Beautiful.

Kaun kambakht jeeta hai jeene ke liye
Hai maut manzil meri, hai inteezar ussi ka
Hai bus uss ghadi ki rah dekhte hum
jab hogi tum paas mere aur saanse khatam hone ke


Hope you like it

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Tanhayee
Old
  (#35)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
Tanhayee - 10th January 2005, 12:59 PM

Hi ,

Never wanted to se a tear in ur eyes.
But if this brings tears then forgive me
It is all that i have

aankhein nam aur dil dard bhara
hathon mein jam aur yeh andhera
mein aur meri yeh parchayee
kyon achhi lagti hai yeh tanhaye

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#36)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 31
10th January 2005, 04:03 PM

rohin,

tum yaad karo to muje to aana hi thha........ yunhi yaad karte rahna. achha laga.
khush raho

meena
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#37)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
10th January 2005, 04:11 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by meena chheda
rohin,

tum yaad karo to muje to aana hi thha........ yunhi yaad karte rahna. achha laga.
khush raho

meena
Hi Meena jee

Hum aapko bulate rahenge. Shukriya aap yahan aayein.
Yuhim aate raheyega

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#38)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
10th January 2005, 04:42 PM

Hi Everyone,

ek aur dil ki awaaz.

Umeed hai aage ki tarah aap logon ko yeh pasand aayega.

In the past few weeks lot has happened in my life.
In view of which this thread seems so painful.
But I am determined not to let this control my life and move on.

So here is one which hopefully will bring a smile to everyone.

Andhiyan aayenge, Toofan aayega
Magar ae rahi tu chalta chal

Tapti dharti registan ki milengi
Magar ae rahi tu chalta chal

Barfele pahado ke uchaiyan hongi
Magar ae rahi tu chalta chal

Aayenge rah kanton bhari
Magar ae rahi tu chalta chal

Kyunki...
jisne mani nahi hai haar
Har mushkil ko banaya aasan
Hai Jeet ta woh hi har baar
Mila ussi ko hai bhagwan

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Dost Rohin!
Old
  (#39)
yashmax
Shayri Dil se...
yashmax is on a distinguished road
 
yashmax's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 453
Join Date: Apr 2004
Rep Power: 17
Dost Rohin! - 10th January 2005, 05:13 PM

Kaise ho Dost Rohin,


Bahut hi baadiya likha hai dost....
Manna paddhe ga.....

Yeh Dost aise hi tu chalta chal.....
aur aise hi likhte rehna....

Too good!
Direct Dil se likha hai.....


Take care.......
have a wonderful time....


~ Dosti Dil se ~
: : Dost har lamha saath tumhare hai hum : :
Listen to your mind...but follow your heart.
"Anyone who believes sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain."
----------------------------------------------
: : Yogesh : :
  Send a message via Yahoo to yashmax Send a message via AIM to yashmax  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#40)
Rohin
Registered User
Rohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to beholdRohin is a splendid one to behold
 
Rohin's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,937
Join Date: Dec 2003
Rep Power: 28
10th January 2005, 05:23 PM

Hi Yogesh,

Its great that you liked it.

Yeah i will try to keep moving on and try to keep writing.

Do come again and keep in touch.

Thanks
Rohin


http://www.thoughtsunbound.com a place for my thoughts
   
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
shayar bana diya.... -. shalini_singh Doston Ki SMS Shayri 1 7th July 2010 12:12 AM
tanha bana diya sanam khan Shayri-e-Dard 9 4th December 2008 12:57 PM
Taj Mahal Bana Diya terenaam Shayri-e-Ishq 2 10th October 2004 12:24 AM
sharabi bana diya.... damal Shayri-e-Dard 10 9th May 2003 06:40 PM
Pathang bana diya tender-imprints Shayri-e-Dard 0 9th August 2002 02:15 AM



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2020, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com