Akelapann

sweet_nashaa · **Akelapann -** 23rd September 2002, 04:24 PM

It’s a feeling of loneliness
A labyrinth of loneliness
A feeling one cannot confide
A feeling one cannot abide
The pain will stalk the bearer
The pain will be there forever
The pain will tear at the heart
So much, it’ll break it apart
Memories will haunt every moment
So much, it’ll hurt every moment
The heart will bleed in pain
As love is merely insane
Tears will fuel the fire
Of the heart’s burning desire
Moments will seem forever
The love will be forever
Life will not be possible
As dreams become impossible
The heart will start to yearn
And desires will start to burn
How will one forget it all
Deeper in love they will fall
Even time would not heal
The pain that they will feel
Life will become a pain
With nothing else to gain
Everything will be lost forever
But the love will be there forever

nehakhan · **vow -** 23rd September 2002, 04:28 PM

hi

this is a really grat poem no words to describe it

very true if u try to forget sum one you remember them even more and u can never change the feelings of love no matter what happens in ur life

keep on writing

take care
bye

sweet_nashaa · **thanx -** 26th September 2002, 08:39 AM

thanx for liking my poem. What u said is very true.

Thanx again.

Amrita

Gam · **Hi! -** 30th September 2002, 09:07 AM

Hi!! Amrita Ji,

The way you have expressed your feeling is just great. Bahut hi khub likha hai. Bahut dino baad hum shayri – e – Ishq main aayai hai. Par aapki yai posting parnai kai baad laga ki hamesha aayai.

Main ye parnai kai baad sirf itna hi kahai sakta ho ki:-

Shaks wo jinda rahai kaisai
Aarju Jisai choti hi nahi
Kaha sai jeai wo jindagi
Jiski koi manzil hi nahi
Jeenai ko to yaha sab jetai hai
Par wo jiyai kaisai
Jiski saanso main kashish hi nahi
Par sapnai to aapnai hai
To kyo na inhai hi ham ji latai
Aur phir karna kya hai
Khush hi to hona hai.

Take care of yourself.

GAM

sweet_nashaa · 2nd October 2002, 04:49 PM

Hi Gam ji

Thanks a lot for liking my poem. It's really amazing how people like you can understand, but the person i wrote it for might never understand.

Thanx again...your appreciation means alot to me.

Amrita

Gam · **HI!! -** 5th October 2002, 09:05 AM

Hi Amrita Ji,

Aap to likhtai jaeyai. Humai to ye hi samajhna chayeyai ki kash wo parai aur samjha.

Sirf do line kahunga...........

Mangai sai hi mil jati har murad......
Bakhuda, khuda ki jaroorat no hati.

Take care

GAM

sweet_nashaa · 6th October 2002, 04:06 PM

Kaash meri murad purri ho jaaye...aap prathna/duwa kijiye.
Humme aur kuch nahin chahiye..sirf yeh, ke usse is baat ka ahesaas ho jaaye ke koi hain ko usse bohot chahti hain...aur woh uske liye apni zindagi daao pe laga sakti hain.

Thanx for your support.

Amrita

allahabadrptds · **beautiful -** 6th October 2002, 04:57 PM

hi amrita
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it was really beautiful compilation of words i have ever seen
humlogon to ek sher sunaya jaata hai

"har kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahi milta
kahi zameen to kabhi aasmaan nahi milta"

par aap ke liye iska modificated roop hai

"chaah lo to mukammal jahaan bhi milega
zameen hi kya aasmaan bhi milega"

best of luck

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aviral

sweet_nashaa · 7th October 2002, 07:32 AM

Hi

Thanks for liking my poem.

I wish ke humme mukammal jahan jald hi miljaaye. Thanks for the support. It means a lot to me.

Amrita

smack19 · **keep it up -** 7th October 2002, 07:41 AM

hi i dunno ur name but ur poem is awesome keep it up.i reallly appreciate it a lot.good goin.all da best 4 ur fututre
take care
fareed

sweet_nashaa · 8th October 2002, 05:54 PM

Thanx for liking my poem. Your appreciation means a lot to me.
Thanx for the support.

Amrita