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[Nadeem Ahmed 'K]

Hi

Admin saheb se ek darkhwast karne yahan aaya hu ke diya jale ji ko ye baat samjha di jaaye ki kisi dusre ki ghazal post karte waqt use modify na karein....

Meri ek ghazal

Tere shauq mein, kya se kya ho gaye hum ..
Haqiqat the, Aik khawaab sa ho gaye hum ..

Rah-e-ishq mein, jab Fanaa ho gaye hum,
Shikasta Dilon ki, Dua ho gaye hum ..

Fasaana gham-e-ishq ka, kehte Kehte,
Kisi tute Dil ki, sadaa ho gaye hum ..

Jahaa manzil-e-Muddaa aayi 'Kavish'
Wahin !! karwaan se juda ho gaye hum

Is ghazal ko mohtarma ne

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64804

is thread mein post kiya hai isse alag kuch nahi kahna ghaur kijiyega aur unse daryaft bhi

[Diya_Jale]

Originally Posted by Nadeem Ahmed 'K

Hi

Admin saheb se ek darkhwast karne yahan aaya hu ke diya jale ji ko ye baat samjha di jaaye ki kisi dusre ki ghazal post karte waqt use modify na karein....

Meri ek ghazal

Tere shauq mein, kya se kya ho gaye hum ..
Haqiqat the, Aik khawaab sa ho gaye hum ..

Rah-e-ishq mein, jab Fanaa ho gaye hum,
Shikasta Dilon ki, Dua ho gaye hum ..

Fasaana gham-e-ishq ka, kehte Kehte,
Kisi tute Dil ki, sadaa ho gaye hum ..

Jahaa manzil-e-Muddaa aayi 'Kavish'
Wahin !! karwaan se juda ho gaye hum

Is ghazal ko mohtarma ne

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64804

is thread mein post kiya hai isse alag kuch nahi kahna ghaur kijiyega aur unse daryaft bhi

janab Khavish jee,
aap jara gour farmayiye........maine vo ghazal apne naam per post nahi ki hun na hi us post per yeh likhu hun yeh meri ghazal hai ........bas kami itna ki wahan aapki naam nahi hai ........aise bhi yeh ghazal aap kahan post kiye the mujhe thori maloom hai........yeh to youN hi kisi site per dekh li thi mujhe achha laga mein post kar diya ...gar mujhe aapka naam dikhayi deta mein ....shayar unknown nahi likhti ........

jab koi shayar apna ghazal mahfil ke hawale karta hai tab vo logon ka ho jata hai
apna nahi rahta ........isliye aap itna mat sochiye .......bade bade mashahoor shayaroN k mishra ko le ker bahot log apne hisab se ghazal banate hai........gar vo bhi aap jaise bolne lage to kya hoga sochiye ..........

aap bahot umdaa shayar hai .....main achhi tarah se janti hun aapko


take care
Diya