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23rd January 2005, 05:56 PM

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hieee rohin,

howz u i liked the above sher a lot specially the line "hoton par reh gaya hai namkeen swad"....

we also wish that u be happy forever ......

HAR KADAM INTAHAN LETI HAI ZINDAGI,
HAR WAQT NAYE SADME DETI HAI ZINDAGI,
HUM ZINDAGI SE SHIKWA KAISE KARE....
AAP JAISE ACHE DOST BHI DETI HAI ZINDAGI....

bye

yaar u know i thought that was the only line out of place.

Bu u liked it.. thanks


a line added to ur sher
Yehi to khubsurti hai zindagi ki...

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...begana bana diya - 2nd March 2005, 05:22 AM

Yeh ek nayi peshkash hai...
Purane thread par ek naya ehsaas
Ummed hai aap sab isse padhenge...
Aur aap ko kaisa laga jaroor batayenge


Subha thi beet gayi, raat ki na koi khabar
Zindagi ko ek shaam jo beete na, bana diya

Saagar ki gehrai na nazar mein, na hi dikhe kinara
Beech majdhar mein chod, mushkil jeena bana diya

Thi jiske zindagi mein Saaz-o-aawaz basi hui
Ek chubti hui khamosh de kar veerana bana diya

Berang thi duniya rang ka na koi nisha.N
Pyaar ke rang bhar kar deewanan bana diya

Beete hue lamho ko qaid kar ke dil mein
In yaadon ke moti ko piro afsaana bana diya

Duniya ne maari thokar, Apno ne begana bana diya
Gum ne "Rohin"apnakar, Khushi ne begana bana diya


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hi - 3rd March 2005, 01:24 AM

hey rohin i am thinking where is this coming from
yaar i can understand from where
par dont wannna see this rohin who is sad
i know we always ask these questios par life usi ki theek chalti hai ppl who dont think jus keep on going...cuz thats the wya it is
though we are insaan and we do ask these questions

ek din tha jab hum uchak kar aasman ko chuna chahte the
aaj hum zameen se paon uthane se bhi darte hain

""""""""""""""ek din tha jab hum suraj ke aankhon mein aankhein dal dekhte the
aaj hum andhere mein bhi aankehin kholne se ghabrate hain""""""""""""""""""""""'



ek din tha samundar ke bahave ke khilaf hum tairte the
aaj hum pani ke paas jaane se katrate hain

ek din tha hum andhiyon se bhi lad jaate the
aaj hum hawa ke jhoke se duur bhagte hain

ek din tha kaanton pe chal apni manzil tai karte the
aaj hum phool ko chunne se darte hain

ek din tha hum Garzte badalon ki aawaz ko chup karate the
aaj hum dil ke dhadkne ki aawaz se bhi ghabrate hain

ek din hum jeena chahte the
aaj hum maut ka inteezar kartein hain

Kyon......

vo din vaapis aayainge trust me if u do

Priya


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3rd March 2005, 01:41 AM

Hi Priya,

Sach tum jaanti ho...
Isliye tumhe Rohin dukhi dikh raha hai...
Chehre ki muskurahat nahi dikh rahi hai...

Sab ko khush dekhkar mein to khush hoon hi...

Aisa nahi Rohin dekhna to kaun sa rohin dekhna hai??

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HI - 3rd March 2005, 01:49 AM

i dont wanta fake rohin
fake ban'na hai mere saath then i am not going to ur friend ..i am seriius
either be with me FULLY or NONE. AND I MEAN IT THIS TIME

PRIYA may be ur rude friend par me aisi hi hu


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8th March 2005, 06:38 PM

hey rohin....

well done dude...

you started this again,,,,
wow


"difference between a friend and a true friend .....
friend has never seen u cry..
and true friend has his shoulders turned wet .. until ur tears dry..."


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8th March 2005, 07:18 PM

Tumhare liye Priyanka
Vaada kiya tha na band nahi karoonga

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i am back - 26th March 2005, 10:17 AM

Aankhon mein aansoon hain magar
Unhe kehkar paani tumne gum chupa liya
Udass tha chechra magar
Hoto pe hassi se tumne gum chupa liya
Humme apna kaha tha magar
Dil ka haal chupakar tumne begana bana diya
---------> umed karti huhum dosto se dilka haalchupa kar Begana kabjhi nahi banagoge rohin, ab to sehne ki himmat bhi nahi hai.

Love
Rohin
"Truth might be bitter than reality
Reality is darker then darkness itself
But what you believe in is just a mirage
The reality is a desert you donít wanna see"
--------so true tohin relaity kya hai kaun jaanta hai hamara dilbas

rohin this ismy feeling that one day u will get the luv of ur life n ur face will only have true smiles forever.

always with u

ur friend
Priya


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Re: i am back - 26th March 2005, 11:36 AM

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Aankhon mein aansoon hain magar
Unhe kehkar paani tumne gum chupa liya
Udass tha chechra magar
Hoto pe hassi se tumne gum chupa liya
Humme apna kaha tha magar
Dil ka haal chupakar tumne begana bana diya
---------> umed karti huhum dosto se dilka haalchupa kar Begana kabjhi nahi banagoge rohin, ab to sehne ki himmat bhi nahi hai.

Love
Rohin
"Truth might be bitter than reality
Reality is darker then darkness itself
But what you believe in is just a mirage
The reality is a desert you donít wanna see"
--------so true tohin relaity kya hai kaun jaanta hai hamara dilbas

rohin this ismy feeling that one day u will get the luv of ur life n ur face will only have true smiles forever.

always with u

ur friend
Priya
Hi Priya,

Thanks for all the warm wishes.

I hope it happens too.

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7th September 2005, 03:00 PM

Hi Everyone,

Dost se vada kiya tha is thread ko kabhi band nahi hone doonga...

To bus kuch issi topic par...

Tujhpar kiya tha vishvas meine
Har baar tuune vishvas mera toda
Khushi mangi thi apno ki meine tujhse
Tunne mujhe aansoon mein nihla diya
Tha jisse pyaar mujhe apni jaan se jyada
Uske hi nazron mein mujhe begana bana diya....

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11th September 2005, 04:31 PM

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Hi Everyone,

Dost se vada kiya tha is thread ko kabhi band nahi hone doonga...

To bus kuch issi topic par...

Tujhpar kiya tha vishvas meine
Har baar tuune vishvas mera toda
Khushi mangi thi apno ki meine tujhse
Tunne mujhe aansoon mein nihla diya
Tha jisse pyaar mujhe apni jaan se jyada
Uske hi nazron mein mujhe begana bana diya....

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wow rohin............

my fovourite mail......with such a good new sher wow

really it is superb


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Wah Dost Baadiya! - 28th September 2005, 10:53 PM

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Hi Everyone,

Dost se vada kiya tha is thread ko kabhi band nahi hone doonga...

To bus kuch issi topic par...

Tujhpar kiya tha vishvas meine
Har baar tuune vishvas mera toda
Khushi mangi thi apno ki meine tujhse
Tunne mujhe aansoon mein nihla diya
Tha jisse pyaar mujhe apni jaan se jyada
Uske hi nazron mein mujhe begana bana diya....

Take Care
Rohin

Hi rohin...

Thanks yaar..this thread should not be closed., Bcoz
this was the thread u invited me to see and we first met..
And became friends....This thread hav given me a good friend...

Let this thread have a long life ,a long run....

my best wishes are always with u buddy...
Keep up the Good work!

Your friend,
Yogesh...


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Re: Wah Dost Baadiya! - 28th September 2005, 11:14 PM

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Hi rohin...

Thanks yaar..this thread should not be closed., Bcoz
this was the thread u invited me to see and we first met..
And became friends....This thread hav given me a good friend...

Let this thread have a long life ,a long run....

my best wishes are always with u buddy...
Keep up the Good work!

Your friend,
Yogesh...
I won't let it buddy... it will just go on... and on...


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Thanks alot buddy! - 28th September 2005, 11:27 PM

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I won't let it buddy... it will just go on... and on...



Thanks alot buddy!

Let the thread go on... and on....


cya...
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Begana bana diya mujhe apno ne
Chhod diya mujhe mere sapno ne

-- jusst a thought... wanted a positive end to the sher... but kind of falling on the rhythm....


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hi - 4th November 2005, 12:16 PM

very touchy rohin
andhiya gham ki chalagi to sawar jauga
ma teri zulf nahi hu jo bikhar jauga

ma to shair hu mujha qatal karna ki zarurat kaya ha
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Begana bana diya mujhe apno ne
Chhod diya mujhe mere sapno ne

-- jusst a thought... wanted a positive end to the sher... but kind of falling on the rhythm....
This thread is special.. And wanted to keep it right at the Top of the list.
Dost kaisa hai..? I know after a long time i came on shayri.com...


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This thread is special.. And wanted to keep it right at the Top of the list.
Dost kaisa hai..? I know after a long time i came on shayri.com...
I'm here again after ages. However, the emotions are the same attached to this thread. This was the first thread we interacted Dost Rohin. Yashmax here...

   
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