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29th October 2005, 07:45 PM
Khwaab bina ye zindagi kaisi,
ek raat ho bin taron jaisi, mana khayi humnein chot ek khwaab se, aise bebas to nahin hum ki phir muh pheer lein zamane se, khwaab to phir yeh zindagani dikhayegi aisi, viraan chaman mein khili ho ek kali jaisi. |
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29th October 2005, 08:50 PM
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it is very nice.... Keep Writing Take Care Rohin |
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29th October 2005, 10:13 PM
hi akansha....very nice dear.keep writing.take care
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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31st October 2005, 06:07 PM
great composition..
nice feel to read you... A human... To understand me... its better to understand yourself... |
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1st November 2005, 05:16 AM
bahut achcha aakansha
khwab pata nahi kya dikhayegi par haqeeqat zaroor aapke sunhare shabd padayegi likhte rahiye kar gayi umar magar ikraar karna nahi aaya usne maangi bhi to judaai mangi aur hame inkaar karna bhi na aaya |
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4th November 2005, 04:06 PM
Achchha laga....ek sakaaraatmak soch.
likhte rahiyega. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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7th November 2005, 02:05 PM
Aap sabhi ko bahut bahut shukriya,
Tareef ke kaabil, samjhaa naa tha in lavzon ko, par nazar daal kar inpe, tabassum mein badal diya aapne, rusvaii ke khauff ko. aapki Akaansha |
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7th November 2005, 10:33 PM
bahut aacha kalam hai aapka
arz kiya hai kya jane kya vaham hai usae meri taraf se jo raat ko bhi khawab me tanha nahi aata  |
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hi -
9th November 2005, 06:37 PM
Akanshaa ji aapne bahut badhiya likha hai..
aur aap aage bhi esi tarah achchha likhati rahengi yahi ummid hai... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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17th November 2005, 02:12 PM
Dear Akant ji and Mickey ji,
aapke humaare kalam ko tareef ke kabil samjha uske liye bahut bahut shukriya. aapki Akaansha |
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