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Love (Dil ka Mareez) - 11th October 2001, 05:25 PM

Ab to tabiyat juda juda si lagti hai.......
Saans leta hoon to zakhmon ko hawa lagti hai......
Kabhi raazi to kabhi mujhse khafaa lagti hai......
Zindagi tu he bataa tu mari kya lagti hai????


(Ye Sher maine nahin likha)

(Jwaab ka muntazir)



Yoon to bahout bheed hai harsoo magar....
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11th October 2001, 06:52 PM

hey,
i am giving it a try.
Dont mind if u dont like it

Jis se saas lete ho woh hawa bhi main hoon|
jis se jakhm hue woh shastra bhi main hoon|

kabhi khushi to kabhi gam deti hoon|
Lekin sabki humraaz main hoon|

kabhi dhup to kabhi chawn ho jis mey|
aisa ek suhana safar saa main hoon|

jo muze dekhe jis nazarie se |
mein bhi use dekhoon use nazariye se|

bulbul key liye ek chaman si main hoon|
our gidhad key liye ek murde si main hoon|


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12th October 2001, 05:15 PM

Aadab

Uday ji mujhe aap ki likhi gazal pasand aaee. Apne mujhe reply diya mujhe bahot khushi hui.

Thanx



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