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Bhroon Hatya -
14th April 2006, 09:33 PM
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aapko mera namaskaar. Pichey 10 din mein "Bhroon-hatya" ke jitney satya ujaagar hue hain usse dekhkar bahaut afsos hota hai. Waise isi vishay per nirdhaarit rachna 'Kokh mein Qabr' main pehle bhi aapke saamne rakh chuka hoon. Magar aaj ke haalaat dekhkar fir se kuch likhney ki koshish maatr ki hai. Ummeed hai aap uss bacchey ki bhaawnaon ko samjhenge jo abhi aaya bhi nahin hai. "Bhroon-Hatya" Kal mulaakaat hui thi un boondon se beh nikli thi jo bacchey ki aankhon se. Karna chaahti thi gagan mein kirtan rakhna chaahti thi umeedon ki kiran. Sona chaahti thi ujaala bankar urdna chaahti thi zami mein chalkar. Khelna chaahti thi patthar ki gitti se lotnaa chaahti thi aangan ki mitti se. Rehna chaati thi Maa ke aanchal mein behna chaahti thi Maa si Ganga mein. Kehna chaahti thi mujhe sweekaar karo Maa ki is kokh mein meri na koi waar karo. 
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14th April 2006, 09:39 PM
vipin ji aaj aapki rachna ko padhkar aankhe nam si ho chli
koi nahi janta kitni muskil se milte hai bachhe kine hi parivaar apni duaaon mai ek aoulad mangte hai aur unhe nahi mailta jinhe milta hai bhagwan ki ye nemat wo jane kyu inki kadar nahi kar pate shrdh 
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14th April 2006, 09:52 PM
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yeh rachna aapki aankhon ko nami degayi. Yeh jaankar dukh hua. wiase aapne in bhaavnaon ko samhjha to bhrron hatya mein se ek roshni ki kiran si dikhaayi di hai. khush rahiyega vipin
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15th April 2006, 09:50 AM
VIPIN JI.........
AAJ abhi subeh hi aapki yeh rachna padi.........is rachna mein likha hua dard saaf jhalkata hai........ "Bhroon-Hatya" yeh ek asia samvedensheel vishye hai........jis per likha hua aankho ko nam kar jata hai............aapki yeh rachna pad kar kuch lines yaad aa rahi hai...jo kahi padi thi.....aur dil ko chhoo gayi thi........aur sochne per majbur kar gayi thee...... kai baar sapne mein dekhti hun...... ek masoom sa shishu......... jiska dharkata dil aksar aakar ....... mujhse baate karta , hansata, muskarta, sa nazar aata hai............ karta hai mujhse woh atkheliyan........ mujhe dekh kar laad ladata hai........... per achanak uski aankho mein kai sawal ubhar aate hain........ jiska jawab dene se mera dil ghabharta hai......... ek unkahee vedana , ek dard bhari chhatpatahat dekar........... wah masoom sa chehara kahi kho jata hai................................... kaash is dard ko woh log mehsus kare jo yeh ghenona kaam sarlata se kar lete hai ........................... VIPIN JI ........main aapse baat karna chahati thee .....per aapka id nahi mil paya........ ranju |
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15th April 2006, 10:04 AM
Vipin Bhai..........
pecheedah bhaavon ko badi saralta se shabdon mein dhaal ke pesh kiya hai tumne.............. bhroon hatya karna ek bahut bada paap hai aur log aksar ye samajh nahi paate........... khush rahoo.......... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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15th April 2006, 12:00 PM
Ranju Ji
Namaskaar, aapne bhi is vishay per roshni daali tow accha laga. aapki likhi bahaut komal si panktiyaan parhi tow bahaut kuch jaan-ne ka awsar mila. Bahaut kuch kehgayi hain aapki panktiyaan. Kuch thodey bahaut paison ke liye aaj kayi doctors is jaganyaa apraadh mein saath de rahe hain. Jane kab yeh haalaat sudhrenge. .... aap apna id mujhe de sakti hain, mera id aap tak pahunch jaayega. vipin ============== Aman Ji, Aapne sahi kaha ki log ise samajh nahin paate hain ki yeh paap aur apraadh hai. aapne in ehsaason mein apna samarthan diya tow ummeed ki kiran nazar aayi hai. aapka vipin
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15th April 2006, 01:23 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by Vipinbox
[B]Ranju Ji Namaskaar, aapne bhi is vishay per roshni daali tow accha laga. aapki likhi bahaut komal si panktiyaan parhi tow bahaut kuch jaan-ne ka awsar mila. Bahaut kuch kehgayi hain aapki panktiyaan. Kuch thodey bahaut paison ke liye aaj kayi doctors is jaganyaa apraadh mein saath de rahe hain. Jane kab yeh haalaat sudhrenge. .... aap apna id mujhe de sakti hain, mera id aap tak pahunch jaayega. vipin ============== shukriya.............. mera id hai...........ranjanabhatia2004@yahoo.com |
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15th April 2006, 01:58 PM
Vipin ji
Is par daad nahi dena chahoongi kyunki pad kar khushi nahi charm aa rahi hai humare samaj pe Jo kanjke (Kanya Pujan) bithatey hai, Par apne hi ghar mein kanya ke aane ke samachar se bhi udaas ho jate hain. Kaaran sirf shaadi ka ya dahej ka darr hi nahi Humare samaj mein failey hue aur bohut se ghranit kritya bhi hain aaj jamana aisa aa gaya janm dene wale pita, rakhsha karne wale bhaion se bhi ladki ko asurakshit mana jaane laga hai Sirf shok prakat kar sakte hain hum, sirf shok!! Apki Dost Sarika |
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15th April 2006, 10:07 PM
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Namaskaar aapka ek ek shabd sach hee keh raha hai. vipin
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Re: Bhroon Hatya -
17th April 2006, 11:43 AM
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ye subject hamesa se hi duk deta hei. shayad koi iski ehmiyat samje, magr padkar sab isko bhuljana chahte hein or aage badjate hein zindagi mei. Per tumari har bar ki kosis bohat kuch badal jati hei hamara. bas isi tarah apni koshishen jari rako, zamana kabi uthega neend se. Isi tarah ka meine Ranju ji ek rachna mei pada hei. Unki Nanha phool naamak rachna bi bohat kuch keti hei. samay samay per yad dilane ka shukriya vipin Kaanch  |
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Re: Re: Bhroon Hatya -
19th April 2006, 01:05 PM
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mujhe bahaut khushi hui ki tum aayi aur mujhe parha. Yeh vishay sach mein bahaut dukh deta hai. per hum iss-se peecha tow nahin chura saktey. Isi tarah meri himmat himmat barhaatey rehna Kaanch vipin
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20th April 2006, 11:32 AM
Superb as ever!
aur phir ek aisa mudda jispar sabhi ko sochna chahiye...isse yahan forum mein uthaane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...meri bhi do betiyaan hain jo jaan se pyaari hain mujhe...jab bhi aisa sunti hoon ya dekhti hoon tau khuun khaul uthhtaa hai... aaj hum hindustaani iss kadr gir gaye hain...ghrina hoti hai soch kar bhi... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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20th April 2006, 11:39 AM
Vipin ji,
Namaskar.. aap kaise hain??? apani eswer se prarthana hai ki aap achchhe se rahein... subah aaker ek baar jarur mail chek kerta hoon phir apane kaam mein suru ho jata hoon... aur aaj bhi vahi kaam ker raha tha aur apke ek reply per najar padi aur phir main dard section mein gaya back kerke dusera page dekha to aapki esi kavita per najar padi.. maine puri kavita padhi.. sath mein sabke reply aur aapke replyies ko bhi padha.. mujhe bahut rahat mili ki bahut sare log hain jo aapki likhi baate( = meri soch/samajh) se bahut talluk rakhate hain.. aur apana bherpur samarthan kerte hain. yah anubhuti ek khushi prdan kerti hai ki samaj mein faily buraieyo ke prati ek jagarukata to utapan hoti hai.. behska yah jagrukata ka star bahut bahut kam hai per shoonya nahi hai.. arthat ek chingari ki utapatti ho rahi hai.. eska shrey aapko jata hai.. es rachana 'bhruun hatya' ko aapne likhaker hamare uper ek ehsaan kiya hai.. mera dil kerta tha ki main es tarah ki rachana ko kahi es website per jarur share keru.. kyonki es website ka prayog kerne vaale hum jyadatar naujwan hi hain.. aur hum agar eske baare mein sochenge to nischay hi ek nayi dhera ka sutrapaat hoga. aap apane path per bane rahiye Vipin bhai atleast main koshis kerunga aapke sath chalane ki.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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22nd April 2006, 07:43 AM
Vipin Mitr,
.................. tumhari Meena |
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24th April 2006, 03:22 PM
Paras Ji,
Aapne is vichaardhaara mein saath diya tow bahaut accha laga hai. ========== Akant ji Namaskaar, Is vyast-taa mein samay nikaalkar aapne isse parha yeh mere liye bahut khushi ki baat hai. Aapne bilkul sahi baat kahi hai ki yeh Desh aaj naujawaano ke haath mein hai aur yahi iska uddhaar kar saktey hain. Is saath ke liye main aapka aabhaari hoon. -------- Pranaam Meena Ji, accha laga aapko yahan paakar.
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D H A N Y A V A A D -
24th April 2006, 03:23 PM
Doston,
Mujhe bahaut accha laga ki is "Bhroon-Hatya" jaise apraadh per aapne apni raye rakhi. Akant ji ki baat per bahaut wajan hai ki ....Yeh Desh naujawaano ka hai aur yahi naujawaan aaj is paap aur apraadh ko mitaa de tow bahaut kuch sambhav ho sakta hai. Itney doston ke shabd roopi samarthan ko dekhkar ek ummeed nazar aati hai maansikta ke parivartan ki khaatir. vipin
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24th April 2006, 04:29 PM
Barbarian... is a milder word for people who commit such crimes...
I love kids.. when a kid is born... its such a beautiful sight... his/her small hands and legs... their first movement... their first syllab... it is a wonderful feeling... Yet in this society we have people who think otherwise... Killing of a girl child and femal feoticide.. propostrous... as it is we are in many ways responsible for it... and if we want things to change we have to start from within... Vipin sir... thanks for bringing this issue to the fore... and i hope members here will take it up ... and educate people around them to change things... Next time when we do see such barbarian act being commited... i hope u raise ur voice... for it does make a difference... God bless all Regards Rohin Bhargava |
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24th April 2006, 07:05 PM
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Is vishay per aapke vichaar parhey jo bahut gehraahi liye they. Waise sach kahun tow pichley saal 2005 mein Bharat is kagaar tak aa pahuncha ki har 1000 mein 93 bacchey marrey nahin balki maare gaye hain. In Delhi out of 869 born everday, 291 die. But most unfortunate victims girl child. The girl child is killed in the mother's womb. Day by day the ratio between male n' female is fallin down. Samaaj ki is andher nagri ka kya hoga yeh hamara samaaj khud nahin jaan-na chahata. Main khud hee ki baat karun tow main bhi maun khada hoon tamaashaii bankar. Rohin ji, accha laga aapse is vishay per charcha karke. khayaal rakhiyega vipin
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28th April 2006, 01:20 PM
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Re: Bhroon Hatya -
29th April 2006, 12:37 PM
dear vipin ji,
aapne bahut achha likha hain aur yaha phir ek samaaj ki sachhai ko sab ki nazar kiya hain. thanks, take care!  |
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29th April 2006, 12:56 PM
Halo Kaanch,
ek koshish maatr hei yeh jhulastey ehsaason ko likhney ki, tumhara dhanyavaad kaanch. --------- Namaskaar Parul Ji, is sacchayi mein in vichaaron mein aapke saath ke liye dhanyavaad karta hoon. sweekaar karlijiyega. v i p i n
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