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kise gham hota hai.... - 3rd December 2004, 05:12 AM

Ek aisi baat jiska takaaza aab tak nahi ho paaya hai...

kaun jaane kise gham hota hai
Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai

kaun jaane kise gham hota hai
Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai

Barastaa hai jo aankhon se, gilaa paani
Kalam kagaz ka phir aise, sanam hota hai

Baithte Baithte hua karti hai, bashar raatein
Din mein bhi khwaabon se, sitam hota hai

kaun jaane kise gham hota hai
Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai....

Saath mehfil ke hua karte hai, tanhaa yeh kadam
Jahaa shuru rastaa wahi par, khatam hota hai

Dard de jaaye, gair ke bas ki hai baat nahin
Rulaane waale ka to naam, humdam hota hai

kaun jaane kise gham hota hai
Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai

Muqammal cheez ka duniya mein koi naam nahi
Kaun sehtaa hai aur kispar zulam hota hai

Bas likhe jaate hai 'mast' dard teri mehfil mein
Kabhi padh lete hai woh zakhmon pe marham hota hai

kaun jaane kise gham hota hai
Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai....



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hi - 3rd December 2004, 01:35 PM

mast sahib
kaise hain?
bohat piyara klaam...yakeen jano k parh kar bohat
khushi hui...or tumhare lafzon ki taqat ka nadaza to
pahle se hi hay hmain...

Bas likhe jaate hai 'mast' dard teri mehfil mein
Kabhi padh lete hai woh zakhmon pe marham hota hai


yeh sher bohat hi kmaal laga...jaise kisi shayar ne apne dil ki bat
lafzon main byan karne ka rasta talsha ho...
bohat khub


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6th December 2004, 01:02 AM

Khan Bhai..aapne yaha aakar mere lafzo aur jazbaaton ko izzat di behad khushi huyi..

aage bhi koshish rahegi ki yeh lafz aapke kaano tak pahunchte rahe..bhai aage bhi saath dete rahiYeGaa

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6th December 2004, 10:12 AM

mast dost

bohat muazrat ke saath arz karoon gaa ke mein aap ke kalam per bohat kam aa paya hoon.
mager aaj aap ki is ghazal ko parh ker ehsaas huaa ke aap ke kalam mein khayaal ki sachchaayee aur izhaar ki gehraayee bohat khoob hai, aap ke lehje ka khaloos bhi aap ke kalam ki tamaam khaamiyon per haavi hai.
dost bohat khoob likha hai aap ne.
isi tarah aur isi sanfe sukhan mein likhiye.
meri duyayein aap ki tamaam kaamiyabiyon mein aap ke hamqadam hoan gi.
God bless you.

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6th December 2004, 10:56 AM

mast bhai

bohat khub ,,,

ek behtreen kalam dil kr jazbat udel diye aapne sare ... ek shikayat .. si hai dil ki .. bakhoob bayan kiya hai har aashar ... sach aap to shayari ka chamakta sitara hai .. jiski chamak se ye jahan roshan hai ... bhai likhte rehna yun hi ...

tumhaara bhai

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8th December 2004, 07:10 PM

Mushi bhaiyaa aapki maujoodgi paakar mein apne wajood ka wazn mehsuus kar paa raha hoon. Waise to nahi kahunga ki yeh mera likha sabse pasandida kalaam hai par itna zaroor hai ki aab yeh mera sabse yaadgar kalaam zaroor raheGaa... aapko yaha paakar ek sher rukte nahi ruk raha....

Chashm-e-mast raha karti thi muntazir dekho
Khaaliq aaya bhi mere ghar aur pata na chala


Aapna sayaa isi tarah humpar mustaqil rakhiYeGaa

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8th December 2004, 07:15 PM

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aapne hamesha ki tarah ek baar phir mera saath diya iska tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon main...mein to bas is parivaar ka hissa hoon aap jaisa nayaab dost mile yaha par jinhone hamesha se mere likhe ko sarahyaa raj bhia sitaara to aap hai jo yaha hameshaa aakar hamare likhe ki chamak badhaate hai...aap bhi aage yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa

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8th December 2004, 08:10 PM

Dear mast Bhai,

kya kahe yaar no words can match. classic...u got talent....keep it up.

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9th December 2004, 07:24 PM

Muqammal cheez ka duniya mein koi naam nahi
Kaun sehtaa hai aur kispar zulam hota hai

Bas likhe jaate hai 'mast' dard teri mehfil mein
Kabhi padh lete hai woh zakhmon pe marham hota hai


Anu Bhai!

Dil ko chho gaye aapke yeh shabd bhi... Simple n beautiful as always.... Loved themmm... Plz do keep writing


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Thumbs up Bahut khoob - 9th December 2004, 09:02 PM

kaun jaane kise gham hota hai
Yeh jitna hota hai kam hota hai....


Bahut hi khoobsoorati se dard ko pesh kiya hai Mast aapne....or ye punch line to waakai jaan hai aapki rachna ki...

aasha hai aage bhi aapse kuchh eisa hi behtreen parhne ko milega.


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10th December 2004, 07:00 PM

Pappu Bhai,
aapne padha aur seene se lagaya bas sukoon mil gaya dil ko. aapne padh kar ise classic khud bana diya shukriya dost aage bhi saath dete rahiYeGaa

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10th December 2004, 07:03 PM

Pulkit Bhai...Hameshaa ki tarah saath dene ka shukriya...bas yeh alfaaz aap sab milkar hi isme pyar aur mohabbat ka ras bhar dete hai ki bas kya kahun...

aage bhi hamesha saath dijiYeGaa

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10th December 2004, 07:08 PM

Chaand Bhai..aapne ise padha ke aapne tarah ek khubsurat chand laga diya...Bhai..aap hamesha se adarsh rahe ho aur aapki prerna se aage bhadtaa aaya hoon..

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10th December 2004, 07:10 PM

Di aapki kamoshi bhi bina kahe sab keh jaati hai aur kehkar bhi kuch nahi kehti....

apna haath sada mere sar par rakhiYeGaa

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25th July 2011, 09:44 AM

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bus itna hi---- - 26th July 2011, 02:27 PM

banjare lot aye hay basti ki or
Koi barish hay jo ab brasne ko hay

Mast..

Yad to sab kuch hay bus koi bahana nahi milta is traf ane k liye...
Shrabi shrab pene k bahane tlash karta hay or shayar dard pane k bahane dhondta hay..


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27th July 2011, 07:38 AM

Khan bhai kaise ho aap?

Sahi kaha bhai aapne insaan waqt bewaqt halaat ke haathon majboor hai par khuda ka shukr hi kahungaa ki aap mujhe bhule nahiN..

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