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4th November 2006, 03:56 PM
(DO SHER JANAN K NAAM...JO JANE KAHAN GUM HO GAI)... bohat din bad aya yaha to dekha bohat kuch badal gya...magar shayad baki sab waise hu!!!! = SOCH TA HU BHULA DO AB ADATAIAN PURANI SAB MAGAR JANE KU MERI ANKHAIN DARTI HAY MUSKRANE SE. APNE HAL PAR MUJH KO ANE LAGI HAY HANSI YARO IS TRAH BHI KOI KU ROOYE , KISI K YAAD ANE SE.???? = banjara'''' or kiya???tlash main.... agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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4th November 2006, 09:45 PM
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aapko aaj maine pehli hi bar padha aap is site ke purane member hai aaj aapko padhke bahot achha laga aapke ye do sher hai par bahot kuch keh jata hai achha laga padhke bas aise hi aate rahiye apna khayal rakhiye khus rahiye aapka dost dhaval |
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5th November 2006, 06:55 AM
kyun rote hain log kisi ke yaad aane se,
poocho ye tum pagle kisi deewaane se, ye dil ka khel hai jiske inaam hain aansu, ye hai reet jo chali aa rahi hai zamaane se....! banjara ji namaskaar muddaton baad aapko dekha hai, bahut khushi hui, umeed karta hun aap age v yunhi mehfilen sajaate rahenge...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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5th November 2006, 04:11 PM
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aadaab! Kis jahaan meiN rehte haiN aap nazar hi nahii aa rahe haiN .. ham to har jagah dhunDh aaye aap ko, par aap ka pata hii nahiiN chala...  khair, bohat khoob kaha hai aap ne.. par aap ne 2 Sher likhe haiN, hai behad asardaar .. paRh kar achchha laga.. yuuN hi aate raheN.. liKhte raheN.. aur hame paRhne ka mauqa dete raheN.. daad haazir hai.. qubool keejiye.,.. Mayank |
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7th November 2006, 11:34 AM
dhaval.
thanks for your kind reply. main waise to purana member hu is site par i joined in 2004.magar waqt ne kabi hath tang rakha muj par or kabhi fursat ne faraghat di...khair apko likha pasand aya thanks.. take care. ------------- ghayal kaise ho yar... mje yad hay jab mainnya aya tha site par to kuch pahle dost the un main tum bhi ho...yar waise gayab rehne ka gila to main bhi kar sakta hu tume se... magar tumhari shikayat door karne kikoshish karon ga...ata raho ga.. dua karna khan --------- A.R kiya hal hay boss... yar wo banjara hi kiya jo apna pata rakhe...or jiska pata dosre malom kar lain...bas unhain isi bat se khushi rehti hay ki koi un ki khoj mian rehta hay... wo koi bhi ho... tumhari daad kabool hay bhai...apna kiyal rakhna.. milte rahna khan agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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7th November 2006, 01:31 PM
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aslaam valekum... bahut dino baad aapko yaha dekheker mujhe behad khushi ho rahi hai.. aapne do line sher likhe padhaker laga ki khan dost dubara entry ker liye..main behad khush hoon ki aapne kaafi arsebaad kuchh likha.. well main to bahut kam aata hoon siteper samay ki bandishe rahati hain.. aur lagata hai aage chalake bandishe aur bhi badh jayengi.. jaha tak aapki shayri ki baat keru to kahunga dil se nikale hai dil ke jajbaat aur main chahunga ki khud ko banaye rakhe.. samay ke anusaar badlaav ki jarurat hoti hai per apani orgine ko nahi badalana chahiye.. positive direction ka badlav aawashyak bhi hai... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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8th November 2006, 01:26 PM
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khan bhai kaise ho??? ache hai donoin hi sher. sakhi ki daad kubul kare. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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11th November 2006, 04:33 PM
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kiya hal hay? yar waqayi main bohat din bad aya hu...lekin main visit karta rehta tha post bohat din bad ki hay.bas yar apko pata hay waqt kabhi kabhi sharat karta hay.or ham bhi is ka hissa ban jate hain.. apne merio post parhi ise reply kiya...bohat acha laga thanks ---------- sakhi how r u? apne meri post ko parha or reply kiya.. thanks alot khan... agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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11th November 2006, 06:29 PM
Dear Asad Jee, Hope You are well
Dilko Achchha Laga Aapko Dekhkar...Aur Ek Geet Se Thodi Si Bol Ki Bhi Yaad Aayi...Hum Banjare Ho-Dil Vil Haare Ho-Kahte Hain Saare Wo-Kya Kahne Haaye Kya Kahne ? Aapne Zorour Souna Hain Ye Geet~*~Ab Hum Aapne Bade Mein Kahte Hain Aapko Jo Dil Ke Kareeb Hain...Haan, Aaj Bhi Hain: Baadla Na Aapne Aap Ko Jo Thhe Wohii Rahe...Milte Rahe Sabhi Se Magar Ajnabi Rahe...Writer: Nida Fazli Jee-Singer: Jagjit Jee-Aapne Souna To Hain Ye Bhi-Right**Ab Aur Aapko Kya Kahoun Jo Aapne Likhha Usske Bade Mein Kah Rahi Houn...! Likhhte Rahiyega, Ok? Dil Ki Gehraaion Ki Gehraaion Se Dher-o-Dher Saare Phoul,Shukriya **Take Care*... Allah Aapko Salamat Rakhein Aur Dheron Duwaaen...Aameen Summa Aameen **Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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