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Intezar - 14th February 2005, 06:42 PM

bahot saal beet gaye tumhare saath rehte hue
beete hue har waqt ka nazara mere hotho par hai
kahin baar maine tumse poocha
KYA YE YAAD HAI TUMHE
tumhari ankho main kutch padh na payi
kahin baar maine tumhara haath mere balo pe rakha
dil main halki si uthi thi chubhan jab apne use hataya
jabhi apne mujhe chuya mera rom rom ga uthe the
KYA YE KABHI APNE SUNA
man mera aaj chekhta hai
saath rehne ka kya koi matlab hai
jooth muth ka ye dikhava to hai
kun hum saath saath rehte hai
mere in sawalo ke jawab ki umeed le ke khadi hun
koi dil ke darwaze pe dastaq denewale ke intezar main


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14th February 2005, 06:55 PM

aisee lagii lagan
meeta ho gaii magan,
woh to gali - gali , meena - meena gane lagii


lol Meeta.....gustaakhi maaf ho magar ye rog aapako be-saq meena ji ki den hai.


Dard mere hi bahoot hain hone ko gamgeen,
tum kuch aur kaho to aaj baat kareN.


ek baar fir gustaakhi maaf ho.

Jara apana khayaal rakhiyegaa.
paplu.


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reply - 14th February 2005, 07:15 PM

bahot saal beet gaye tumhare saath rehte hue
beete hue har waqt ka nazara mere hotho par hai
kahin baar maine tumse poocha
KYA YE YAAD HAI TUMHE
tumhari ankho main kutch padh na payi
kahin baar maine tumhara haath mere balo pe rakha
dil main halki si uthi thi chubhan jab apne use hataya
jabhi apne mujhe chuya mera rom rom ga uthe the
KYA YE KABHI APNE SUNA
man mera aaj chekhta hai
saath rehne ka kya koi matlab hai
jooth muth ka ye dikhava to hai
kun hum saath saath rehte hai
mere in sawalo ke jawab ki umeed le ke khadi hun
koi dil ke darwaze pe dastaq denewale ke intezar main


Meeta ji,
bahoot gahar ehsaas hai ye.
jis tarah se aapne inhe sabdo ke dhaanche me sawara hai wo kabil-e-tarif hai.

kayi baar aisa hota hai wo jo humara saath me hai
jo hamuaare har pahaloo se juda hota hai
jisaki har baato ka asar sidhe dilo-gimaab par hota hai
wo apna nahi bahoot door-door hota hai

jis pal ko hum apne yaado me saja kar rakhte hai
wo pal to use yaad bhi nahi hota hai
in sawalo ka jawab ab to humara dil chata hai
lekin use to yaad bhi nahi hota hai

bas ek dikhaawe ki tarah hota hai
ek anbujhi paheli ki tarah hota hai

pata nahi kyu aapke lines padhate hi mere jehan me ye lines ubhar kar chali aayi,
asha hai ki yeha inhe dene par aapko koi aitraaj nahi hoga.

aapke khayaalo me jaane kaha mai doob gayi
bas isi doobaw se bahar lnikalane ke liye alwida
apna khayaal rakhiyega

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aisee lagii lagan
meeta ho gaii magan,
woh to gali - gali , meena - meena gane lagii


lol Meeta.....gustaakhi maaf ho magar ye rog aapako be-saq meena ji ki den hai.


Dard mere hi bahoot hain hone ko gamgeen,
tum kuch aur kaho to aaj baat kareN.


ek baar fir gustaakhi maaf ho.

Jara apana khayaal rakhiyegaa.
paplu.
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wah kya baat hai par ek baat kehna chaungi pyar har dil ki dhdkan hai jaan hai,thanks 4 reply, sorry 4 delay i was not in town .t.c.


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Re: reply - 22nd February 2005, 12:16 PM

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bahot saal beet gaye tumhare saath rehte hue
beete hue har waqt ka nazara mere hotho par hai
kahin baar maine tumse poocha
KYA YE YAAD HAI TUMHE
tumhari ankho main kutch padh na payi
kahin baar maine tumhara haath mere balo pe rakha
dil main halki si uthi thi chubhan jab apne use hataya
jabhi apne mujhe chuya mera rom rom ga uthe the
KYA YE KABHI APNE SUNA
man mera aaj chekhta hai
saath rehne ka kya koi matlab hai
jooth muth ka ye dikhava to hai
kun hum saath saath rehte hai
mere in sawalo ke jawab ki umeed le ke khadi hun
koi dil ke darwaze pe dastaq denewale ke intezar main


Meeta ji,
bahoot gahar ehsaas hai ye.
jis tarah se aapne inhe sabdo ke dhaanche me sawara hai wo kabil-e-tarif hai.

kayi baar aisa hota hai wo jo humara saath me hai
jo hamuaare har pahaloo se juda hota hai
jisaki har baato ka asar sidhe dilo-gimaab par hota hai
wo apna nahi bahoot door-door hota hai

jis pal ko hum apne yaado me saja kar rakhte hai
wo pal to use yaad bhi nahi hota hai
in sawalo ka jawab ab to humara dil chata hai
lekin use to yaad bhi nahi hota hai

bas ek dikhaawe ki tarah hota hai
ek anbujhi paheli ki tarah hota hai

pata nahi kyu aapke lines padhate hi mere jehan me ye lines ubhar kar chali aayi,
asha hai ki yeha inhe dene par aapko koi aitraaj nahi hoga.

aapke khayaalo me jaane kaha mai doob gayi
bas isi doobaw se bahar lnikalane ke liye alwida
apna khayaal rakhiyega

aapki garima
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Re: Intezar - 22nd February 2005, 03:21 PM

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bahot saal beet gaye tumhare saath rehte hue
beete hue har waqt ka nazara mere hotho par hai
kahin baar maine tumse poocha
KYA YE YAAD HAI TUMHE
tumhari ankho main kutch padh na payi
kahin baar maine tumhara haath mere balo pe rakha
dil main halki si uthi thi chubhan jab apne use hataya
jabhi apne mujhe chuya mera rom rom ga uthe the
KYA YE KABHI APNE SUNA
man mera aaj chekhta hai
saath rehne ka kya koi matlab hai
jooth muth ka ye dikhava to hai
kun hum saath saath rehte hai
mere in sawalo ke jawab ki umeed le ke khadi hun
koi dil ke darwaze pe dastaq denewale ke intezar main
nahi samajh aa raha ki kya likhu...
bas soch raha hoon...

ek baar man kaha ki likh du..
phir nahi likha
shayad kuchh sochker

vastavik jindagi mein
an-ginat hi pal hain
jinhe kaid nahi ker sakata
shabdo ke dayre mein

kuchh usi tarah ki hai anubhuti
jab gujar aapke kalaam se
vichar sab suny ho gaye
akhiri shabd dastak dene waale ke entjaar mein




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22nd February 2005, 05:14 PM

Meeta G...Adaab.

Mauf kijiyega lekin ek taveel arse ke baad aapse humkalaam ho raha hoon.. aapki yeh peshkash tah-e-dil mein khalish pohchaane mein kamyaab rahi....


khuda ki itni badi qaayenaat mein maine,
bas ek shaks ko maanga mujhe wohi na mila.

bohot ajeeb hai yeh QurbatoN ki doori bhi,
woh mere saath raha par mujhe kabhi na mila.


Apnaa khayaal rakhiyega...dua go.


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22nd February 2005, 05:30 PM

Meeta....aapko parhna hamesha hi ek alag...sa anubhav rehta hai...or na jaane keise aap ye sab itni saralta se likh paati haiN...ye Chaand aapko salaam karta hai....

DuaaoN ke saath...hamesha

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Talib saahab...aapka Reply parha...hamesha ki tareh...yahaaN bhi aapke ye sher....khoob pasand aaye.

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Re: Re: Intezar - 22nd February 2005, 07:16 PM

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nahi samajh aa raha ki kya likhu...
bas soch raha hoon...

ek baar man kaha ki likh du..
phir nahi likha
shayad kuchh sochker

vastavik jindagi mein
an-ginat hi pal hain
jinhe kaid nahi ker sakata
shabdo ke dayre mein

kuchh usi tarah ki hai anubhuti
jab gujar aapke kalaam se
vichar sab suny ho gaye
akhiri shabd dastak dene waale ke entjaar mein

AKANT
dil main utha tha toofan
jo kagaz pe utar aaya
thanks a lot, aapka jawab dene ka andaz nirala, bye



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Meeta G...Adaab.

Mauf kijiyega lekin ek taveel arse ke baad aapse humkalaam ho raha hoon.. aapki yeh peshkash tah-e-dil mein khalish pohchaane mein kamyaab rahi....


khuda ki itni badi qaayenaat mein maine,
bas ek shaks ko maanga mujhe wohi na mila.

bohot ajeeb hai yeh QurbatoN ki doori bhi,
woh mere saath raha par mujhe kabhi na mila.


Apnaa khayaal rakhiyega...dua go.
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aap bahot high likhte hai, bhai main ek aam admi hun. thanks a lot take care.


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Meeta....aapko parhna hamesha hi ek alag...sa anubhav rehta hai...or na jaane keise aap ye sab itni saralta se likh paati haiN...ye Chaand aapko salaam karta hai....

DuaaoN ke saath...hamesha

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thanks chand, kahin baar aisa mesoos hota hai ke dil main jo batein hai wo kagaz per nahi utarti, ek kambhkt ankhe hai jo ansoo girane ke baad bhi hasti rehti hai.jo koi dheere se ise sarahe to phir ro uthti hai.


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22nd February 2005, 09:25 PM

Meeta G aur Chaand Bhai..aap sab se phir ek baar gustakhi ki maufi chahta hoon.. jo sher meine likhe the woh mere nahi janaab Bashir Badr sahab ke hain.. mein unka naam likhna bhool gaya... ummeed hai yeh khata-e-beikhteyaar aap darguzar farmaayenge....


aap ki nazar poori gazal pesh karta hoon...lutf andoz kalaam hai yeh...


muhabbato.n me.n dikhaave kii dostii na milaa
agar gale nahii.n milataa to haath bhii na milaa

gharo.n pe naam the naamo.n ke saath ohade the
bahut talaash kiyaa koii aadamii na milaa

tamaam rishto.n ko mai.n ghar pe chho.D aayaa thaa
phir isake baad mujhe koii ajanabii na milaa

bahut ajiib hai ye qurbato.n kii duurii bhii
vo mere saath rahaa aur mujhe kabhii na milaa

*qubat = nazdikee, closeness.

Khudaa kii itanii ba.Dii qaayanaat me.n mai.n ne
bas ek ShaKhs ko maa.Ngaa mujhe vo hii na milaa


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Re: Intezar - 23rd February 2005, 01:24 PM

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bahot saal beet gaye tumhare saath rehte hue
beete hue har waqt ka nazara mere hotho par hai
kahin baar maine tumse poocha
KYA YE YAAD HAI TUMHE
tumhari ankho main kutch padh na payi
kahin baar maine tumhara haath mere balo pe rakha
dil main halki si uthi thi chubhan jab apne use hataya
jabhi apne mujhe chuya mera rom rom ga uthe the
KYA YE KABHI APNE SUNA
man mera aaj chekhta hai
saath rehne ka kya koi matlab hai
jooth muth ka ye dikhava to hai
kun hum saath saath rehte hai
mere in sawalo ke jawab ki umeed le ke khadi hun
koi dil ke darwaze pe dastaq denewale ke intezar main

mita,
KYA YE YAAD HAI TUMHE

bahu j saras ahesaas.... pan chhataay..... asamanjaas na dariya ma humesha mane dhakelti jaay chhe tari kalam.....

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23rd February 2005, 07:12 PM

Meeta ji...

kaisi hain aap...? is kalaam ko pehle bhi padha thaa...aur gehri soch mein padh gayi thee...ki chand alfaazon mein wo dard wo tadap jo asal mein dil ko chuu rahi hogi...kahan ubhar payi hogi...

apki nazar ek meena kumari ki gazal hai jo mujhe behad pasand hai...

chaa.Nd tanhaa hai aasmaa.N tanhaa
dil milaa hai kahaa.N kahaa.N tanhaa

bujh ga_ii aas chhup gayaa taaraa
thar_tharaataa rahaa dhuaa.N tanhaa

zindagii kyaa isii ko kahate hai.n
jism tanhaa hai aur jaa.N tanhaa

ham_safar ko_ii gar mile bhii kahii.n
dono.n chalate rahe tanhaa tanhaa

jalatii bujhatii sii raushanii ke pare
simaTaa simaTaa saa ek makaa.N tanhaa

raah dekhaa karegaa sadiyo.n tak
chho.D jaayenge ye jahaa.N tanhaa

--meena kumari

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Paras
ham_safar ko_ii gar mile bhii kahii.n
dono.n chalate rahe tanhaa tanhaa

jalatii bujhatii sii raushanii ke pare
simaTaa simaTaa saa ek makaa.N tanhaa

raah dekhaa karegaa sadiyo.n tak
chho.D jaayenge ye jahaa.N tanhaa

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thanks a lot, bahot achi gazal hai,maza aa gayi, aap jaise dost se hi hosla badhta hai, take care.


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mita,
asamajas....... ha, haji pan maan svikartu j nathhi... afsos... hu haji tane samji nathi sakti.. je dekhay chhe ae sachu ke je kahe chhe te sachu....
kadach tu wadhu khuli ne waat kare to samji saku tanae......


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