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Main Agar Likhta To Mat Puchhiye Kya-kya Likhta -
26th February 2003, 12:13 AM
“JURM HAI AAJ SITAMGAR KO SITAMGAR LIKHNA,
FUN HAI IS DAUR MEIN DOOJE KO SAMANDAR LIKHNA, MERA AFSANA MERE GHAM SEY CHHUPA KAR LIKHNA, MUJHE HAR HAAL MEIN KISMAT KA SIKANDAR LIKHNA, USKI SHOHRAT BHI TO HOGI MERI RUSWAI SEY, NAAM DEEWAR PE DONO KA BARABER LIKHNA, MAIN AGAR LIKHTA TO MAT PUCHHIYE KYA-KYA LIKHTA, MERE HAATHO MEIN NA THA APNA MUQADDAR LIKHNA.” ___________________ Sach hai na dosto...............kitni banawati hai yeduniya shayad  ___________________ |
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26th February 2003, 12:34 AM
buhut khoobsurti say likha hay bedilMusafir sahab... akhri shair buhut pasand aaya...
aik request hay... agar aap lowercase main likhain to ziada acha lagay ga |
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Shukriya -
8th March 2003, 09:44 AM
hi Romance sahab,
hausla afzai kerne ka shukriya.. Ramance ji mujhme shayri likhne ki tameez nahi hai, bus kabhi kabhi likh leta hoo... aapne lowercase me likhne ka mashwara diya hai.... per mai iske baare me kuch nahi jaanta... actually mai shayri ki technical baato ke baare me anjan hoo.. aapka bahut shukraguzar rahunga agar aap iske bare me kuch bataye... shukriya..... bye bye take care keep smile!!! |
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8th March 2003, 08:36 PM
hi
bhut hi acha likha hein aapne aap ne sach kaha hein keep it up bye |
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8th March 2003, 09:09 PM
Wah!.. kya likha hai aap ney!.. dil ley gaey!....
 Haya !! Ay zindagi terey har modr ko kagaz pe saja rakha hai.... |
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8th March 2003, 11:39 PM
Shukriya Romana ji,
aapne shayri ko sach bataker usme aur dard bhar diya... thanx one again.. bye bye take care keep smile!!! |
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8th March 2003, 11:49 PM
Aadab Haya ji, aap kaisi hai..?
zarranawazi ka shuriya.. per Haya ji mai ab kisi ka dil le jaane ke qabil nahi raha.... shukriya bye bye take care keep smile!!! |
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9th March 2003, 12:45 AM
lowercase say mera mutlab yeh tha keh CAPS LOCK off ker kay likhain... kyonkeh CAPITAL LETTERS main likha howa text ankhon ko acha nahin lagta
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9th March 2003, 12:43 PM
shukriya Romance sahab,
aage se mai is baat ka khayal rakhunga. aapki salah ke liye ek baar fir shukriya bye bye take care keep smile!!! |
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2nd May 2007, 03:12 PM
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dost bilkul sahi kaha aapne...! USKI SHOHRAT BHI TO HOGI MERI RUSWAI SEY, NAAM DEEWAR PE DONO KA BARABER LIKHNA, MAIN AGAR LIKHTA TO MAT PUCHHIYE KYA-KYA LIKHTA, MERE HAATHO MEIN NA THA APNA MUQADDAR LIKHNA.” bahut khoob...bahut pasand aaya.  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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