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Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata -
6th March 2005, 01:25 AM
Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata
Teri duniya me dhoondhta houn magar Apne dil ka pata nahi paata, Dewaaren mujhse tera pata poochti hain Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata Apne dil ka pata nahi paata, Tanhai ka libaas mere wajood ne oodh rakha hai Guft-gu ne raasta-e-khamoshi ikhtiyaar kiya hai Zindgi se muuh mod ker baithe hain ik taraf Ya kahiye karan ke maut ka he intezaar kiya hai Maut aati hai tu nahi aata Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata Apne dil ka pata nahi paata Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata, Karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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6th March 2005, 02:55 AM
Tanhai ka libaas mere wajood ne oodh rakha hai
Guft-gu ne raasta-e-khamoshi ikhtiyaar kiya hai Zindgi se muuh mod ker baithe hain ik taraf Ya kahiye karan ke maut ka he intezaar kiya hai Maut aati hai tu nahi aata Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata wah wah wah ............................. |
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jaan boojh ker choti likhi hai |
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jaan boojh ker choti likhi hai -
6th March 2005, 10:52 AM
hii rosey
Ye poerty jaan boojh ker choti likhi hai, kissi ne ye kaha thaa ki sab kuch theek hai magar aap poerty bahoot badi badi likhte ho....... issliye ise thoda chota ker diya khair ..tumhari wah mil gayi or kya chaahiye izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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very nice.... |
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very nice.... -
6th March 2005, 12:15 PM
Tum raah mein chup chaap khade ho to gaye ho.....
kis kisko bataoge ki ghar kyun nahi jaate..... Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata.... Kya isi baat ka jawaab diya hai aapne? Teri duniya me dhoondhta houn magar Apne dil ka pata nahi paata, Dewaaren mujhse tera pata poochti hain Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata Mohabbat.... Naina Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein... |
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hiii -
6th March 2005, 03:29 PM
hi karan
tumhara likha hua to sara din ya sari zindgi padti rahun to bhi kum hai chota likho ya bada likhte bahot khub ho hume humesha pasand ata hai jin din tum shayri.com mai kuch posy nahi karte tumhara likha kuch paden na to din adhora sa lagta hai ................ tumhari post ka hume humesha entzar rahta hai  bye karan take care rose |
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hii naina |
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hii naina -
6th March 2005, 05:08 PM
Deewaren mujhse tera pata poochti hain
Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata read this again .. You will find what i ment the cause is hidden in this line only izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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hiiii rosy |
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hiiii rosy -
6th March 2005, 05:10 PM
gulaab ek gulaab ki taraf se
wah ye bhee khoob rahee... i m flattered by your words lagta hai ab to roz ek poerty likhni padegi kal 2 likhi or aaj 3 5 din ki chutti ho gayi..... hahahaha na baba.. likhta rahunga .. tumko to maalum hai jab akela pad jaata houn.. likha kerta houn duaa karo ki akela he rahun.. to shayari ka rang aazmaata rahunga izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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hi! |
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hi! -
7th March 2005, 01:14 PM
wah...kya aalam hai !
harsu wah wah gunj rahi hai...meri nanhi si Wah bhi usi mein ghul gayi hai!! tc komal |
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7th March 2005, 03:39 PM
hi karan how r u?
haan mai duaa to karungi per tumhare akele rahne ki nahi tum akele na raho haan per humesha likhte raho i now tum chahhe akele raho ya sath tum likhna chod bhi nahi sakte jesse jab tak ensan zinda hai sans lena nahoi chodta vese tumhari shayri tumhari sans hain humesha likhte raho aur hum padhte rahen bye take care rose |
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Hii komal |
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Hii komal -
7th March 2005, 03:39 PM
APni wah ko nanha keh ker mere kalaam ko nanha bana gayi ho
Tumhari wah to stamp hoti hai poerty per isse mukammal banaane ke liye Thats why i call it .. breaths of my poerty izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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HI! |
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HI! -
7th March 2005, 04:04 PM
galti ho gayi...apne toh daant diya mujhe!
wel...agey se khayal rakhungi. tc komal |
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hmmmmm -
7th March 2005, 04:31 PM
kaam he aisa kiya tumne ...
Apni wah ko nanha bataa diya jise hum apni poertys ke breath kehte hain' Khair hota hai hota hai Kabhi ye sab bhee bataya karo ki kya accha nahi laga ya phir kuch repeat to nahi ho raha Because can realize batter then me Mai to jyada padhta nahi houn izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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hi -
7th March 2005, 07:34 PM
hmm...achha laga daantna bhi
he he!thik hai...i'd try 2 pointout..wat i dint like 2....dil karega toh! tc komal |
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yeah always -
7th March 2005, 07:44 PM
you do write .. everything
and one more thing you can let me know... if you want me to write something You can give me a hint of quote or subject .. that too i will try to write keep coming breath of my poertys izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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