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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi - 28th May 2010, 03:04 PM

Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
Karte hai nazroN se woh salaam kabhi kabhi

Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi
Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi

Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi

Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per
Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi



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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
Karte hai nazroN se woh salaam kabhi kabhi

Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi
Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi

Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi

Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per
Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi
sameer bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob............dil se daad nikli hai...........kubul karen
saare hi ashar ek se badh kar ek hain
aise hi likhte rahen
duaon ke saath


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28th May 2010, 05:17 PM

Sameer ji namskaar.........

bahut hi achhi lagi aapki ye koshish.
ye line to kuch jyada pasNd aayi.
daad qabool kareN.


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28th May 2010, 06:08 PM

sameer bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

koShiSh ke ehsaas Khoob rahe.n! aapki koShiSh ko paRh ke lataa jee kaa gaayaa huaa ik geet yaad aa gayaa .. miltii haii zindagee meiN muHabbat kabhi kabhi...

yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n... dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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Sameer Ji.....Aadaab ! Bahut khoobsurat lage Sabhi ashaar ke ehsaas...matla aur maqta meri pehli pasand rahe....yunhi behtar Ghazal ke saath aate rahen...aur humesha likhte rahen... khush rahen....

Ghazal ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai ....qubuul ki jiye...

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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
Karte hai nazroN se woh salaam kabhi kabhi

Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi
Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi

Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi

Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per
Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

sameer bhai ko namaskar, bahut khoob likha hai aapne saare aashar bahut pasand aaye. Dil se daad deta hoon kubool kijiyega. Aise hee mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye.



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sameer bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob............dil se daad nikli hai...........kubul karen
saare hi ashar ek se badh kar ek hain
aise hi likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
Ishq Sahab Aadaab!

Aapki daad dil se kabool hai..
Aage bhi saath banaye rakhiye...

Khush rahiye....
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Sameer ji, aadaab!

Bahot achhi lagi aapki ye ghazal. Daad qubool kijiye.

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Sameer ji namskaar.........

bahut hi achhi lagi aapki ye koshish.
ye line to kuch jyada pasNd aayi.
daad qabool kareN.


Sharmaa jee aadaab!

Jee ashaar ko pasand karne ke liye aur apna saath jatane ke liye main aapka behad shukra guzar hun .......

Aur aapne jo ashaar pasand kiya hai maNi us ashaar ko aur ek type se likha tha aap ke samne psh kar deta huN.....

Sunkar huyi hairani apne hi raqeeb se
Leti hia woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

aate rhaiye....... apne khayal se ruberu karate rahiye
Khush rhaiye..
Khuda Hafez......


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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
Karte hai nazroN se woh salaam kabhi kabhi

Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi
Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi

Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi

Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per
Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi
Sameer jee:
namaskaar,
aapki koshish pasaNd aayi.
Par
Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
iska matlab kya hota hai?

yeh sh'er pasandida raha....
De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

Aur ise dusre tareeke se aapne jo likha tha
Sunkar huyi hairani apne hi raqeeb se
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi


yeh mujhe pehle wale se jyada asardaar laga.

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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
Karte hai nazroN se woh salaam kabhi kabhi

Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi
Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi

Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi

Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per
Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi


sameer bhai ko amit ka namskar;;;;

bahut khoob likha hae apne ,dil bag bag ho gaya hae .
aisa lag raha hae ki meri mohabbat phir se taza ho gayi hae meri nazaro k samne ;
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aj tujhe karna phir se pyar ye dil chahta hae
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aj 'amit' ko isqh-e- deedar karne kio dil chahta hae

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sameer bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

koShiSh ke ehsaas Khoob rahe.n! aapki koShiSh ko paRh ke lataa jee kaa gaayaa huaa ik geet yaad aa gayaa .. miltii haii zindagee meiN muHabbat kabhi kabhi...

yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n... dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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Meri koshish ko padhne aur sarahne ka bahut bahut shukriyaa...... Jee maine usi geet ke tarz per yeh gazal kahne ki koshish ki thi.... ab pata nahi kahan tak kamyaab hua.... aapko woh geet yaad aa gaya to shayad main kuch kamyaab hua huN......

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....
Khush rahiye.......
APna khayaal rakhiye.....
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Sameer Ji.....Aadaab ! Bahut khoobsurat lage Sabhi ashaar ke ehsaas...matla aur maqta meri pehli pasand rahe....yunhi behtar Ghazal ke saath aate rahen...aur humesha likhte rahen... khush rahen....

Ghazal ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai ....qubuul ki jiye...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....

Naresh jee AadaaB!

Aap ko meri lkhi gazal pasand aayi mujhe khushi huyi aur aapne apni pasand bhi jatayi behad achcha laga......

Aate rhaiye,
aur apni rai se nawazte rhaiye......

Khush rahiye
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sameer saheb aadaab...!

bahut khoob likha hai aapne, tareef ke liye alfaaz kam pad rahe haiN...
behad khoobsurat aur asardaar peshkash...

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi


khaas taur par aapke qalaam ka maqta behad pasaNd aaya mujhe...
daad haazir hai qubuul farmaiyega....
likhte rahiye.....
apna khayal rakhiyega....

khuda hafiz....


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sameer bhai ko namaskar, bahut khoob likha hai aapne saare aashar bahut pasand aaye. Dil se daad deta hoon kubool kijiyega. Aise hee mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye.
Arvind Bhai namaskar........

aapko bahut dino bad bazm mein dekhker behad khushi ho rahi hai....
aapki daad dil se kabool kii bhai per ek baat per ke aap aate rahenge ... apni pyari pyari kavitaoN ke saath.....

Aur aap bhi mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye......

Khush rahiye.....
Apna khayaal rakhiye....
Khuda Hafez........


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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
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Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi
Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi

Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi

Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per
Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi
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Sameer ji, aadaab!

Bahot achhi lagi aapki ye ghazal. Daad qubool kijiye.

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Mann
Mann Jee AadaaB!

Aapki daad dil se kabool hai sahab..... Gazal ki pasandidgi ke liye tahe dil se shukraguzar huN.......

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Seep Sahab AadaaB!

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Sameer jee:
namaskaar,
aapki koshish pasaNd aayi.
Par
Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
iska matlab kya hota hai?

yeh sh'er pasandida raha....
De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

Aur ise dusre tareeke se aapne jo likha tha
Sunkar huyi hairani apne hi raqeeb se
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

yeh mujhe pehle wale se jyada asardaar laga.

God Bless You
Apki Dost,
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Ritu Jee AadaaB!

Jee dedaar e Hilaal means Eid ka chand.. jo bahut chota hota hai jise log shiddat se dhundte hia aasmaaN mein..... Par sirf chand raat ko hi... jo Eid ki hoti hai... Maine yahan isliye use kiya kyuNke woh din chand raat nahi thi per Mehboob ko dekhne ke liye nazar kya uthi, ordinary month ka "Hilaal"(chand) bhi saath mein nazar aa gaya....... Isliye woh shaam yaad rah gayi...

Jee Aapne replys bhi padhe yeh saaf zahir hai.... yeh to padhne wale pasand ke uper depend karta hia ke use kya pasand aaya.... Aapko dusra sher achcha laga, jaankar khushi huyi........

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....
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Ritu Jee AadaaB!

Jee dedaar e Hilaal means Eid ka chand.. jo bahut chota hota hai jise log shiddat se dhundte hia aasmaaN mein..... Par sirf chand raat ko hi... jo Eid ki hoti hai... Maine yahan isliye use kiya kyuNke woh din chand raat nahi thi per Mehboob ko dekhne ke liye nazar kya uthi, ordinary month ka "Hilaal"(chand) bhi saath mein nazar aa gaya....... Isliye woh shaam yaad rah gayi...

Jee Aapne replys bhi padhe yeh saaf zahir hai.... yeh to padhne wale pasand ke uper depend karta hia ke use kya pasand aaya.... Aapko dusra sher achcha laga, jaankar khushi huyi........

Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda hafez....
shukriya Samaeer jee,
Itni acchi tarah se samjhane ke liye.
God Bless You
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Wah mere bhai wah shuru se aakhir tak ek ajeeb masti barkaraar rahi kalam me........aur Makhte ne to aur Mast kar diya. Dil se daad kabool kare apni is peshkash ke liye.
Sajid Bhai salaam o AadaaB!

Aapki hounsla afzai aur daad ka tahe dil se mamnoon huN.....
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sameer saheb aadaab...!

bahut khoob likha hai aapne, tareef ke liye alfaaz kam pad rahe haiN...
behad khoobsurat aur asardaar peshkash...

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

khaas taur par aapke qalaam ka maqta behad pasaNd aaya mujhe...
daad haazir hai qubuul farmaiyega....
likhte rahiye.....
apna khayal rakhiyega....

khuda hafiz....
Vikram Bhai aadaab!

Sahab itni bhi tareef ki haqdaar nahi hai yeh gazal, per aapne dil se tareef kii hai bahut khushi mehsus ho rahi hai......

Aapki daad kabool hia janab......
Khush rahiye.....
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De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi


Sameer jii, hume aapke sabhi ahsaas bahut acche lage, par last wala sher bahut khaas laga, uske jagah agar aap yeh sher bhi post karte to bhi khoob rahta

Sunkar huyi hairani apne hi raqeeb se
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi


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aisi baat hai sameer jee to main bilkul aata rahoonga.............
Arvind Jee aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa yeh to aapka apna pan hia jo aise hounsla de rahe hai aap..........

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very nice sameer ji...
last sher bahut pasand aaya...
Thanks Shipra jee ...... aap bhi koi nayi peshkash kijiye bahut din ho gaye ....

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very nice sameer ji...
last sher bahut pasand aaya...
Thanks Shipra jee........ thanks for nice reply........

Aur kaise hai aap?
Bade dino se aapki koi kalaam nahi aayi.......

jaldi se kuch post kijiye.....
Khush rahiye apna khayaal rakhiye....
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De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

waah sameer bhai kya baat hai..........apne aur apne mehboob ke ishq ka kya acche se bakHan kiya hai apne......waah!!!

ishwar kare sameer ko hichkiyaan dene wali jald se jald hasil ho jaye.


likhte rahiye aur hamme padhne ka mauka dete rahiye....

aapka.


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shukriya Samaeer jee,
Itni acchi tarah se samjhane ke liye.
God Bless You
Apki Dost
Ritu
Thanks again Ritu jee .......

Take care....
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De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

Sameer jii, hume aapke sabhi ahsaas bahut acche lage, par last wala sher bahut khaas laga, uske jagah agar aap yeh sher bhi post karte to bhi khoob rahta

Sunkar huyi hairani apne hi raqeeb se
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

duaoN ke saath
diii
Dii aapko apni post per dekh ker bahut khushi hoti hai.....
Aapko meri likhi yeh gazal pasand aayi mujhe achcha laga... aur bahut khushi bhi ho rahi hai ke aapne jo sher pasand kiye aur apna waqt diyaa.....

Ummid hai aage bhi aap apko pasand aye aisa likhuNga .....

Aap bhi khush rahiye...
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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
Karte hai nazroN se woh salaam kabhi kabhi

Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi
Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi

Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi

Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per
Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi
AADAB
kaise hai aap/.

waah kya baat hai
ab kya kahe?
Alfaaz saath nahi dete
Allah or kamiyab kare
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KHUSH RAHIYE
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE
ALLAH HAFIZ


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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
Karte hai nazroN se woh salaam kabhi kabhi

Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi
Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi

Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi

Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per
Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi

Kya baat hai.. bhai.. tum likhate bhi bada achha ho kabhi kabhi... hahahhaha

achaa laga kafi dino ke baad tumhe padke...sahi tune bana rakhi hai boss tumne..
Good going buddy.. keep up !!


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waah sameer bhai kya baat hai..........apne aur apne mehboob ke ishq ka kya acche se bakHan kiya hai apne......waah!!!

ishwar kare sameer ko hichkiyaan dene wali jald se jald hasil ho jaye.

likhte rahiye aur hamme padhne ka mauka dete rahiye....

aapka.
Secret Bhai AadaaB!

Janaab aapki Hounsla afzai aur duaoN ka bahut bahut shukriyaa.........
Yeh BakHan kya hota hai......... waise maiN samajh gaya huN just joking so don't mind Plz.......

Hmmm hichkiyaan dene wale mile to bahut Bhai per hasil karne ki mujhe bhi jaldi nahi hai per aapki dua Khudaa Kare ke jaldi kabool kare....

Jee janab koshish jari hai bus aap saath banaye rakhiye.....

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Good one khwahish,

yeh khoob raha


De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi



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Aata hai mehboob ka paigham kabhi kabhi
Karte hai nazroN se woh salaam kabhi kabhi

Hota hai mohobbat ka yeh anjaam kabhi kabhi
Rahta dard aksar to aaraam kabhi kabhi

Deedaar e hilaal jo unke ruksaar se hua
Aati hai yaad aaj bhi woh shaam kabhi kabhi

Soyi thi koi tamanna Kwahish ke shaano per
Hone lage the charche sare aam kabhi kabhi

De jaati muskuraahat hichkiyaan Sameer ko
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi



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AADAB
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waah kya baat hai
ab kya kahe?
Alfaaz saath nahi dete
Allah or kamiyab kare
AAMIN

KHUSH RAHIYE
APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE
ALLAH HAFIZ

HanSoni jee AadaaB!

tareef wa hounsla afzai ka tahe dil se shukra guzar huN.......
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.................................
Khush rahiye....
Allah aapko salamat rakhe....
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