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5th May 2003, 01:59 PM
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--------------------------------------------------- Doston, Yeh koi Kalaam, Nazm, Ghazal, Kavita ya Rachna nahin hai. Yeh hamare hee mulk ke ek Sainik ka dard hai, jise main theek tarah se aapke saamne nahin laa paraha hoon kyonki ise aasaan shabdon(lafzon) mein likhna hee mujhe theek laga...phir bhi kosish hai ki aap doston ko ek sainik ka yeh dard mehsoos ho. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ----------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------- [ EK SAINIK KI ZUBAAN ] Main Bharat ka sainik hoon Kashmir mein jeeta-marta hoon. Mere ghar Ma-biwi aur bacche Hain sab aap jitne hee sacche. Weh mere jeevan ki kaamna karte hain roz ek anchahe dard ka saamna karte hain. Mujh per hathgole barsaye jaate hain aantakwadi bheer mein kho jaate hain. Meri hatya insaani adhikaar nahin hoti meri maut per koi aankh nahin roti. Meri maut patrakaaron ka masala nahin shayad isliye koi kalam hum per nahin roti. Shaitani haath gar naagrik tak pahunch jaate tow hum apne-aap ko shurkhiyon mein paate. Kyon unka jeevan anmol...hamara be-mol hai insaaniyat ke naam per yeh kaisa tol hai. ----------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------- ----------------------------------------------------------- ::Mujhe khudd per sharm aarahi hai ki main ek Patrakaar(Journalist) hoon, kyonki yahan sirf - Prime Minister-Defence Minister-Foreign Minister jaise safedposh netaon ka hee zikr hota aaya hai, chahe woh George W. Bush, Atal Bihari Vajapai ya Parvez Mussarf hon::..........Agar kisi dost ko mera kaha theek na laga ho tow mujhe muaaf kardijiyega. ---------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------- 
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5th May 2003, 02:15 PM
Vipin ji, aap ne aisi koi baat nahi kahi jo kisi ko buri lage.. yeh kahani to har desh ke sipahi ki hai.. har desh me wahi rajneeti chalti,... akhir zakhm to aam aadmi ko hi sehne padte hai... aam aadmi ke naam par neta sainikon ki bali chadate hain.. kar jungo me sainiko ke bajay neta ladte, to duniya shayad jung hi na hoti.. jung karna aasaan hota jab usme marne wala aapka apna na ho.. Jung honi chahiye..magar insaaniyat ke liya, jung honi chahiye bhook, lachaari aur bebasi se.. zameen ke kuchh tukde insaani jaan ke laayak nahin.. magar yeh har kisi ki soch nahi hoti..
Apka kalaam bohat hi sachcha hai.. iski qadr hum sab ko hogi! |
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5th May 2003, 10:59 PM
Afshan ji,
Mujhe bahut khusi hui ki aap bhi ek sipahi ke khaufnaak jeevan ko mehsoos karte ho. Kaash aapka yeh likha koi sipahi parhta tow usse apne aap per fakr mehsoos hota...chahe woh kisi bhi mulk ka sipahi ho. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Main apna sar jhukaakar aapka dhanyavaad karta hoon ----------------------------------------------------------------------- Vipin
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6th May 2003, 06:12 AM
Vipin bhai,
bahot hi behtareen lafzoN ke zariye aapne sachaaii pesh ki hai! siipaaiiyoN ka dard aise ehsaas ho raha hai ki jaise maiN bhi ek siipaaii huuN. waise, hum sab hi jang laD rahe haiN.. koii aatankwaad se, aur koii zindagi se. khair, behad khushii hui yeh jaan kar ki aap apne watan, aur insaanoN ki bahot kadar karte haiN. ummeed hai ki aap isi taraH mehfil ko apne jazbaatoN se sajaate raheN ge.. taareef ke saath, aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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6th May 2003, 08:59 AM
hello Vipinji,
pehle to ye khusi hui ye jankar ki aap ek patrakar hai.Aur aapko apne aap ko dhikkar ne ki koi wajah nahi hai ki aap patrakar ho Qki kisi bhi jagah ka patrakar utna hi importance rakhta hai jitna ki ek neta...qki wo hi esa madhyam hai jisse praja aur sachchai ke bich ek link banti hai. Aur jo duniya ko "aaj" se wakef karta hai. Sochiye agar ek patrakar galat baat le kar logo ke bich jayega to desh ka kya hal hoga... khair, ham yaha sainiko ki baat kar rahe hai. aapki kavita me unka dard pata chala magar kaun kehta hai un par aansu nahi bahte. Desh ki 100 crore janta unki shukra gujar hai. Aur duniya me sabse utcha hodda unhi ka hai. Aapne sayad dekha hoga ki jab 15th august aur 26th jan ko tiranga lehraya jata hai tab lal kile par sabse jiyada upar hamare sainik hote hai. Ye sayad bahot mamuli baat lage magar ye hi sachchai hai. Aur aaj bhi kisi bhi bharti ke dil me ek neta se jiyada bada sthan ek sainik hai, jo apni puri jindagi desh ko dedicate karke apna maut bhi unke naam kar jate hai...hats off to those soldiers. aapki kavita bahot hi achchhi lagi jisme sachchai jalak rahi hai, jise padhkar hoth dua ke liye khulte hai aur hath ya to salami ke liye uthte hai. aise hi likhte rahiyega sanam (ek hundustani) jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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6th May 2003, 01:32 PM
Vipin sir,
Namaskaar, Aapki ye Rachna parkar hamari aankhon mein har ek sipaahi ke baare mein soch kar aansoo aa gaye..Aapne ik sipaahi ki zindagi par likhkar usko uske haque ki izzat dee hai.. Bahu bahut dhanyawaad Anju |
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7th May 2003, 12:48 AM
AMAN bhai,
Aapne iss rachna ko mehsoos kiya hai...yeh desh ke sipahi ke liye aapki pyar bhari dua hai. Mujhe aap-pe garv hai Sir. ----- SANAM ji,(ek hindustani) Dil khush kar diya hai aapne. Meri baat ka bura matt maan-na per hum kya ek sainik ko sirf 15 August aur 26 january ko hee yaad karenge? Phir bhi aapne sipahi ko salaam kiya hai aur main aapko salaam karta hoon. ----- ANJU ji, Meri rachna parhkar aapke aasoon nikal aaye tow ismein aapka ek sipahi ke liye pyar chupa hai. Aapki aankhon ne baya'n kiya hai ki aapko apne watan se kitna pyar hai. Dua karta hoon aap sada mushkuraate rahen!! ----- Aap sab ka ek baar phir se yeh shoonya dhanyavaad karta hai. Vipin ...ek shoonya
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7th May 2003, 02:38 PM
Namskaar Vipin Bhai..
Bas ik aapse hi umeed rakh sakta tha..itni Gehri soch rakhne ki.. SAap mein sabse achhi baat mujhe yeh lagti hai ke aap apne se zyaada doosron ke baare mein sochte hai aur yehi aapki mahaanta ka saboot hai.. Is Rachna mein jo aapne ik sipaahi ki zindagi ki Archano ko ujjagar kiya hai..us sachaai ko shayad sabhi jaante hain magar nazar andaaz kar dete hain..Aur ik formalityu ki tarah saal mein do dafa unhe salaam kar diya jaata hai..Magar hum yeh bhi jaante hain ke agar aise mauke par kuchh Gadbad ho jaaye to ye ik Sipaahi hi hoga jo apni jaan ki parwaah kiye begar un 'safed posh' netaon ko bachaane aayega..Aur saath hi swipaahi hi aam janta ka rakshak banega.. Agar har ek ke mann mein sanam ji jaise desh ke sainiko ke liye itna dard ho.to shayad unke khaatir hi do desho mein jang na ho.. Aapka shukriya ada karta hua chalta huun Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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7th May 2003, 02:46 PM
The essense of a hero is sacrifice.
A sacrifice of self, a sacrifice of life. A sacrifice for an unknown another. A sacrifice often gone unnoticed. A sacrifice ultimately tragic. A sacrifice ultimately heroic. Pata nahi kyon ye khayal dil me aaye.. I hope I made sense.. |
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7th May 2003, 04:12 PM
VARINDER ji,
Bahut accha laga jab maine jawab parha...aapki baaton mein aapke farz khusboo aati hai. Dhanyavaad Sir -------- AFSAN ji, Aapke dil mein yeh khayal isliye aaya coz u luv yr nation.you've done excellent job!.....I salute you and all the unsung heroes. Take care Vipin ...ek shoonya
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1st August 2003, 10:19 AM
Namskaar Vipin ji…
muaaf kariyega late lateefii ke liye… bhai aapki ye rachna behad pasand aayii… qki isme zikr hai un stambhoN ka jinper desh khada hua hai… zikr hai un SainikoN ka jinkii jaane jungoN se zyada ‘Safed posh’ netaoN ki 'kaalii kartootoN' ki wazah se jaati hai… bhai asliyat to ye hai ki aaj Sainik kewal kaashimir ke aataNkwadiyoN ya border per mauzood ghutakhoN se nahi lad rahe hai… balki unki asal ladaaii hai un ‘Matlab parast Safed poshoN’ se jinhe desh ke SipahsalaaroN aur aam naagrikoN ki zindgi se koi vaasta hi nahi rehta kabhi… bhai aap patrkaar haiN… patrkaar… wo jo janta ko sachchai se ru-b-ru karwaata hai… wo jo desh ka aaina dikhata hai… aur phir jab patrkaar Vipin ji jaisa ho to usper garv hona laazmi hai… bhai hame garv hai aap-per aapki us soch per jis tak pohach paana shayad mumkin nahiiN… sach to ye hai ki aapki soch ki koi had hi nahiiN… ek Sainik ki zubaan ko aapne jis tarah samjha aur pesh kiya uske liye aapka bohat bohat dhanyvaad… Meri maut patrakaaron ka masala nahin shayad isliye koi kalam hum per nahin roti. Per bhai agar koi Sainik aapko jaane to yakiinan uski soch aisi nahi rahegii… Kyokii wo aap hi haiN jiski kalam sadaa auroN ke liye chalti hai… Hame garv hai aapke Hindustaani hone par… Jai Hind… Likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye… |
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2nd August 2003, 03:19 AM
bahut acha likha.
Keep writing इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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2nd August 2003, 11:44 AM
namashkar vipin bhai
pyar-mohabbat-dil aur mehbooba jaise zazbaaton se upar uth kar aap ne desh ki asmita ke liye bali vedi par haste haste shaheed ho jane wale ek bhartiya sainike ki jo chavi apni kalam se ukeri hai uske liye main aap ko hardik dhanyawaad aur shubhkamnaye deta hoon. ek sainik ka dard aap ne samjha aur us par likha ..yeh apne aap mein desh sewa hai.aap ki rachna ek jariya hai jiske sahare hum yeh keh sakte hai ki hum sab Kashmir mein tainaat apne jawanon ke saath hai. Jai Hind -Manoj Kureel |
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2nd August 2003, 02:56 PM
Bedil ji, Dard-e-sush aur Manoj ji,
Main khushqismat hoon jo aapne meri rachna ko sarah. Main aap sab ka aabhaari rahunga. Dhanyavaad Vipin
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