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Hum to muskaye sahi aap bhi to sharmaaye - 15th June 2010, 03:21 PM
ek duet song fir se aapki khidmat maiN hai,
is baar ashiq ji kuch jayda hi aashiqaana haiN
baarish ki sajish liye mahboob se mukhatib ho rahe haiN


Hum to muskaye sahi aap bhi to sharmaaye
Hosh itna hai kaha- kaun- kise samjaaye
Hum dono ek hi kasti me sawaar hai
Jitney hum utne hi aap gunahgaar hai
Kiske sar kahiye ab ilzaam ye diya jaaye

Rukh to hawaaoo ko bhi ishq ka padna aaye hai
Dekh tere kandhe se dupatta sarka jaaye hai
Ye nazara dekh dil dar ba dar hoga
Abto tufaano me hi tay safar hoga
Ab Bijli badal baarish ho
Poori dilki khwaish ho

Ishq ke tufaano se bhala kaun bach paaye
Dil hai diwana bhala dil ko kaun samjhay
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15th June 2010, 03:26 PM
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ek duet song fir se aapki khidmat maiN hai,
is baar ashiq ji kuch jayda hi aashiqaana haiN
baarish ki sajish liye mahboob se mukhatib ho rahe haiN


Hum to muskaye sahi aap bhi to sharmaaye
Hosh itna hai kaha- kaun- kise samjaaye
Hum dono ek hi kasti me sawaar hai
Jitney hum utne hi aap gunahgaar hai
Kiske sar kahiye ab ilzaam ye diya jaaye

Rukh to hawaaoo ko bhi ishq ka padna aaye hai
Dekh tere kandhe se dupatta sarka jaaye hai
Ye nazara dekh dil dar ba dar hoga
Abto tufaano me hi tay safar hoga
Ab Bijli badal baarish ho
Poori dilki khwaish ho

Ishq ke tufaano se bhala kaun bach paaye
Dil hai diwana bhala dil ko kaun samjhay

oye hoye......................vikas bhai, kya baat hai, sab khariyat hai na.

aapka geet hume accha laga padne meiN, par agar esko gunguna kar dekhna ho to kis lai par gungunaya ja sakta hai esko, yeh bhi bata dijiye.

vaise likha bahut qatilana hai aapne

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15th June 2010, 03:28 PM
ahche aur bahut madhur khayal haiN vikas bhai par do jagah mujhe vyakaranik dosh sa laga....!!

pehli line me sharmaaiye ya sharmaayeN hoga,aap bhi to sharmaaye me dosh hai... aur teesri pankti me jitney hum utne hi aap gunahgaar "haiN" hoga na ki "hai".... baNki ehsash madhur the aur geet ko likhne ka ahcha prayash rha, umeed karta hun aap bura nahin maaneNge meri raai ka...

aapka GHAYAL....!!


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15th June 2010, 05:22 PM
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Hum to muskaye sahi aap bhi to sharmaaye
Hosh itna hai kaha- kaun- kise samjaaye
Hum dono ek hi kasti me sawaar hai
Jitney hum utne hi aap gunahgaar hai
Kiske sar kahiye ab ilzaam ye diya jaaye

Rukh to hawaaoo ko bhi ishq ka padna aaye hai
Dekh tere kandhe se dupatta sarka jaaye hai
Ye nazara dekh dil dar ba dar hoga
Abto tufaano me hi tay safar hoga
Ab Bijli badal baarish ho
Poori dilki khwaish ho

Ishq ke tufaano se bhala kaun bach paaye

Dil hai diwana bhala dil ko kaun samjhay
Its Too Good ...... Vikas Ji !
kya baat hai........
bahut khoob lage mujhe aapke dilkash ehsaas.....
dil se daad ! khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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ek duet song fir se aapki khidmat maiN hai,
is baar ashiq ji kuch jayda hi aashiqaana haiN
baarish ki sajish liye mahboob se mukhatib ho rahe haiN


Hum to muskaye sahi aap bhi to sharmaaye
Hosh itna hai kaha- kaun- kise samjaaye
Hum dono ek hi kasti me sawaar hai
Jitney hum utne hi aap gunahgaar hai
Kiske sar kahiye ab ilzaam ye diya jaaye

Rukh to hawaaoo ko bhi ishq ka padna aaye hai
Dekh tere kandhe se dupatta sarka jaaye hai
Ye nazara dekh dil dar ba dar hoga
Abto tufaano me hi tay safar hoga
Ab Bijli badal baarish ho
Poori dilki khwaish ho

Ishq ke tufaano se bhala kaun bach paaye
Dil hai diwana bhala dil ko kaun samjhay
vikas bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob....padh kar man prasann hua yun hi likhte rahen
duaon ke saath

Aapka Apna
Ishk


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janumanu ji,
aap ki nazm bahut pasand aayee.

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Bhai bahut achcha likha hai nazm ke ahsaas to bahut qatilana rahe aur lafzoN ki sadgii bhi achchi rahi ....... itni bhadakedar nazm ko lafzoN mein chupa pana mere liye to bahut mushkil hai......

Bahut achcha likha hai haan kuch dosh hai ismeiN......... per maiN bayaN naih kar paa raha huN is khubsurat ahsaasoN ke aage.......

Aise hi likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez..........

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Too good Vikas ji.....

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ghayal ji ne sahi kaha hai kavita achhi hai lekin be taal hai.koshish achhi hai likhte rahie khush hote rahie
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ahche aur bahut madhur khayal haiN vikas bhai par do jagah mujhe vyakaranik dosh sa laga....!!

pehli line me sharmaaiye ya sharmaayeN hoga,aap bhi to sharmaaye me dosh hai... aur teesri pankti me jitney hum utne hi aap gunahgaar "haiN" hoga na ki "hai".... baNki ehsash madhur the aur geet ko likhne ka ahcha prayash rha, umeed karta hun aap bura nahin maaneNge meri raai ka...

aapka GHAYAL....!!

are bahyee buraa manne wali kyaa baat hai isme .....

lekin


Hum to muskaye sahi aap bhi to sharmaaye
Hosh itna hai kaha- kaun- kise samjaaye

1. sharmaaiye kahne se meter se bahar ho jata hai, chalo meter ki baat jaane do

aur doosri baat

yaha

cause effect hai

hum sharmaye = hum muskaaye=aap sharmaaye ...
ek hi baat hai,


sharmaye, aur sharmayeN .. mai fark bhaav ka hai

aap sharmaye ... mean aap sharmaye .. you ashamed
lekin

aap shamayeN, (N) se bhaav hoga ki aap sharmayeN, yaani mai aapko sharmane ko kah raha huN, you are requesting to be ashamed

aur mai ye kahna nahi chahta isliye yaha, (N) bindi nahi hai "ai" ke upar ....

hope ki ab clear ho gaya hoga meri taraf se

ab bhi koe confusion hai to plzz fir batayeN mujhe ........!!...

( bata+yeN )here i m requesting you to let me know)
regards....

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ghayal ji ne sahi kaha hai kavita achhi hai lekin be taal hai.koshish achhi hai likhte rahie khush hote rahie
well ghayal bhayee ki baatoN ka jabaab de chuka huN so plzz woh aap bhi padh leN kyunki aap bhi sahmat hai usi baat se ...

rahi baat TAAl(rythm, meter ) ki to
aap nazar ko thodi zehmat uthaane ka kaSAT den to, aapko meter mil jayega , jisse ye nazm taal mai hai kah sakte haiN
phir aap iski taali bhi baja sakte hai
aap mhi maSAT rahe aur taali baja baja kar taal milaaye ab
haa mere ghar ke saamne mat aana bus
taali bajaate bajaate, maine 500,1000 ke note arrange kar liyeN haiN (apne bank account se, taali baja ke nahi)

chaliyee aur kaam asaan kar deta hun...

hume to loot liya mil ke husn walo ne .... zara is taal ko follow kareN ....
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