Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata -
6th March 2005, 01:25 AM
Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata
Teri duniya me dhoondhta houn magar
Apne dil ka pata nahi paata,
Dewaaren mujhse tera pata poochti hain
Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata
Apne dil ka pata nahi paata,
Tanhai ka libaas mere wajood ne oodh rakha hai
Guft-gu ne raasta-e-khamoshi ikhtiyaar kiya hai
Zindgi se muuh mod ker baithe hain ik taraf
Ya kahiye karan ke maut ka he intezaar kiya hai
Maut aati hai tu nahi aata
Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata
Apne dil ka pata nahi paata
Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata,
Karan.q
Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye
Tanhai ka libaas mere wajood ne oodh rakha hai
Guft-gu ne raasta-e-khamoshi ikhtiyaar kiya hai
Zindgi se muuh mod ker baithe hain ik taraf
Ya kahiye karan ke maut ka he intezaar kiya hai
Maut aati hai tu nahi aata
Issliye roz ghar nahi jaata
jaan boojh ker choti likhi hai -
6th March 2005, 10:52 AM
hii rosey
Ye poerty jaan boojh ker choti likhi hai,
kissi ne ye kaha thaa ki sab kuch theek hai magar aap poerty bahoot badi badi likhte ho.......
issliye ise thoda chota ker diya
khair ..tumhari wah mil gayi
or kya chaahiye
izzajat
karan.q
Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye
tumhara likha hua to sara din ya sari zindgi padti rahun to bhi kum hai chota likho ya bada likhte bahot khub ho hume humesha pasand ata hai jin din tum shayri.com mai kuch posy nahi karte tumhara likha kuch paden na to din adhora sa lagta hai ................ tumhari post ka hume humesha entzar rahta hai
gulaab ek gulaab ki taraf se
wah ye bhee khoob rahee...
i m flattered by your words
lagta hai ab to roz ek poerty likhni padegi
kal 2 likhi or aaj 3
5 din ki chutti ho gayi.....
hahahaha
na baba.. likhta rahunga .. tumko to maalum hai
jab akela pad jaata houn.. likha kerta houn
duaa karo ki akela he rahun.. to shayari ka rang
aazmaata rahunga
izzajat
karan.q
Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye
hi karan how r u?
haan mai duaa to karungi per tumhare akele rahne ki nahi
tum akele na raho haan per humesha likhte raho i now tum chahhe akele raho ya sath tum likhna chod bhi nahi sakte jesse jab tak ensan zinda hai sans lena nahoi chodta vese tumhari shayri tumhari sans hain humesha likhte raho aur hum padhte rahen
APni wah ko nanha keh ker mere kalaam ko nanha bana gayi ho
Tumhari wah to stamp hoti hai poerty per
isse mukammal banaane ke liye
Thats why i call it .. breaths of my poerty
izzajat
karan.q
Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye
kaam he aisa kiya tumne ...
Apni wah ko nanha bataa diya
jise hum apni poertys ke breath kehte hain'
Khair hota hai hota hai
Kabhi ye sab bhee bataya karo ki kya accha nahi laga
ya phir kuch repeat to nahi ho raha
Because can realize batter then me
Mai to jyada padhta nahi houn
izzajat
karan.q
Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye
you do write .. everything
and one more thing
you can let me know...
if you want me to write something
You can give me a hint of quote
or subject .. that too i will try to write
keep coming
breath of my poertys
izzajat
karan.q
Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye