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"Kafan par likh kar mera naam de diya" -
10th October 2006, 09:56 AM
dosto shayri ki es mahfil mai.n aap sab ko mera nanaskar......!
aaj phir ek gazal lekar aap sab ke samney hu, umeed hai hamesha ki tarah, es baar bhi mujhe aur meri gazal ko aap sab ka saath mileyga............! Aapno ne hi jab humey elzaam de diya, Ba-waffa thy hum be-waffa naam de diya… Dard chuppa liya aur honth see liye, Usne humey rukhsati ka paigaam de diya… Kabhi to tadap uthTa tha mere dard se, Usi ne dard se chalkta ek jaam de diya… Kho gaye kahi woh din raat mohabat ke, Tanhaeyo ka tohfa humey enaam de diya… Na ab koi sapna aayega en palko mai.n Ankho ko umr bhar roney ka kaam de diya… “Sunita” to phele hi ek zinda laash thi dosto, ab kafan par likhkar usne mera naam de diya… aapki dost  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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10th October 2006, 10:23 AM
Aapno ne hi jab humey elzaam de diya,
Ba-waffa thy hum be-waffa naam de diya… Dard chuppa liya aur honth see liye, Usne humey rukhsati ka paigaam de diya… Kabhi to tadap uthTa tha mere dard se, Usi ne dard se chalkta ek jaam de diya… Kho gaye kahi woh din raat mohabat ke, Tanhaeyo ka tohfa humey enaam de diya… Na ab koi sapna aayega en palko mai.n Ankho ko umr bhar roney ka kaam de diya… “Sunita” to phele hi ek zinda laash thi dosto, ab kafan par likhkar usne mera naam de diya… sunita ji appko raj ka saneh bhara salaam....ajj subha aate hee appka kalaam parha kalaam kaya thaa mano dard ne dastak de dee mere dil ke darwaje par....kaash agar dard ki zubaa hoti to shyad wo bhee khud ko yu na byaan kar pata...har ek share har ek lafaz mano dard ka behta sagar ho.....makta or matla dono he bhut acha bane hai poori gazal hee kabile tareef hai....agar ye mehaz ek poetry hai to bhut pyarei hai....or agar ye appke dil ka dard hai to humme acha nahi lagga....hamare kisi bhee dost ko khuda itna dard na de.....yahi duaa hai hamari.....app hamesha khush raho.....take care.......raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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10th October 2006, 12:02 PM
sister prannam
kaise ho aap? aapne aaj babhot din bad kuch likha padh ke bahot hi achha laga aur aap ko yaha dekh ke bhi aj khusi hui aap ki peshkas bahot achhi hai aur pasand aayi sister bas aise hi likhte rahiye ap aap ka ye shaitaan bhai aapke sath hai apna khayal rakhna sister aapka chhotasa bhai aur dost dhaval |
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10th October 2006, 02:14 PM
di pranaam
mein naraz hu apse bahot sacchi. kyu likha apne aise sad sad.. aap mujhe mana kartin hai aur khud dard likhti hai apne kalaam me..........kyu ji.......aisa nahi chalega..............ye pasand aya lekin pasand nahi aya..... waise agar ye apke sirf ehasaas hai to bahot achha likha hai........aur mein janti hu ki sirf ehasaas hi hai ye apki zindagi nahi hai........sahi kaha na.... “Sunita” to phele hi ek zinda laash thi dosto, ab kafan par likhkar usne mera naam de diya… ye do linebahot acchi lagi... ok ji grazie aapki gudiya rani pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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11th October 2006, 06:25 AM
Na ab koi sapna aayega en palko mai.n
Ankho ko umr bhar roney ka kaam de diya… “Sunita” to phele hi ek zinda laash thi dosto, ab kafan par likhkar usne mera naam de diya… wah sunita ji bahoot sundar.....is baar aapne dil ko choo liya...!!! mein aksar aapko padhta hoon..magar is baar aapne kuch aisa likha hai ki haath ruk na sake aapko daad dene se.. ek suljhe hue kalaam par meri daad kubool kijiye.... take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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11th October 2006, 10:00 AM
Na ab koi sapna aayega en palko mai.n
Ankho ko umr bhar roney ka kaam de diya… hmmmm...toooo good sunita ji,bahut khoob. bahut bahut behtareen sunita ji.bahut acha likha aapne.yeh sher to chuu gaya dilko.likhti rahiye yunhin. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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11th October 2006, 10:43 AM
Hi Sunitaji
kesi hai aap ? aaj bhi vehi sewal hai aap ke liye mager mere liye aap ka koi jewab nehi maafi chahta hu is baar aap ka kalaam padhne mey thodi der kardi kya keru kaam sey fursat hi nehi milti aur sunaeye kya chal reha hai aap ki zindgi mey vese is kalaam ki taarif mey kya likhu ye soch reha hu kuki tarif tho karni hai mager alfaz nehi milte aur jo alfaaz mile vo is kalaam ke kabil nehi dil ki har dhadkan pey ek aser hai aap ke is kalaam ka behot hi gaheri soch ke baad aap ne isko likha hai aur bewafai ki dasta aap ne jo sunayi hai vo bhi sach hi hai aap ne tadapte dil ki baat kehi tho kuch yaad aaya bewafai ka elzaam lagane se pahele kuch tho beta jati chod jane se pahele fir bhi chup hu dil ko manake per ye tho betho kabhi tho batiyaogi humse zindgi ki shaam hone se pahele aap ka ye kalaam dil ke har diwaar ko thod kar zahan mey uter geya ksi ke haatho tuta huwa dil fir tut kar bikhar geya behot kub Sunitaji aap ka ye kalaam behad pasand aaya aur rehi baat aap ke likhe lafzo ki tho mey yehi kehuga ke aap jis terh se lafz dhund lati hai us terh behot kam log hi likh paate hai mene aap se pahele bhi keha tha ke aap ke pas lafzo ka vo samnder hai jo behot kam logo ko naseeb hota hai aur aap jese dost bhi behot kam logo ko hi milte hai ye meri taqdeer hai ke aap aaj shayri ke zariye hi sehi mager hemari dosti tho hai aur ye behot badi baat hai bas chalta hu verna aap bore ho jaaoge muje tho likhne ki aadet hai SOME ONE |
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12th October 2006, 10:51 AM
Aapno ne hi jab humey elzaam de diya,
Ba-waffa thy hum be-waffa naam de diya… Dard chuppa liya aur honth see liye, Usne humey rukhsati ka paigaam de diya… Kabhi to tadap uthTa tha mere dard se, Usi ne dard se chalkta ek jaam de diya… Kho gaye kahi woh din raat mohabat ke, Tanhaeyo ka tohfa humey enaam de diya… Na ab koi sapna aayega en palko mai.n Ankho ko umr bhar roney ka kaam de diya… “Sunita” to phele hi ek zinda laash thi dosto, ab kafan par likhkar usne mera naam de diya… great bahut hi behtreen peshkas hai aapki ye iss her ek sher dil ko chho jata hai... bahut dino baad aapki ye gazal ne dil ko kafi sakoon diya ..... bus youn samajh lo ki sharad ke chand ki tarah dil me thandak diya hai isne wanki main kya kaho..n aajakl to aap kafi busy rahti hani.n idhar kam hi aatin hain aap.... per esa na ho aap hame bhool jaye.n..... is liye aate rahiye u.n hi or haan aap ki is behtreen gazal per mri dil se nikli hui daad kabool kigiye..... aapka dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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13th October 2006, 11:24 AM
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aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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"Jalim zindagi ko bhi kafan na mila" |
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"Jalim zindagi ko bhi kafan na mila" -
13th October 2006, 01:33 PM
"Dard ko usne apne shine mein chupa kar rakha tha"
"Bewafa bankar ro raha tha sadko par dil mein chupa kar rakha tha apne mehbuba ko" "Maut to aa gai ishq ke parinde ko par pani na mila us khuda ke bande ko" "Jalim zindagi ko bhi kafan na mila" |
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13th October 2006, 11:26 PM
aapki gazal padhi "sunita ji", bahut dard bhari hai.........................
jindagi ki berukhi mai , hosla kaam ata hai mere dost.Apni ajmaish ka jindagi kabhi na kabhi eenam to degi hi. dil ka dard door ho jaye ye to mushkil hai, hosla badh jaye to sehne ki himat aa jati hai. itna dard kahaN se uthTa................................... take care best regards aarya |
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13th October 2006, 11:37 PM
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17th October 2006, 03:00 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya, mujhe padney aur pasand karne ke liye, aur mai site par aau ja na aau, aap logo ke saath hamesha hu. love .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th October 2006, 03:05 PM
Aapno ne hi jab humey elzaam de diya,
Ba-waffa thy hum be-waffa naam de diya… Dard chuppa liya aur honth see liye, Usne humey rukhsati ka paigaam de diya… Kabhi to tadap uthTa tha mere dard se, Usi ne dard se chalkta ek jaam de diya… Kho gaye kahi woh din raat mohabat ke, Tanhaeyo ka tohfa humey enaam de diya… Na ab koi sapna aayega en palko mai.n Ankho ko umr bhar roney ka kaam de diya… “Sunita” to phele hi ek zinda laash thi dosto, ab kafan par likhkar usne mera naam de diya… kya baat hai apko shayd meine jyada to nahi pada par aaj jo pada to laga ki kitna dard hai yahn apke dil mein.jo apne yahn kafan shabd se zahir kar diya hai. achalikha hai apne dard ke rop ko. sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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17th October 2006, 03:06 PM
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naraz mat hona kabhi aapni didi se, aur dekh mujhe kaya dard hai tujhe acchi tarah pata hai, kaya karu mai, kush rahney ki koshish karti hu par rah nahi pati, phir yehi wish karti hu ki bagwaan mujhe nahi to na sahi kum se kum kisi aur ko aise dard mat dena. gudiya aapno se door rahna bahut mushkil hai, par phir bhi hum rahtey hai. aur tum aapni post dekho jarra kaya kuch likha hai tumne, mujhe bilkul accha nahi lagga. keep smiling lots of love teri didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th October 2006, 03:23 PM
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manoj ji namaskar bahut accha lagga yeh jaan kar ki aap aksar mujhe padtey hai.n yeh meri kusnseebi hai ki app jaisa shayer meri adna si rachnaye padta hai, aur aapka meri post par aana mere liye bahut kushi ki baat hai. housla afjeai ke liye shukriya aur aapki daad muhhe tahe-dil se kabool hai, yu hi aatey rahiye. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th October 2006, 09:40 AM
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mujhe padney aur pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th October 2006, 09:47 AM
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ab main aapko kaya jawab du aapne etna sab likh diya hai, meri samaj mai.n kuch nahi aa raha ki aapko kaha se reply dena shuru karu. in short bas yehi kahungi ki aapka meri post par aana mere liye bahut kushi ki baat hai, aap mujhe etne dhayan se padtey hai, shukriya............! vaise ek baat kahu, aap likhtey bahut accha hai, mujhe to reply dena mushkil ho jata hai. aur ha hamari dosti hai aur raheygi. aap yu hi saath detey rahiye mai bhi likhney ki koshish karti rahungi. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th October 2006, 09:49 AM
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kaise ho tum. mujhe padney aur pasand karne ke liye shukriya. aur ha yeh kaya kaha tumney ki mai kahi aap ko bhool na jau, areee aapno ko bhi koi kabhi bhool pata hai. phir kabhi aisa mat kahna. tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th October 2006, 09:51 AM
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aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th October 2006, 09:53 AM
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mujhe padney aur samjney ke liye shukriya. aapne sahi farmaya ki housla badh jaye to himmat aa jati hai. aur dard kaha se uttha, .................? aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th October 2006, 09:55 AM
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aapne mujhe padda aur samja bahut bahut shukriya. aapki daad humey dil se kabool hai. yu hi aatey rahiye. aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th October 2006, 09:54 PM
Hi sunita ji
kesi ho aap ? aap ka reply mila padh kar aacha lega aapne tho bina kalam ke hi hemari taarif kardi ...........sukriya mey soch reha tha aap se online kabhi baat nehi hoti ager ho jaye tho aacha hai mager jab aap yeha aati hai tho mey nehi hota aur mey aata hu tab aap nehi hoti ............ aap ne keha ke mey aap ke kalaam ko behot dhyaan se padhta hu mager ek baat kehu aap dard ko kuch is terh se pesh karti hai ke padhne wala khud ko us kehani mey daal kar samjta hai ke kya likha hai aur aap ka har kalaam jo dard per ho esha lagta hai ke kisi kisi mey tho aap ne apna hi hale-e-dil likh diya hai janta hu muje ye bolna nehi chahiye mager kya keru aap ke likhe huwe kuch kalaam ese bhi hai jo aap ke dard ki kehani bolte hai shayed ho sakta hai us dard ki vajah se hi aap ne vo kalaam likhe ho mager jis terh se aapne unko lafzo se sejaya hai vo kabile tarif hai unki taarif karne ke liye mere paas koi alfaz nehi fir bhi dil se duwa keruga ke jo bhi dard aaj tak aap ko mila ho zindgi mey usse kei jada khushi aap ko ab se mile aur dard ka namonisha na ho ............... ek baat aap se aur kahena chahuga ager kabhi esha ho ke aap ko kisi se kuch sher karna pade aur aap muje is kabil samje tho jerur betana mager ager aap ko koi taqlif na ho tho hi thik hai aur is mail ka reply jerur dena chalta hu aur ha ho sake tho muje mail kijiye yahoo mer I D is some_oneonly@yahoo.com ok bye take care of ur self aap ka benaam dost SOME ONE |
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28th March 2007, 12:42 PM
bahut khub sunita ji
aapki rachna hamein behad pasand aayi hai aur jis tarah se aapne is dard bhare ehsaaso ko yaha bayan kiya hai wo bhi padhke hamein khushi hui. ji sunita ji esa hi hota hai jo jaan se pyara ho wo kabhi na rone ki baat karte hai aur aakhir mein wohi rula ke jate hai,, aapki rachna se ek seek to jarur milti hai ki kabhi kisiko dard nahi dena chahiye kyuki kahi na kahi rota hai koi aur taqlif kisi aur ko hoti hai, to sada muskurate raho aapke muskurane se hi kisiki hasi hothon pe saji rehti hai aapke liye hamari taraf se kuch aapke jesa hi.. Aaj dur se hi koi salam kar gaya, Apni yaadon ka gulam kar gaya, Apni zindagi girvi rakhakar kharida tha jisko, Aaj wohi hamein nilam kar gaya. sunita ji ese hi likhte rehna aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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29th March 2007, 12:29 PM
Wah ji wah
Sunita ji aap ko aaj pehli baar pada aur socha ki apke pehle nagme kyon nahi pade. waise main abhi kuch hi din pehle is mehfil mein aaya hun aur maine ab tak 3 threads diye hai("Tanhayian", Nakamyab Dosti, Mera Ateet") pata nahi aapne pade hai ke nahi lekin main apke jitna achha nahi likh sakta. Apki jo aakhri 4 lines hai woh to sach mein jaise mujhe laga ki yeh main hi bol raha hoon. Dua hai ki aap aise hi aur achha likhte rahe aur hamari shubhkamnaye apke saath hai. "Muddat ho gayi un tanhayion ko guzre, aaj bhi in aankhon mein woh khamoshiyan kyon hai,  Chun chun kar jiski yaadon ko apne jeevan se nikala maine, mere dil par aaj bhi uski hukumat kyon hai,  Tod diya jisne yakeen mohabbat se mera, woh shaks aaj bhi pyaar ke kaabil kyon hai,  Raas na aayi jisko chahat meri, Aaj bhi woh mere din aur raat mein shaamil kyon hai, Khatam ho gya jo rishta woh aaj bhi saans le raha hai, mere vartmaan mein jeevit woh aaj bhi mera ateet kyon hai"  Thanx & Regards Jasdeep Singh |
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11th April 2007, 12:15 PM
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love tumhari didi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2007, 12:19 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2007, 12:21 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2007, 12:24 PM
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aur aapka sher behad pasand aaya. shukriya dost...yu hi saath detey rahiyega aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2007, 12:28 PM
jasdeep ji phele to es baat ki mujhe bahut kushi hue ki aap mere hi shahar ke ho...
aapne mujhe padda, pasand kiya...dil se shukriya adda karti hoon. aur aapki shayri mujhe acchi laggi....fursat miltey hi aapke post thread jaroor padungi. yu hi aatey rahiyega god bless u Quote:
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2007, 12:33 PM
jawaab dene ke liye shukriya sunita ji... maine is baat ka to khyaal hi nahi kiya ki aap bhi chandigarh se hai... waise aapko batana chahuga ki main Jalandhar se hoon lekin pichhle kareeb 2 saal se chandigarh mein hun aur mohali mein job karta hun..... aur ab ek taareef apke shehar ke liye. mujhe chandigarh itna achha laga ki main apna ek ek pal yaha pe bade maje se bitata hun aur main bahut ghooma hoon chandigarh mein. I love this city. Take care
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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11th April 2007, 12:40 PM
jasdeep aapko pm kiya hai.....dekh lena.
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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11th April 2007, 01:03 PM
Got it n also replied....
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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