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mere jazbaaton ko wyapaar bana diya
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mere jazbaaton ko wyapaar bana diya - 3rd September 2009, 08:06 AM

mere dil se nikle jazbaaton ko, tune wyapaar bana diya
tujhse tooti to humne botal ko apna yaar bana liya

woh insaan ki tarah bhi izzat na dey paayi mujhe
jisse maine apna, parwad-digaar bana liya

humne to ishq kiya tha unse, rehamdil samajhkar
unhon ne to aashiq ke dil ko shikaar bana diya

jinke liye duniya thukra di zakhmee ashiq ne
unhon ne aghyaaron ke sang, alag ek sansaar bana liya
   
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mere dil se nikle jazbaaton ko, tune wyapaar bana diya
tujhse tooti to humne botal ko apna yaar bana liya

woh insaan ki tarah bhi izzat na dey paayi mujhe
jisse maine apna, parwad-digaar bana liya

humne to ishq kiya tha unse, rehamdil samajhkar
unhon ne to aashiq ke dil ko shikaar bana diya

jinke liye duniya thukra di zakhmee ashiq ne
unhon ne aghyaaron ke sang, alag ek sansaar bana liya

bahot khub.............kya khub sher likhe hai aap ne
har sher asardaar hai
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