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Mushkil.... - 24th January 2006, 11:34 AM

Arz Kiya Hai....


Tumhari yaadon ko rok pana hai MUSHKIL,
Rote hue dil ko manana hai MUSHKIL,
Yeh dil apko kitna yad krta hai,
Ek Shayri mei likh pana hai MUSHKIL...

Criticism & Compliments both r welcome...




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24th January 2006, 04:43 PM

for u sweety compliments are there atleast from me they are:
1. superb
2.good words
3. outstanding...............................do keep writing


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Very good - 26th January 2006, 11:41 AM

Sweety,

A very good creation,

No one can show his heart feelings fully in a shayri.
   
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26th January 2006, 01:51 PM

Bahot Shukriya Meri shayri ko complement karne k liye Mehulji..

And Thanks a lot Jaspalji for appreciating it...


Kuch aur Arz karti hoon.... Padhiyega zaroor....

Jab Se Jaana, Tab Se Jaana,
Kya Hota Hai Yarana,
Najuk Rishta Hai Itna Jaana,
MUSHKIL Hai Is Rishtey Ko Nibhana........


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