dua

[zamir]

mehfil ko tishna ka salaam
doston yeh kuch chand sher jode hain ise main ne chote bacchon ke nazariye se likha hai bacchon ke dil mein agar yeh sab baatein daalein to woh behad accha insaan ban sakta hai


Maangte hain hum tujh se yehi duwa
Hum ko chalana bas ek sidhi raah

Ho gam ki yaa khushi apne liye bani
Karte rahenge hum tera shukr ada

Maan baap ka adab ta zindagi rahe
Insaniyat ke liye jeena humein sikha

Sach par chalen hamesha aur jhoot se bache
ho door door hum se buraai ka raasta

Ustaad ke liye dil mein jagah rahe
Sar par rahe hamesha hath sarparsti ka

Humko muhabbat buzurgon se bhi ho
Har waqt mil sake khidmat ka mauka

Mujhko ko lagaaw ho mere watan se bhi
Ho naam iska roshan aisa humein bana

Allah kar hifazat tu apne bando ki
Bimaar ko inaam sehat ka ho ata

[sunita thakur]

Originally Posted by tishna

mehfil ko tishna ka salaam
doston yeh kuch chand sher jode hain ise main ne chote bacchon ke nazariye se likha hai bacchon ke dil mein agar yeh sab baatein daalein to woh behad accha insaan ban sakta hai


Maangte hain hum tujh se yehi duwa
Hum ko chalana bas ek sidhi raah

Ho gam ki yaa khushi apne liye bani
Karte rahenge hum tera shukr ada

Maan baap ka adab ta zindagi rahe
Insaniyat ke liye jeena humein sikha

Sach par chalen hamesha aur jhoot se bache
ho door door hum se buraai ka raasta

Ustaad ke liye dil mein jagah rahe
Sar par rahe hamesha hath sarparsti ka

Humko muhabbat buzurgon se bhi ho
Har waqt mil sake khidmat ka mauka

Mujhko ko lagaaw ho mere watan se bhi
Ho naam iska roshan aisa humein bana

Allah kar hifazat tu apne bando ki
Bimaar ko inaam sehat ka ho ata

Bhaijaan.....aapki es rachna ne thoda udhaas kiya hume....ahsaas to acche haiN par kahin kahiN proper flow nahi bana.....umeed hai next jab bhi kuch likhoge to bahut jayada accha likhoge.

duao.n ke saath

[rizi_humtum]

nice tishna achi try ki hai or likha be bohat acha hai realy main tum ne sahi kaha tha k bachon k ye batein sikhaiye jayen to unki zindagi sawar jaye gi.bohat khoob friend khsuh raho.

[zamir]

salaam
baji aaj aakhir aap ne hum ko clean bowled kar hi diya

aap ne sahi kaha flow ki kami hone ki wajah se ashaar fike pad rahe hain
lekin aap ne meri khamiyan batayi bahot accha laga

ab aap dekhiye main kaise likhta hoon
i mean to say bina galti kiye yaa kam galtiyaan karoonga

bas duaoon mein shaamil rakhiye

[zamir]

rizi ji koshish to insaan ka kaam hai
aap ne sunita did ke comments pade nahi woh ek dum sahi bol rahi hain
ehsaas to theek hain par lafzon ka her pher bahot kamzor raha

yahan aaj tak kisi ne meri galtiyon ko nahi pakda hai
aur aaj meri pehli galti mujhe maloom padi hai

aap ka bhi shukriya aap ko mera kalaam pasand aay aur aap mujhe himmat bhi de rahe ho

thankx a lot