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gum ko kalam par likne ki bhi.... - 15th August 2007, 02:46 AM
gum ko kalam par likhne ki bhi
na ab himmath meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri

cheerti hai dil ko yaadein teri
num hai aankhien
intazaar mein teri

dard aesa de kar tu chali gayi
ki hasni bhi hasti hai mujh par meri
duniya mein reh kar
bhi hoon mein tanha
tere bin duniya hai suni meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri

bas kuch pal mein batt gayi hai
ab yeh duniya meri
kab chod donga jina
yeh mujhe pata nahi

bas zinda hoon tere intazaar mein
rakh kar yeh umeed
ki aayegi kushi wapas meri

waqt ka dosh tha
par saja mujhe mili
aesi hai zindagi meri

hason ya rooun
aesi zindagi par
yeh mujhe pata nahi
teri yaad mein
jagoon ya sooun
yeh mujhe pata nahi
hai bas itna pata
ki ji raha hoon
us dua mein
jo na hogi kabool kabhi meri

kudh ko dard dene mein jane kya maza hai
shaya yahi meri saza hai

gum ko kalam par likne ki bhi
na ab himmath meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri
   
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15th August 2007, 04:39 PM
BAHUT KHOOB MANAS JI BAHUT KHOOB..AAJ PEHLI BAAR AAPKO PADHNA NASEEB HUA..APNE BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI..DARD KO LAFZON MAI BAKHOBHI PIROYA HAI..
BAS THODA AUR DHAYAAN DEN.JAISE KE...

gum ko kalam par likne ki bhi
na ab himmath meri

YAHAN YUN HONA CHAHIYE..
gham ko kalam se likhne ki bhi na ab himmat meri..

umeed hai aap bura nahi maanenge..
likhte rahen yunhin
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yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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haan - 20th August 2007, 01:23 PM
haan aap thik hai mujhe si hi likna tha ho sake toh galti maaf karna
   
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gum ko kalam par likhne ki bhi
na ab himmath meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri

cheerti hai dil ko yaadein teri
num hai aankhien
intazaar mein teri

dard aesa de kar tu chali gayi
ki hasni bhi hasti hai mujh par meri
duniya mein reh kar
bhi hoon mein tanha
tere bin duniya hai suni meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri

bas kuch pal mein batt gayi hai
ab yeh duniya meri
kab chod donga jina
yeh mujhe pata nahi

bas zinda hoon tere intazaar mein
rakh kar yeh umeed
ki aayegi kushi wapas meri

waqt ka dosh tha
par saja mujhe mili
aesi hai zindagi meri

hason ya rooun
aesi zindagi par
yeh mujhe pata nahi
teri yaad mein
jagoon ya sooun
yeh mujhe pata nahi
hai bas itna pata
ki ji raha hoon
us dua mein
jo na hogi kabool kabhi meri

kudh ko dard dene mein jane kya maza hai
shaya yahi meri saza hai

gum ko kalam par likne ki bhi
na ab himmath meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri
Hello Manas Ji, ....aapke kalaam par ab mai kya kahoon ...aapne apane dard aur gum ko kuchh aese alfaaz mai bayaan kiya hai ki .... bas wo dil se nikal ke sidha dil ko chhu gaye .... hum bas dil se yahi duaa karte hai ki bhagwaan ji aapko bas har khushi de aur hammesha khush rakhe ....yunhi likhate rahiye

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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31st August 2007, 08:07 PM
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dard aesa de kar tu chali gayi
ki hasni bhi hasti hai mujh par meri
duniya mein reh kar
bhi hoon mein tanha
tere bin duniya hai suni meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri

hason ya rooun
aesi zindagi par
yeh mujhe pata nahi
teri yaad mein
jagoon ya sooun
yeh mujhe pata nahi
hai bas itna pata
ki ji raha hoon
us dua mein
jo na hogi kabool kabhi meri


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manas jee, aap ne itana achchhaa likha hai kii aap ke dard ko mehsuus kar saktaa hai har paRhne waala.. aap ka yahaa.n swaagat hai, yuu.n hii likhate rahe.n.meri duaa aap ke saath hai.. khush rahe.n

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Love 31st August 2007, 09:11 PM
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gum ko kalam par likhne ki bhi
na ab himmath meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri

cheerti hai dil ko yaadein teri
num hai aankhien
intazaar mein teri

dard aesa de kar tu chali gayi
ki hasni bhi hasti hai mujh par meri
duniya mein reh kar
bhi hoon mein tanha
tere bin duniya hai suni meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri

bas kuch pal mein batt gayi hai
ab yeh duniya meri
kab chod donga jina
yeh mujhe pata nahi

bas zinda hoon tere intazaar mein
rakh kar yeh umeed
ki aayegi kushi wapas meri

waqt ka dosh tha
par saja mujhe mili
aesi hai zindagi meri

hason ya rooun
aesi zindagi par
yeh mujhe pata nahi
teri yaad mein
jagoon ya sooun
yeh mujhe pata nahi
hai bas itna pata
ki ji raha hoon
us dua mein
jo na hogi kabool kabhi meri

kudh ko dard dene mein jane kya maza hai
shaya yahi meri saza hai

gum ko kalam par likne ki bhi
na ab himmath meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri


bahut hi pyaare ehsaas hai...........uhi likhate rahiyega.............hum dobara aap ko padhana chhenge...............
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hi - 1st September 2007, 12:26 AM
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gum ko kalam par likhne ki bhi
na ab himmath meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri

cheerti hai dil ko yaadein teri
num hai aankhien
intazaar mein teri

dard aesa de kar tu chali gayi
ki hasni bhi hasti hai mujh par meri
duniya mein reh kar
bhi hoon mein tanha
tere bin duniya hai suni meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri

bas kuch pal mein batt gayi hai
ab yeh duniya meri
kab chod donga jina
yeh mujhe pata nahi

bas zinda hoon tere intazaar mein
rakh kar yeh umeed
ki aayegi kushi wapas meri

waqt ka dosh tha
par saja mujhe mili
aesi hai zindagi meri

hason ya rooun
aesi zindagi par
yeh mujhe pata nahi
teri yaad mein
jagoon ya sooun
yeh mujhe pata nahi
hai bas itna pata
ki ji raha hoon
us dua mein
jo na hogi kabool kabhi meri

kudh ko dard dene mein jane kya maza hai
shaya yahi meri saza hai

gum ko kalam par likne ki bhi
na ab himmath meri
kya mein karon
aesi hai zindagi meri
Maanas ji aap ne bahut hee khoobsurat andaaz men apne jazboN ko is nazm men piroyaa hai, Har dard se aur bewafaayi ka sataaya aadmi jo ise padhega voh yahi mehsoos karega is kalaam ko padh kar ki yeh usii ke dil ke jazbaat hai jinhe aap ne shayri ki zubaan di hai.

is dil fareb kalaam par dil se daad kabool karen
aur yunhee likhte rahe

regards
manu
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