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Question (Khali haath) - 11th October 2001, 09:09 PM

Jaate jaate vo mujhe achcchi nishani de gaya!
Umar bhar dohraaunga aesi kahani de gaya!!

Sab hawain le gaya mere samander ke koi!
Aur mujhko ek kashti baadbaani de gaya!!

Kher main pyaasa raha per usne itna to kiya!
Meri palkon ki kataaron ko vo paani de gaya!!

Us se main kuch pa sakun aesi kahan ummeed thi!
Ghum bhi vo shayad baraae maharbaani de gaya!!


(Ye gazal maine nahin likhi)

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Thumbs up 12th October 2001, 02:37 AM

WAAH....Bahut umda ghazal hai....kya aap batayenge ke ye kisni likhi hai??

especially these lines r too good...

Us se main kuch pa sakun aesi kahan ummeed thi!
Ghum bhi vo shayad baraae maharbaani de gaya!!


kabhi kisi ko muqammal jahan nahi milta
kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!!
   
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12th October 2001, 06:13 AM

ji shumalia ji...ye "javed akhtar" saahab ki likhi hui hai...unki aik kitaab hai "tarkash".....agar aapko kahin mile to zaroor padhiyega....!!


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