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Dil ki Dhadkan... - 4th January 2011, 11:45 AM

Dil dhadkta hai tere aane se. Tere jaane se saans ruk jaati hai,
Honthon pe hansi tere hone se hai. Tere rone se meri jaan jaati hai...
E-Sanam tu kyn nahi samjhti mere Dil ki baichani ko,
Teri jagah mere dil ke us kone mein hai jahan Saans b punch kar aati hai....


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4th January 2011, 10:42 PM

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Dil dhadkta hai tere aane se. Tere jaane se saans ruk jaati hai,
Honthon pe hansi tere hone se hai. Tere rone se meri jaan jaati hai...
E-Sanam tu kyn nahi samjhti mere Dil ki baichani ko,
Teri jagah mere dil ke us kone mein hai jahan Saans b punch kar aati hai....
amit bhai bhut bhadiya bhut achaha likhte hai issi trah se likhte rahye
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